What am I supposed to be reading, and where can I find it? Thats all I need to know. Sorry it isn't you it's me. I'm not very bright.

I'm supposed to do the mushy part? Trust me I have horrible writing, probably the worst out of all of us here. I'll think about it but don't expect anything too great.

YEah yeah we never expect nothing great o.o its a fan fic where everyon participates :)

@Thorn go to page um... 67 or so and search for the beginning of the fan fic :D

Thanks! I'll start reading it ASAP!

I'm supposed to do the mushy part? Trust me I have horrible writing, probably the worst out of all of us here. I'll think about it but don't expect anything too great.
TOOO BADDDDD!! your a part of this fc whether its bad or not we will still apreciate your participation!:)

o and HFB i made a list on previous page of all the memers

EDIT: correction :members...

and came back from dinner

Yeah I just copied and pasted that to make the list. Still thinking on the mushy part.

Yup HT is right... ur done for HFB ur gonna write :p we appreciate every little participation ^^ so there, no reason to be afraid :D

"Hinata limped and sat beside him "Naruto-kun?" His silence worried her "NARUTO-KUN!" she hugged him and tears welled her eyes."

I'm supposed to go from there correct?

yep...now please write!!!!!!!! now give it a try!

Yeah me and HT are with ya :D go ahead give it ur best monkey shot :p

LMAO ....yeah get you brain of monekyness i mean be creative!!!arent moneys creative?

course they are.. thats because they are funny, because they make up monkeynesses xD hahaha

HFB hows it going...??

OK OK, I'll write something
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Hinata continued to weep as the one she had loved all her life was motionless in her arms. How could she have let him fight all alone? she thought to herself.
"This is all my fault" Hinata said aloud as she continued to cry
"Please forgive me Naruto, I won't be in the way like this again"

Naruto awakens as Hinata's tears continue to fall upon his forehead
"Hinata this isn't your fault at all." Naruto says slowly as he pants from exhaustion
"Naruto-kun...!?" Hinata says happy to hear his voice as well as puzzled

"If it wasn't for you I wouldn't have been able to fend those guys off, I may have ended up dead, but your presence hear filled me with the power I needed to protect you and me."
Naruto tries to get up but his left arm is scratched up pretty bad.
"Naruto you're bleeding, let me patch you up a bit?" says Hinata
Pulling herbs and various plants up from their roots Hinata finds the right ingredients to treat his wound. All the time, Naruto is in amazement at the beautiful creature in front of him, caring for him so much to try and heal him up before she even thinks about her own wounds.
"Now this may sting a bit Naruto" Hinata tells him as she applies the mixture
"OWWW" exclaims Naruto as the pain causes him to wrap his arms around the closest thing they could find, Hinata.

OK OK, I'll write something
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Hinata continued to weep as the one she had loved all her life was motionless in her arms. How could she have let him fight all alone? she thought to herself.
"This is all my fault" Hinata said aloud as she continued to cry
"Please forgive me Naruto, I won't be in the way like this again"

Naruto awakens as Hinata's tears continue to fall upon his forehead
"Hinata this isn't your fault at all." Naruto says slowly as he pants from exhaustion
"Naruto-kun...!?" Hinata says happy to hear his voice as well as puzzled

"If it wasn't for you I wouldn't have been able to fend those guys off, I may have ended up dead, but your presence hear filled me with the power I needed to protect you and me."
Naruto tries to get up but his left arm is scratched up pretty bad.
"Naruto you're bleeding, let me patch you up a bit?" says Hinata
Pulling herbs and various plants up from their roots Hinata finds the right ingredients to treat his wound. All the time, Naruto is in amazement at the beautiful creature in front of him, caring for him so much to try and heal him up before she even thinks about her own wounds.
"Now this may sting a bit Naruto" Hinata tells him as she applies the mixture
"OWWW" exclaims Naruto as the pain causes him to wrap his arms around the closest thing they could find, Hinata.
LMAO ...creature? is hinata strange?....okay it was totally awesome dont think of your self so bad :)

OMG SEE U RULE!!! THAT WAS EXCELLENT ;__________; oh god how cool :D

amen that.....xD

So whos gonna be next? don't tell me it has to be me :X LOl

make topics about the fanfic...i suggested that...hours ago

Topics about the fan fic eh? ok... so one question where do u want to lead this? to Naruto and Hinata being something right? so right now we have an escapee... from the shinobi group that attacked, that dude is probably gonna go tell the big boss what happened and the big boss is gonna be interested in naruto for sure... am i right? we have to build it from there :)

hm...but naruto owned most of the guards how much minions does the boss have left anyways ?

I do now know... maybe those dungeons were just an outpost :) u gotta think big HT :D and the one left is gonna go for the REAL hideout of the Shinobi... and then he's gonna tell the boss bout it :D

i cant....i think im stuck..O.O

LOL then get urself unstuck HT, its ur turn to write something u know x) hehe so get ready because there is another mushy part next :D, don't make me write it :X

can i pass?

Ok ok i'll write it since ppl don't want to :p heheh u can pass alright but u have to make another post after this one so i can have mor space... remember i'll probly need to double post xD HAHA

okay and what was your name in narutomania?

Well since Kakashi and Shizune are supposed to be out looking for them they could interrupt Naruto and Hinata, before anything really happens and provide some comic relief or something?

hey good idea...or maybe they should spy on them!

Hello everyone i'm back :D my nickname is always Sh4De, and btw i vote SPY ON THEM HAHAHAHAH oh man i got a plot twis in my mindz0r thats gonna be kewl :p

Hello everyone i'm back :D my nickname is always Sh4De, and btw i vote SPY ON THEM HAHAHAHAH oh man i got a plot twis in my mindz0r thats gonna be kewl :p

OVIOUSLYY!!!!!!!!!

o well ill PM you

Meanwhile kakashi and shizune we're arriving at the scene "Did u sense the immense power that faded just minutes ago?" Shizune asked kakashi who nodded in reply "Yes i did... and more than that..." they both went silent and reach at where the fight had occurred... Naruto was laying right beside Hinata... Kakashi stopped just in time, and so did Shizune... they were hidden but could see the two teenagers clearly "Oooohhh this is interesting..." Kakashi said with a smile on his face, "I think we should go help them..." she replied at him, "No, let's see how they do... or better, what they do" Kakashi let out a muffled laugh...

Hinata blushed instantly as Naruto pushed himself against her just like a baby needing his mother and almost sat, Naruto opened his eyes and notice he had is face almost glued to Hinata face, that was completely red and speechless, "She feels so warm... and why is she blushing? could it be?" Naruto thought to himself and let go of her laying himself on the ground again, "I-I'm sorry Hinata" he said with a little embarassment... "It's.. it's alright.. Naruto-kun, are you ok?" Hinata asked him clearly embarassed... Naruto sat in front of her and replied "yes I'm okay... you don't need to blush you know", she was wide mouthed "could he have understood what i feel?" she thought to herself...

Okay since I havent been here in like forever whats the topic? Or are we just talking eh?

Yo Ninja :) for now we are talking about the group fan fic :D as u can see it started around page 66,67 or 68 and we've been making it until now :) my latest entry is right above ur post, anyways... its a group fan fic and everyone can try their best at it :D

she was apalled ...but within her it felt good.did naruto finally realize she love him? she gazed up at naruto . Naruto faught all his heart on the attackers he was confident in everything he does ,he never gives up! i cant beleive everyone else like sasuke-kun but naruto is the cool one. No!!! naruto likes sakura not me!!He likes sakura!!! Hinata had an uncomfortable look. "um hinata are you okay?" ...hinata turning into a tomatoe - it was a habit she couldnt breack. "um yes N-naruto-kun im f-fine" .

*crakle* someone stepped on a twig and it snap in half. Naruto automatically look behind him and studied it before saying " who's there?" . A moment leter Naruto went to check behind the bush .."Shizune??? why are you here?? " . She smile suspiciously . Kakashi jumped down the tree next to shizune ," argh this would have been perfect it you didnt ruin it!!!... " hey its natural!!! what do you want
a janitor to clean up all the scraps at night?" . Naruto and hinata were pissed at how immature kakashi and shizune are.....

sorry for the waiting shady

No problem HT ^^ but i have one request, try to make more clear who is talking, i got confused in the end with the janitor stuff xDDD but u made me lol along the chapter hahah :D

No problem HT ^^ but i have one request, try to make more clear who is talking, i got confused in the end with the janitor stuff xDDD but u made me lol along the chapter hahah :D
you know who ruined the whole spy thing write so of course kakashi started the argument and of corse he wouldnt be replying to himself...O.O

OHHHHH I understood now hahah xDD ok ok u've made ur point i'm used to saying always who is talking thats why :p hehe i'll continue it in a while or does anybody want to give it a try? :)

hi.... sorry ive been out for a while can someone re-inform me about whats goin on please?

Maybe the "awesome shadow"?


@ GOTDS- o hey!read from where you left offf !! but here : if you go to page 66 that is what we are currently doing

Yup HT already told everything we are writing a group fan fic :D read it from page 66 till HT's last post then u can continue from there ^^

hm....seems like me you and diane puts the most effort into this fc but all the other members are good too

Mostly because we are the ones that are most of the time online thats why we post more often updates of the fan fic :) but still the contributions of others were excellent indeed :D i loved shadow's contributions

exactly and also HFB's participation ^-^

ppl gotta start being more alive in this FC most of the time i'ts empty maybe i'ts because its a weekday i dunno i wanted someone to continue where HT left off ;_;

EDIT: ok i was left here all alone :p LOL! oh well i'm gonna go to bed its 4:30 AM :) have a good day everyone :D i'll see ya tomorrow

so now that naruto fought off the other shinobi and both shizune and kakashi have found them...now wut? do they just return to their training tomorrow?haha

Lol I love the story so far.It's hilarious^^

shizune did some healing to the more major wounds and complimented hinata on her use of first aid... "perhaps we shld train u more in medical jutsus hinata....u seem to have a skill for it.."

together naruto and hinata told kakashi and shizune what had happened... when they returned to knonoha, they immediately reported to tsunade afterwhich, tsunade treated naruto and hinata in the hospital and made them stay for 2 days there.. they even shared the same hospital room together!

tsunade said, "dont think just cos u were attacked means that i forgot about ur mission... u will continue training as soon as u are both healed.. however, u will remain within konoha until we are certain the enemy is completely eradicated!"


Comments -
- u guys just call me diane okie? hehe i want to remove the cheeze part but its kinda almost impossible to get that amt of points... hehe
- lets leave out some fight scenes between naruto and hinata and concentrate on their training and love story?
- perhaps we shld involved hizashi and neji in the eradicating of the enemy part?
- also how bout a mission btw kakashi and shizune? hehe

Now being fully recovered from their injuries, Naruto and Hinata had to continue their rigorous training with the scrolls. Since they were not allowed to leave the village, they now had to find a new place to train.
"So Hinata, it seems like we're stuck in Konoha and we need a place to train, got any ideas?" Naruto said with a wide grin upon his face.
"I know of a little spot in Konoha that is nice and quiet, if thats ok with you Naruto-kun?" Hinata said while looking at the floor.
"Great idea, it's good have a calm place to train, so which direction?"
"That way." said hinata pointing North.
"Ok then lets GO!" exclaimed Naruto as he grabbed Hinata by the wrist and pulled her along.
In a sense Hinata wanted Naruto to let go of her as her wrist was starting to feel sore, but she realized that this was the second time in less than a week that she got to feel the soft touch of Naruto's hands, so she let him drag her away.
"Naruto-kun we're here so..."
"Wow this place is amazing Hinata, nice little lake over here to go swimming. Some trees with all types of food on them! You're the coolest Hinata!"
"Gomenasai Naruto-kun, I come here when i'm not training with.."
"This lake reminds me of that one mission where we looked for that bug, and some really beautiful girl appeared out of the water this one night!"
"Yes I remember that mission Naruto." Hinata said as she blushed knowing that Naruto was actually talking about her, even giving out a little chuckle.
"Hey what's so funny? Did I miss something?"
"Oh nothing, guess it's time for us to get to our training now right?"
"Yeah guess you're right, so what's next on the list?"
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OK I got nothing else, I'm was trying to figure out what should be on the list, but just can't really think of anything. I need your help Diane

i like that one HFB! bringing it back to when naruto saw hinata on the water! lol

kk here it goes!

as it turns out, next on the list was something foreign to both of them... (and to me! haha)
mini grass/bush fires...
so they began to mould their chakras and practice as per the scroll indicated...
both of them got minor burns but they continued throughout the day.. furthermore, this time they brought their sleeping bags and some stores to last a week or so... it was too much of a hassle to travel home and back again, even though they were within their village.

after the 2nd day of continuous training naruto was starting to get egitated cos he wasnt quite getting the hang of things..

he decided to go for a swim and stripped to his boxers. Hinata flushed immediately and turned away.. but to naruto, there was nothing wrong and he went in front of hinata repeatedly as she tried each time to turn away, asking whats wrong?

he gave up after abit and jumped into the lake! he yelled, "Hinata! the water is great! u shld try too! abit of relaxation never hurt anyone!"

though hesitant she thought, "heck! its not everyday i can swim with naruto!" so she went behind a bush and changed into her one-piece swimsuit...

together they swam around and squirted water at each other and talked about simple day to day stuff... (they aren't that close yet) hinata felt her shyness slowly melt away with more time that she spent with naruto.. naruto realized that she was able to calm him down so easily, just by the sound of her voice naruto will feel calm and at ease...

as the sun set, they dried off and sat in front of a fire for dinner... after a nice simple meal, they talked abit and naruto drifted off to sleep.

hinata stayed awake and watched him sleep.. she realized that naruto reminded her of something. the water training!

she had put that off due to the lack of a lake and here she was! just next to a lake! she had to practice her gentle fist and improve on a newer style that she had to learn from the hyuuga clan.

she wore her "water training attire" shorts and a sports bra.. (haha show some skin!)

and started, on and on she went, blocking aside the time and naruto...


naruto awoke... blinking at the twinkling stars... mmmmm.... where's hinata? he wondered..

he heard faint splashings and decided to investigate... there under the moonlight.. he saw his beautiful girl once more.. seemingly glilding and dancing on top of the water.. he gazed in awe and wanted to find out who this girl was... it must have been fate that he could lay eyes upon her once more.. after all these years!

he walked over to the water edge and called out, "ano.........."

the girl got a shock and slipped onto the water, as she suddenly lost her chakra control she dropped into the lake..

naruto hurriedly ran across and reached in his hand to drag out the beautiful girl.... just nice the moonlight appeared thru the clouds and naruto looked into the beautiful blushing pale face of hinata....

naruto was stunned! "i never realized that hinata was always this beautiful... how could i have been such a fool to never see it??" he asked himself...

hinata was so flulstered as she shivered and scrambled out of naruto's arms.. she realized just how little clothes she was wearing and was immediately embarresed and tried to cover her bare parts with her arms...

naruto, took off his jacket and passed it her.. "here u go, u are breaking out in goose bumps. let's go back and get a fire going for u to warm up...."

Shad0w Calls Nexties!!! But Will Update Much Later In The Day Cuz He Has To Work For 8 Hours!!!! Actually If Someone Wants To Continue For Me That's Okay!! But I Want Some Fluff!!

Edit:

And then kakashi said, "ZOMG MAH PANTS IS ON FIRE!!!" Causing Shizune to smack him.
"stfu noob."



:D

GOOD EVENIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING SHADY IS BACKY and is loling like hell about the story hahah XDDD shadow wants nexties? i guess u can have nexties but for 8 hours :X i'll try to hold on till now and not start writing it again xD hahah

EDIT: And again i feel alone ;______________;

your not alone i was reading the fic and ill be right back to save everything on MS word

I'm not alone :O shall it be know that we shall fight till the end of our days, and that we will continue to write our fan fic :D hahah xDDD hows it going HT :)?

erm...im still working on it and i have to go through all pages again ..>____<

Oh but its cool to read it after u've put it all together :D the last ppl who wrote were excellent hehe, mushy parts rule :D hehe i want them to be dating... but in the real series :/

yep that would be fantastic ......but what if the creator ...like doesnt want to finish naruto there will be a suz0rz replacment X_______X

He will finish naruto for sure :) he loves that series, its his first one... he'd never stop doing it in the bitter half :/, probably u'll have naruto around for 2 years more or so :) and the anime too ^^ u'll see hehe, and when Kishimoto finished Naruto, he'll probably write a chapter or two about what happened after it all ended... if Naruto lives he may marry Hinata :D

he may do season 2...xD

and hey if you wanna go to NM : http://www.narutomania.com/forums/showthread.php?t=28571&page=6554 its a spm thread

ok thx :D i'll look into it in a while :) for now i'm searching for a key :o

a key??? .....okies then

Yeah its a key to a door where my bycicle is stashed :S damn i cant find it... anyways HT i'll brb

haha.........just kick open the door

Hey what's up guys, so the fic looks good, I'd like to help update it, but like Shad0w I have to be at work for 8 hours. I'll check in from time to time if I get the chance though.

alrightie HFB do whatever you want your the current owner anyways xD ^-^

I guess I am kinda the owner, since I haven't seen HKA here in foreverI guess we'll need new co-owners.

uh oh...coup d'etat lol

I guess I am kinda the owner, since I haven't seen HKA here in foreverI guess we'll need new co-owners.
ill be a co-owner *puppy eyes*

if you're looking for more than one new co-owner, i'm down

Hellloooooo everyone sorry for my delay -.- oh well, i managed to open the door :D and i'm up for some fan fic writting muahaha maybe i'll continue where HT left off :D (has for the co-owner thing, i do not apply because i've been here for a week only, and about 3 days only in this FC)

Hinata gently took his jacket and put it on as they were walking, "It smells just like him..." she thought to herself, Naruto suddendly put an arm around her when they reached the sleeping bags and looked at her with a kind look on his face "Wait here, i'll get the fire started", Hinata just nodded in reply and sat on the ground shivering quite a bit... Naruto gathered some logs in front of the sleeping bags "So, now I will show you how great i am by managing a fire using what we've been trying to learn" He said with a grin on his face, "N-Naruto-Kun..." Hinata replied with a gentle smile,

EDIT: HOLY CRAP TRIPLE POST SORRY SORRY SORRY ;_______________;

"Ne ne, watch" he simply put it and concentrated, he started to perform the seals and the two of them were waiting for it to happen, suddendly Naruto's shirt starts to burn "Ano sa, whats that smell?" He asked Hinata "Naruto-kun! you shirt!", "Huh? AHHHHHH" Naruto panicked (like he always does :p) and went to the lake to put out the fire, he came back and sat... "NOW I WILL DO IT, STUPID LOGS CATCH FIRE, NOW!" he said out loud and concentrated more... performed the seals and a large fire errupted from the logs, surprising Naruto whose face got a bit blackened, "See I told you I'd do it.." Naruto said scratching is head a bit embarassed... "Naruto-kun... ur all dirty" Hinata said with a giggle and approached Naruto with a hankie (spelling? xD) and cleaned his face gently

Ohh I really want to continue this, but I'm at work so I can't type much. Have Naruto go back into town to get some new clothes and have him be interrupted by Neji or something. Whatever you want to do ssince its up to you.

Don't worry about the triple post, admins barely visit this section anymore if they ever do, but try not to do it anymore.

wah!!! HFB you didnt awnser my question..xD

i see new parts of the fan fic !

Yeah HT ^^ dunno if u've read the other peoples ones :p i've added my own :) i'm thinking of a good play off in the town if they two go there something real funny, ph34r my 3v1l M1nd ^^ or not :p

3rm...! 5h411 f0110w n07

HT its time for you to continue the fan fic :p, i've already did right now so its not my turn ^^

can i please do later....there's a problom with my pc and i dont want to explain...xD ill do it after dinner

Ok HT go for it hhehe something smells good around here muahah ^^ anyways i just saw ur list.. so Sh4de - gimme shade when i need it? LOOOOOOOOOL! oh god :P Hinata_Tropical - gimme Hinata when i need her *rolls eyes* XD HAHAH, just kidding ^^, well i'd like to see where this group fan fic is going :) then we gotta post it up over at the fan fic section don't forget ^^, this is really getting interesting :D

ill also post it up on NM maybe

go ahead let it be know that we, the official NARUHINA FC have done a kick ass and funny group Fan fic ^^, i'm gonna go have dinner i'll brb for a while

OKAY!!!!!! c ya after dinner

I'm backy :), the dinner felt gooooood hehe, too bad i'm still sore from bike riding, anyways what time is it there? oO

um....dunno

U don't know? XDDDDDD llolol then who should know? :p when are u going to have dinner ?

i dont know either

Oh well, i'll wait for the next update on this ^^ i wanna read the fan fic :D hehe, btw does anyone have any new fan fics oooorrr fan art of NaruHina? or just Hina?

okay then....i still cant yet even though i already had dinner..>.< i thought so...
...i just have two small peices of chicken and bean sprouts with a bit of rice.

Read the one in my spoiler if you havent already.

Read the one in my spoiler if you havent already.
me??

and can i please be a co-owner i asked you 2 times already *puppy eyes*

U ate just that? HT u gotta feed urself o.o, that ain't enough... nearly :p, anyways i'll be waiting for ur new contribution, and i'll be waitinf for shadows and HFB contribution when they come back from work, shouldn't be long now :p hehe

U ate just that? HT u gotta feed urself o.o, that ain't enough... nearly :p, anyways i'll be waiting for ur new contribution, and i'll be waitinf for shadows and HFB contribution when they come back from work, shouldn't be long now :p hehe
i dont eat much...ill probably take a few baby cookies later ..O.O

Oh sry HT I already named the new co-owners in my first post, but don't be mad @ me.

Oh sry HT I already named the new co-owners in my first post, but don't be mad @ me.
nah i wont be...i will wait *pouts*


o and i had one chiken wing

I was hoping you would look though, because you are one of the new co-owners!!!

I was hoping you would look though, because you are one of the new co-owners!!!
w00tness!!!!!!!!!!!!i look .......for some reason i advise you you should the list more clear by seperating the co-owners away from the memebers : maybe split with a line because it's really hard to see the seperation..O.O

and thx HFB...:) it was my dream...xD

EDIT: shady hows your continuation going there?

OK I'll make sure to do that. I'm glad that I could fulfill your dream, makes me happy. You deserved it since you've been a member for a while and are very active.

Same reason for Diane being a co-owner too.

Shad0w is co-owner because he has been here almost as long as me and is now a good friend of mine, plus he has his amazing fanfic he is writing.

ALSO TO ALL MEMBERS READ THE FIRST PARAGRAPH OF MY FIRST POST TO PARTICIPATE IN A LITTLE EVENT I WOULD LIKE TO HAPPEN.

um let me read...O.O too

is it a fanart contest ..im not good at gfx

EDIT: i might try it..but ill probably fail..xD

Yeah it is, since we don't have a banner really I was hoping this would be a more interesting way of getting one rather than just requesting one.

Yey! can i try the banner thingy once i get my photoshop CS? i think that upload and limit of the boards as been fixed i'm gonna do a little test ok? btw HT i haven't wrote anything, i want another person to go on :), but CONGRATS :D u 1 of the new co-owners :) very cool hehehe i'll be sure to serve u all ncely ^^ and i'll be sure to also read the fan fic on ur spoilers thingy HFB ^^ ok lets do the test

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EDIT: IT WORKS OH YEAAAAAAAAAAAH NO MORE DOUBLE POSTS!!!!!!!!!!

Good to see the problem is fixed. Of course you can participate in the banner contest. When do u think you'll get your Photoshop CS?

I'd say after tomorrow ^^ hehe i'm gonna nag my dad "DAAAAD WHERE THE HELL IS THE CD THAT HAS PHOTOSHOP CS?!" lolol ^^ but yeah probably after tomorrow hehe, anyways one question when u say a banner ur talking about the thing u put on ur sig right? like that Co-owner image sig u have? or another type of banner?

I'm talking about the thing u have in your sig that has the NaruHina FC sign in it. Something along those lines. If you would like to make things like the Co-owner thing in my sig that would be great too.

hey i made it!!!!

its v1 if you dont like the text where owner the whole word doesnt show i could fix that

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3998/naruhinafcownervps6.jpg
and um..there will be a border around it so : imagine it already has a pink border ...i chose the brush to be pink because it was love colour heehee

Ok HT beat me to it, they are better than mine, i think o.o well i'll try my best either way ^^ once i have CS of couse heheh

Ok HT beat me to it, they are better than mine, i think o.o well i'll try my best either way ^^ once i have CS of couse heheh
no im not good..i did the basics i just learned ........o and i will be downloading new brushes so i can make better ones theres barely any good stocks i stole it from HKA :D

EDIT: atually guys im doing a v2 now its doesnt work over co-owner the text runs over the stock wich ish bad

Ok i'm thinking of doing a basic banner... and if you guys like it and if it gets chosen to be the banner then i will make it with Co-owner, member, Owner stuff wriiten in it... i'll just have to think of a good pic to do it ^^ but i think i got one already hehe now i just need the color scheme and the brushes.. and photoshop CS -.-

atually you can have many...so people would have more options!

HT is right, that could be a plausible possibility :) and that would encourage ppl to make good enough banners for the FC too :D

retards think best!

I dunno where u got the idea that u're a retard LOL i don't seem, sound, look like a retard to me but oh well if u think u are one :p, to me ur just HT, a friend that someday will give me hinata muahaha :D

Wait woah woah wait woah woah!! NEW CO-OWNER(S)?! What aboot me?! I'm teh toughest tough co-owner that ever thoughed!

Owner:
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9395/naruhinafcownav2fn3.jpg


Co-owner : http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/8489/naruhinafccoownav2ht1.jpg


Member:
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7711/naruhinafcmembav2pu0.jpg
heehee wat you think? its the results

@shadow-you are teh co-owner ...and your not the best i am!!
@shady - um i am teh retard

Wanna fight for the title of most awesome co-owner? I'd win, I actually can do a martial art clost to juken. :D

Wanna fight for the title of most awesome co-owner? I'd win, I actually can do a martial art clost to juken. :D
UHUH ..so what do you think about my ugly banners?
i will fight...and guess what? you will lose

Your banners aren't ugly,

And i will win, I have 11 years of tae kwan do training, plus what i've tought myself of my faux juken

Shadow is an elite co-owner and... DIDNT U WANT TO MAKE A FLUFF PART? then carry on from where the fan fic left it self ^^ i think it was a double post made by me xD LOL

Your banners aren't ugly,

And i will win, I have 11 years of tae kwan do training, plus what i've tought myself of my faux juken
you mean physically ?? *glomps*

all right all right hold on to your flaming chariot of destruction...I'll write up some fluffy fluff

go for it...LOSER ...j/k

We're right where hinata was brushing off naruto's face right?

correction "blushing"

....xD

I'm so confused....I don't know where it left off.......

I'll take next fluff...the 3rd naruto game beckons

I'm so confused....I don't know where it left off.......

I'll take next fluff...the 3rd naruto game beckons
yeah brushing//////////

here:

Hinata gently took his jacket and put it on as they were walking, "It smells just like him..." she thought to herself, Naruto suddendly put an arm around her when they reached the sleeping bags and looked at her with a kind look on his face "Wait here, i'll get the fire started", Hinata just nodded in reply and sat on the ground shivering quite a bit... Naruto gathered some logs in front of the sleeping bags "So, now I will show you how great i am by managing a fire using what we've been trying to learn" He said with a grin on his face, "N-Naruto-Kun..." Hinata replied with a gentle smile,
"Ne ne, watch" he simply put it and concentrated, he started to perform the seals and the two of them were waiting for it to happen, suddendly Naruto's shirt starts to burn "Ano sa, whats that smell?" He asked Hinata "Naruto-kun! you shirt!", "Huh? AHHHHHH" Naruto panicked (like he always does ) and went to the lake to put out the fire, he came back and sat... "NOW I WILL DO IT, STUPID LOGS CATCH FIRE, NOW!" he said out loud and concentrated more... performed the seals and a large fire errupted from the logs, surprising Naruto whose face got a bit blackened, "See I told you I'd do it.." Naruto said scratching is head a bit embarassed... "Naruto-kun... ur all dirty" Hinata said with a giggle and approached Naruto with a hankie (spelling? xD) and cleaned his face gently
-To be continued-

ee eye ee eye oh!!

okay, I'll continue, then i'll go, but first i gotta take care of the trash...

OH god... and here i thought shadow wasn't a thrash man ahhaha XDD i'm kidding :p now carry on where i left :D do an excellent job as u always do ^^ btw i'm gonna read ur fan fic later hehe

OH god... and here i thought shadow wasn't a thrash man ahhaha XDD i'm kidding :p now carry on where i left :D do an excellent job as u always do ^^ btw i'm gonna read ur fan fic later hehe
my dad said his fanfic sucx ass :mad: he was seeing wat i was doing on the pc...

...dadies mean

Holy shiznit o.o ur dad sure is mean :o, u were reading shadows fan fic? cool! how is it? (ur opinion not ur dads :p) and btw... what does ur dad know bout Naruto anyway? :p

Holy shiznit o.o ur dad sure is mean :o, u were reading shadows fan fic? cool! how is it? (ur opinion not ur dads :p) and btw... what does ur dad know bout Naruto anyway? :p

stupid japanese creations O.O LMFAO

he even said ours arent so good either..xD but he said my writing improved i tiny tiny bit..:mad: he should think for the rest too!

LOOOOOOOOL! at least he isn't like most of the ppl who call anime, "chinese cartoons" ROTFFFFLLL oh well u can't teach an oldie to think like a youngster we love anime, obviously ur dad doesn't... oh well ON WITH THE FAN FIC :D

ZOH MY GOD!!!

NEXTIES!!!:

As the girl touched the hankie to Naruto's face, he felt a chill go up and down his back. He hadnt remembered feeling like this about ANYONE before this girl. Not even Sakura. Naruto gulped as the girl cleaned his face. Noting the odd demeanor in the boy, Hinata gave him a slight smile. The kind of smile that would melt any mans heart in an instant. Naruto's mouth was agape. How could he not have noticed this beautiful girl all this time? It baffled him. He then decided that he was an ignorant bastard.

"Ano...are you okay Naruto??"
"GAK!!" He snapped back into reality. "Y-Yeah!" He stammered "Hunky and dory!!" Hinata chuckled.
"You always make me laugh Naruto-kun." She said, weilding that deadly smile. "You always make everything better." Naruto was on the verge of crying from the cuteness that eminated from the girl. In order not to give anything away to the prodding hyuuga eyes, he turned away.
"Nah," He said, trying to be cool, "I always screw up, I'm immature and can't look at the world in a grown up way." He said, almost sulking.
"That's why you always make things better Naruto..." she said twiddling her fingers. "You always believe that everything will turn out all right, even if things seem hopeless...and you're not afraid to be yourself...I respect that...a lot." Naruto gulped again. A long and very awkward silence followed.

Hinata looked at the boy next to her. His ice blue eyes were staring intently in front of him. She smiled, At least I get to be with him... Suddenly, as if of it's on voilition, Hinata's body started to move forward, towards the boy. I've gotta do it... she said as if possessed, If he doesnt feel the same way, so be it...I just don't want to have any regrets. She was about to peck him on the cheek, when suddenly he turned his head.

"Neh, HinmmmPPHHHH!!?" His sentence was cut off as their lips met.



Hehe, who wants it?

ROTFL OH MAN SHADOW UR DA MAN :D hahahaha oh man... cough cough that was cooooooooooooool LOOOOOOL who wants nexts? if anyone doesnt want it i'll take it muahaha :D

Take it since i dont have a chance to.

Take it since i dont have a chance to.
HFB i completed the tags...its on the previous page..xD

yeah if you have an idea what to right so it cos i still have to think..its getting pretty late that's why

Well i'm still at work for about another hour so you have plenty of time.

okay..........xD

...shadow are you gonna make tags for the fc too?

"Neh, HinmmmPPHHHH!!?" His sentence was cut off as their lips met. Kakashi was taking a late night walk and was passing by the field they were in, he sensed ppl and decided to go look "WHAAAAA..." kakashi said out aloud but closed his mouth with his hands before he could scare the two of them, "Oh... Naruto i see u have a hand for these type of things" Kakashi whispered to himself with a smile on his face and decided to spy on them, again... Hinata was wide-eyed and so was Naruto... Oh no... what have i done? Hinata thought to herself, the kiss only lasted for a few moments longer until Hinata broke it "I-I'm sorry N-Naruto-kun", Naruto was speechless and didn't say a word No one ever kissed me before... she is the first, and I feel wierd he thought to himself, the girl stood up, still wearing his jacket, and misunderstood Naruto's silence for him being angry, since she has low self-esteem she thought that Naruto didn't like her, nor the kiss ... "I-I'm really sorry" as she said this she ran away from the lake and their camp site "Oi, Hinata WAIT!" Naruto shouted but she was already out of view...

Naruto decided to stay and think of what had happened "Why did she react like that? did i do something wrong? I DON'T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING!" he said to apparently no one... and a frown made itself to his face...
Poor Naruto... I've seen that happen before with other ppl Kakashi thought and all his enthusiasm was apparently lost... should i go there and make him feel better? nah, he has to learn... he is no longer a child, he will eventually understand what love is... Kakashi decided and left his spot, Naruto noticed someone but didn't really care at that time "Well I guess I'll pack things up and start looking for her, I need to understand why she did it and what is happening... and what the hell is this wierd feeling i'm having!" as he said this Naruto packed the jutsus scrolls and the two sleeping bags... "God this is heavy... but it isn't gonna stop me! Uryaryaryaryarya" Naruto said and started running full speed looking like a pack mule. And so he started looking for her...


NEXTIES?! :D hope everyone liked it

good loving it!!!!!!!!!!

Hehehe glad u liked it :D so whos gonna take the next one? HFB or Shadow again? huh uh? i wanna read more ;_;

what took so long for somone to post?

I am reading the entire fan fic i just finished hehe to see how it was :D its getting very cool :) sorry HT i didn't answer earlier... btw if u have more ideas about some other banners, make them, u can make several ^^

HFB .has he put the banners on the first page???

Zoh my god!! I'm going to bed, nice addtion shade :D

good night shadow.......!!!

lol this is why i've only made two or three contributions to the fic, every1 else's are pretty good

Zoh my god!! I'm going to bed, nice addtion shade :D

Thx ^^ i tried my best anyways, tomorrow u are gonna make another part hehe :DD and today maybe HFB will do it

erm....gtg .....bye....i will promise to write tommorow...-_____-

Oki, cya tomorrow HT have a good night (if ur going to sleep) lolol i'll wait for HFB to see if he writes something

EDIT: ROKU why don't u try :S its a group fan fic, skillz don't matter here :p only the effort of the members :)

i will, i'm workin on some new banners right now

yeah i made co-owner! promoted! lol thanks HFB!

yeah! i wanna continue! actually right a comment is that i think it wld have been more cool if naruto made the first move to kiss hinata though... hehe anyway here's my continuation!! i'm loving this fan fic!

Cont'd

Kakashi silently left to tell Shizune what he had witnessed... with all his heart he hoped that baka naruto wld grow some brains and sensitivity and make this alright with hinata.. she was just to frail to take a backfire and rejection...

Hinata_
As she ran thru the woods, she was crying... tears flowed endlessly down her cheeks as she scolded herself mentally for making a move on naruto.. "i should have known nothing good wld come outta it! naruto-kun doesnt think of me that way! he likes sakura!" sob sob sob

Suddenly, hinata tripped over a root and feel on her hands and knees... a slight pain shot up her ankle and she cried harder... "i'm such a clumsy fool! no wonder naruto-kun will never b impressed by me..... i hope he doesnt find me..... i just wanna leave and hide my face from him forever.. i hope he forgets about what happens..." sob sob sob....

Hinata dragged herself to a tree and propped herself against it...

Unfortunately, in no time at all she heard rustling and foot steps..

Naruto appeared panting and dumped all the things onto the floor... "hinata.........." He noticed her tears and his heart ached with the sudden realization that he was the cause of those tears...

"Hinata... i'm sorry........ i'm sorry for making u cry..... i was just surprised"

Hinata replied tearfully, "i'm sorry too naruto-kun... i - i -i... didnt mean for it to happen... it was an accident.. .please forget about it.... it was just an accident..." She Lied to him.... hoping that things wld just return to normal..

Upon hearing this, naruto's heart sank... he was shocked to realize that what hinata said actually pained him.. more than any other words had hurt him before....

"OH...." he replied...

"lets turn in for the night hinata... perhaps some rest will make u feel better....and if u want, we can go home 2mor too." (he's still dense..... haha)

Fogetting about her hurt ankle, hinata pushed herself up and when pressure was applied on her ankle, she shrieked in pain and her legs gave out on her...

naruto caught her around her waist just in time and pulled her up against him... "you're hurt!" we best treat it!"

he swept hinata off her feet and carried her to a nearby clearing... gently he laid her down and asked her to wait.. he ran back and grapped all the things and brougt them to a clearing.. making a fire (correctly this time), he put some water to boil to make a hot drink..

he took hinata's ankle and gently massaged and rotated it... he than bound her ankle with cloth tightly...

Looking at hinata, naruto asked, "what's wrong? why did u run off?"

Aigh roku, i'm off to bed 4 AM here and i need to get up early tomorrow to fix my computer... or better take it to the store :p hehehe, anyways have a good night, and do try to continue where i left in the fan fic :D hehe, cya tomorrowz ^^

EDIT: continued where diane left XD hahhaa

i shall try to complete this part.. a bit stumped on how they should work things out...

Continues where i left off (break up the post i think that was kinda long.. hehe)

"i was embarressed....i didnt want u to think badly of me for kissing u.......it was by accident.... u turned unexpectedly..."

"Hinata.... please dont b embarressed with me.... there's no need for that.... i - i - i... was just shocked... i never got kissed bby anyone before..."

as hinata kept quiet.. naruto pressed on with a change of suject.. "so it was u the other time in the water as well.... u looked really nice hinata.... u looked... like an angel...." He met her eyes and his heart thumped faster... by instinct his hand just moved out to touch hers... "the warmth of ur hand..... its something i've never felt before hinata....... why.. why does it feel so nice just to hold ur hand? why do i feel so happy just being with u? why do u make me feel so calm and at ease? i dont understand hinata-chan.....i feel like i always wanna be with u, always want to feel that kinda warmth as never b4 have i felt something so warm yet nice in my heart before..."

naruto looked so lost that hinata's heart went out to him.... " i think it's because u've never felt love naruto-kun...." This pierced naruto's heart... and tears of pain and loneliess spilled out of his baby blue eyes... (haha!)

hinata pulled him to lie his head on her lap as he cried.... "u cry all u want naruto-kun...." as she stroked his head and comforted him as he cried...



ok....i've got writer's block again..... anyone else wanna cover some conversation between them... we need something, some personal talking etc to bond them even closer i think... before any intense romance develops between them....

@diane - continue with naruto suddenly becoming slightly less dense xD

erm... i edited that part already i think... read thru once more and give me ideas about what they shld converse about.. i'm stumped!

@diane - almost finished with the banners i'm working on, then i'll come up with something for the fan fic

ok.. shall continue abit more...
as hinata stroked naruto she felt so hurt.... "to think that though we are like this... i know he wont wanna b with me... sigh... i wish he loved me.... i wish he would like to b with me..."

in the comfort of hinata's arms.... naruto though upset was feeling for the first time, something like a form of love..
he turned in hinata's lap to look up at her... "hinata....." he spoke with such thick emotion in his voice...
"tell me more about yourself..... tell me about u hinata... i wanna know more about u...."

hinata was stunned.. no one wanted to know bout her.. and here, the guy she was admiring her whole life, was asking her... the question brought about painful and hurting memories.. but she opened her soul to naruto.. telling him about her family and her pain.....all the years growing up...

when she was done.. she asked naruto, "how about u? what about ur parents?"

"erm... i dont know hinata.... no one tells me anything bout them..."

hinata's heart went out to him, and she reached out and touched his arm... "dont worry...i'm sure u will know one day..."

naruto felt so nice upon hearing that.... she sounded so assuring and soothing that she just cast all his pain aside... she was making her way into his heart, and he didnt want that to ever stop... he wanted to spend more time with her...
"neh hinata...... would u like to go the the summer festival in konoha with me on saturday?"


EDIT: oooooo nice banners! i like!

EDIT AGAIN: how bout a love confession or something under the fireworks during the festival??

oooooo nice banners! i like!
lol thanks diane XD

Hey rokudaime, the banners arent bad, but they look a little squished.

If you're using PS, try holding shift while you're transforming the stock. :D

Edit: I'd like to take the festivle...but i'm leaving for a good nine hours....and this FC has become so hoppin lately...

Edit: Also, rokudaime, try messing around with the text. The text doesnt blend well...if you're using PS try selecting the layer where the text is, right click, blending options, the just mess around untill it looks good

Good morning everyone :D hows it going? holy crap o.o lots of the fan fic to read i'm gonna start right away... and may i add that the chapters are very cool :D hehehe

Wait, never mind. Someone take the fair, I'm hanging out with my girlfriend tonight...sorry guys/gals, girlfriend over fanfic

Oh yeah that ur right my friend :) girlfriend and reall life stuff surely goes first than the fan fic :) thats obvious hehe, i'll continue it later :D

w00tang :D

Ok so i'm gonna continue the fan fic :D hehe i'm having a guud vibe i think o.o LOL XD anyways here goes

Naruto's proposal surprised Hinata...Is he asking me out on a date? she thought to herself, hope refilling her soul.. "Ano... I think i'm free on Saturday, so I think we can go N-Naruto-kun" Hinata replied blushing a bit more. Naruto's face filled with joy with her answer, Woohoo, i'm gonna spend some more time with her i want to know her a bit better... maybe then i'll understand what i feel, maybe it is love He thought to himself and still in Hinata's lap he shouted "Woohooooooo", Hinata clearly noticed that he was happy with her reply but still is victory shout out of no where surprised her and gave her a small scare, "Ne ne, Hinata-chan gomen ne, I didn't mean to scare you..." Naruto said and look up to her face, her hair was movingly softly in the wind like midnight coloured waves... she blushed a bit as their eyes met and Naruto said like a whisper "Hinata... I love you hair, it goes well with ur eyes" she blushed even more at his comment and as he saw her blushing, she moved his hand up and touch her face and hair, again he felt the warmth he had never felt before "You really look like u have a fever Hinata..." he said with a teasing tone in his voice and a smile that never left his face.

I do have a fever... a fever for you Naruto-kun, a fever that lasted 2.5 years and still makes me not act normally when you are around... but still lightens my life... Hinata thought to herself as Naruto touched her hair and face, Hinata grabbed Naruto's hand and said "Naruto-kun, Sh-shall we go? we have to get up early tomorrow, for the festival", Naruto replied and got up "Hai! let's pack our things, again, and go our houses... we'll finish the damn scrolls later, we're half finished anyway!" as with that said he started packing everything again "But N-Naruto-kun... won't Tsunade-sama be mad?" she asked a bit worried, and a grin filled Naruto's face "If her tastes haven't changed... a special chocolate that i know may work and she won't be mad, don't worry" (There is an episode where Tsunade only lets Naruto go on a mission because he used a secret... a special chocolate bar that Tsunade apparently loved :p) Hinata nodded and they exited the woods...

They both reached the Hyuuga manor and it was time for Hinata to say goodbye, "Oi, Hinata.. don't forget ur sleeping bag!" he said and gave her the sleeping bag "Arigatou Gozaimasu" Hinata replied with a smile, and Naruto grinned wildly, he approached her and gave her a kiss on the check, she blushed instantly and Naruto just felt like he was in heaven... "Ano... N-Naruto-kun.." Hinata said shyly, he cocked an eyebrow and asked what was it... as she was about to confess her father appeared out of the manor, apparently due to the noise of those two talking.. "WHA...WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS?!", Naruto let out a yelp and was nervous as hell, "It's not what it seems!" he replied to the angry Hinata's father who replied "NOT WHAT IT SEEMS?! COME OVER HERE U BRAT!", Naruto knew that he was going to get hit by him and ran away as fast as he could "HINATA, TOMORROW COME OVER TO MY HOUSE SO WE CAN GO TO THE FESTIVAL, AHHHHH" and with that Naruto disappeard out of view, N-Naruto-kun... she thought to herself but her father didn't chase after Naruto... "Damn, I hope u know what ur doing little girl, I don't want him to... Oh never mind..." her father said directing to her and his first thought was Where did he get that sneakiness of his? from his genes?!....
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Yey i'm done ^^ LONG ass chapter :p hehe hope u all liked it ^^

hey sh4de!!!! now i gotta save all the chapterss. -____________-

Hello HT :D hehe yeah u gotta save all that diane wrote and my big ass chapter hehe ^^ so how did u like it anyway? and how are u? :)

im fine shady !!!!!!!

continuation :

As hinata was soon be grounded , Naruto was walking home..thinking about her ...he just couldnt stop thinking about her .He use to think she was a weirdo..but now a beatiful young lady. When he had the picture of sakura , she was like a devil ; when you touch her hand it would be cold , hinata's was gentle and warm. Naruto had bumped into a lamp post - it was the cause of hinata , as if somone had takin many pictures og her and put directly in front of hi. The big egg on his head didnt even ache..it was like hinata put a cold cloth around it and the pain healed.he kept on saying "hinata hinata hinata" . Would this girl be his first love? did he atually like hinata instead or sakura?
Naruto was at his door -bringing out his key. Sunddenly , a few ninjas surround him and carried him away . Oh nooo!! what about tommorows festivall??? .He dropped his key down by his door way.
Hinata was ..skipping toward naruto-kun's house . she had manage to escape the mansion . She pake some of her homemade sushi..and wanted naruto to try some of it. Everyone was starring at her supisously - she had never skipped happily , she was always calm and shy . Because she had the same affect as naruto (picture thing) , she didnt notice that many people were glaring at her . naruto-kun naruto-kun ,today will be my big day! her said to herself.

Stoping by at naruto's house , the second time pusing the doorbell ..third time, no awser . "naruto-kun?" then she step on something hard ; she looked down . those are naruto's keys ..have they came to revenge on naruto for beating up all his minions? . she was shocked droping her basket and ran the tsunade's office for help ..
-To be continued-
BY: hinata_tropical
july/21/2006

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Ohhh MORE FIGHT HAHAHAHAH! :D kewl kewlness i may continues this hehe but for now i need some rest :) and i'm glad u are fine HT :D

okay well joo later

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Hinata ran as fast as she could and reached tsunade's office, with her usual politeness she knocked on the door. "Come in" Tsunade's voice was heard in next room and Hinata came in right away, "Tsunade-sama! Naruto dissapeared!" she quickly stated and Tsunade raised an eyebrow "Oh thats typical of him, don't worry", "No! u don't understand.. those days that me and him dissapeard, it was because we were captured as you should already know from Kakashi and Shizune... but one of the group that attacked us ran away! and he may have come back with help to get Naruto for what he did...and he left his keys right at his door entrance...", Tsunade's alarm raised higher and seriousness invaded her voice "If what you say is correct... then we might have a situation in our hand, go get kakashi and bring him here for a briefing... I want you to tell me and him every detail of what happened...", "Every detail?" Hinata said a bit embarassed and gulped "Yes, EVERY detail..." she replied to her... I guess i can leave out what happened to me and him, that doesn't really count... i hope she thought to herself and then replied "Hai tsunade-sama, i'm gonna warn Kakashi", Hinata left the room and quickly ran to Kakashi's house... as he got there she knocked on the door, and after a few secs Kakashi came to the door with a sleepy like face, reading "Come,come Paradise" and wearing a short pair of pants only (his mask was on too, obviously :p) Hinata looked away from him "Tsunade requested ur presence... me and you have a mission..", "Oh? i'm gonna get myself dressed right away, wait a moment... you don't need to look away you know...", Hinata was embarassed but still looked away... Kakashi sighed "Oh well, i respect the fact that u do not want to betray ur... Oops.." he had just realized what he was about to say and quickly went inside to get dressed, Hinata was starting to supect something...

Meanwhile Naruto was beign taken to the shinobi clan's hideout... "ugh, where am I?" He asked whomever was around him... he started to look around the room and it looked like a lord's house... "Welcome... little brat, to my domain, I see u have been causing trouble in one of my outposts, i'll see u'll have the right punishment for that" A tall, long haired, and well built man said sitting in a chair to Naruto.. "Who the hell are you, and what do you want with me or konoha?" the blue eyed shinobi asked the tall man who replied insistently "That is none of your business... brat, you asked too many questions, but i'm the one who is in a position to ask them here... Give me information on Konoha, NOW!", Naruto spat on the ground and said with a menacing look "I'll never tell you anything, NEVER!", an evil grin filled the lord's face and with clear sarcasm in his voice he simply said "Oh, isn't that girl u were with ur girlfriend? well.. what if i capture her and make HER SUFFER? THEN WILL YOU TALK?!", Naruto felt a sudden rage urge inside him, he'd never let that happen, "If you... lay a single hand on her I... I WILL SHRED YOU TO PIECES!" Naruto said starting with a whisper like voice and ending with a lion's roar, the kyuubi chakra urged inside him and was starting to leak out... "LOOK AT MY EYES AND REMEMBER THEM... FOR IT'LL BE THE LAST THING YOU ARE GONNA SEE!" Naruto roared like a mad beast and soon his appearence changed... his blue eyes turned into a red and black mix, his iris thinned it self, and gave him an animal like eyes.. his canines grew and the kyuubi chakra filled the room... "KILL HIM" the lord ordered his troops, 4 of them made an impenetrable barrier around the Lord, and the other shinobi attacked Naruto... the fight had begun...
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Another chapter ^^ big ass one, now i gotta take the chance to write decently :p hehehe hope u all liked it

im reading it

BTW i made banner for hyuuga hinata fc!!

Oh? i wanna see it then :D be sure to post it after u've finished it :), and i hope u like the small (large) chapter i wrote :p

i'm reworking my banners par shadow's advice, even working on a third one now

nice addition shade

i'm reworking my banners par shadow's advice, even working on a third one now

nice addition shade
i saw them....the text placement wasnt very well and the font too ...so mess it up!
shady i posted the banners

OH YEAAAAAAAH I have photshop CS installed what now huh huh= gonna start making teh banners! woohoo ^^anyways... i'm glad u liked my large additions xD i got carried away ;_;

oo that awesome...lucky *pouts*

I'm sad ;_; i'm hearing to that theme of Naruto when the story gets sad or someone almost dies... with piano and stuff :/ called sadness and sorrow... i love that song although it makes me think of sad things :) i'll post my work as soon as its done on CS

okay........i thought you wanted to see my banners in hina fc

i like it... it is nice!!!

OH YEAH! i did see them :p i'm sorry i forgot to comment on them :/, still i'd go for a bluey color for hinata... dunno why but i think it stands out better, but they are nice siggies HT :D

OH YEAH! i did see them :p i'm sorry i forgot to comment on them :/, still i'd go for a bluey color for hinata... dunno why but i think it stands out better, but they are nice siggies HT :D
i made an old one that was blue check out the first page..its sucks though

and thank sakura05 .....o and if you want to wear a tag of naruhina fc check out front page 3 post..T-T

Well u wanted, u asked for them and here they are, they are my crappy work so don't laugh, i'm thinking i can do better but i havent worked with PS for a long time... oh well, here they are, enjoy :)

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Sh4De/Untitled-1.jpg

This is the original one

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Sh4De/Untitled-12.jpg

This has an adjustment to the couple's colour

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Sh4De/Untitled-13.jpg

And finally, this one as a little glow all around the image
Well as for the image... it seems that ehy are on the moons face ^^ hehe, i can change the colour of the background if i so wish, so if anyone has any requests go ahead ^^ and i hope u all like them

I like those a lot. I put the original on the first page, I'd put them all but since I'm expecting more people to create more I need to save room since there are only 4 images allowed per post.

new banner...let me know how you like it

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n168/bignoel25/fcbanner3.jpg

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n168/bignoel25/fcbanner4.jpg
-v2 a little lighter in color

Well u wanted, u asked for them and here they are, they are my crappy work so don't laugh, i'm thinking i can do better but i havent worked with PS for a long time... oh well, here they are, enjoy :)

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Sh4De/Untitled-1.jpg

This is the original one

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Sh4De/Untitled-12.jpg

This has an adjustment to the couple's colour

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Sh4De/Untitled-13.jpg

And finally, this one as a little glow all around the image
Well as for the image... it seems that ehy are on the moons face ^^ hehe, i can change the colour of the background if i so wish, so if anyone has any requests go ahead ^^ and i hope u all like them
o when i first had PS i just adjusted the coulours..xD
but good! but you didnt atually make it T-T
o and it would be nice to make a border for it! ^-^

um good rokudaime also put a border...!

I didn't actually make it? how so? o.o lolol anyways i will had a bordar once i remember how :p hehe anyways glad u liked them

i like them!um...well i use a different PS to give em borders lol ^-^

o i could give them the borders

Oh, I guess u can make some borders in them ^^ just don't forget to say they were made by me :p, anyways as i said in the other thread i liked urs don't be a monkey HT ;p

hey!.......my sucked ass ... i found some awesome stocks i might work on different one's since i dont like my current ones

No it didn't suck ass HT don't let urself go down... always aim for better stuff :D hehe u'll see ur gonna get better for sure :)

okay..............xD

EDIT: but i still think it sucks ass

LOL, anyways whos gonna contiue the fan fic huh huh? ;_; i wanna read more :X hehe life isn't made of doing banners ;p

um but still you can be a artist to make cards done by PS and stuff...it's cool!

Yeah i could make myself be part of a artist community thats true.. i've thought about it but meh... i don't see myself going in for those type of things :/, if i'm gonna be something, i'm gonna be NL's private artist ^^ or the FC's private artist ;)

HT i was goin to add borders later...i thought it was a contest, no point in finishing it completely, right?...besides, the border wont add much

Shade, i just got in from work, but i'll look at continuing the fic in a few

um no not a contest members can make them so the group will have many options!

in that case, i'll get a border on it asap

Well, roku then i'll be waiting for ur continuation :D u just have to look for my last post in the pages dunno which :S maybe page 96 o.o anyways how are u? :)

only one more person can like make banner cause only 4 images will only be acepted in apost

I suppose that I'll take the next part. Now is Naruto able to move? Or is he in chains or restraints?

Edit: And HT, I just looked at your spoiler...don't you love me too? I'm hurt that i'm not included. Lol, JK

Hello Shadow my man :D well Naruto is obviously chained... but not for long am i right? :) hehe i forgot to include that detail, anyways have a good one with the fight scene :D hahahah ^^ and hope u liked what i wrote before :)

The Ninja who were surrounding Naruto took their time in the approach. Even though he was chained to a chair, he was still a ninja, therefore a threat. One ninja lunged at him sword in hand.

"SHIT!!" Naruto swore. He puseshed off the ground with his feet, doing a backflip. The Attacking shinobi slashed down with his katana which cut through the chains, chair, and some of Naruto's back. "Damnit to hell..." Naruto said angrily as the blood trickled down his back and into his pants, and soon to be in his shoes.
"Wow, you're better than I have you credit for...but you'll still die here." One laughed. Naruto picked up the remnants of the chains that once held him.
"We'll see..." He said softly. The same Ninja attacked Naruto again with a downward slash. Naruto brought up the chains blocking the slash. He then wrapped the blade in chains and with a massive twist, shattered it.
"You...!"
"KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!! U-ZU-MAKI! NARUTO RENDAN!!!" The Shinobi fell down unconcious...Naruto looked at the remaining ninja, "One down..."


SORRY that's all i can write for some reason...that was done awfully too...maybe cuz i was destracted by drawing this...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36693299/

Enjoy both

I've read ur bit shadow, although it wasn't done at ur best it still looks good :), for now i'm gonna go to bed and have some sleep, i'm wasted :p heheh i'll see you guys tomorrow ^^ hope u write lots of stuff in the fan fic ^^

updates:
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n168/bignoel25/nhbanner2.jpg

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n168/bignoel25/nhbanner1.jpg

they look good ^^

YAY new part!
i read it twas good!

@ shadow sure sure ill add you to my list .!!

Hello everyone :D good evening ^^ hehehe so hows everyone doing? i already had lunch and i'm ready to post hehe, ohhhhh no one added a new part to the fan fic ;_; maybe since its saturday more ppl will be on :D

.........um today a have a shedule so i might on contribute a part ;_;

Well i'm waiting for a good read :p so... if anyone today can post up a kewl chapter it'd make my day :D

woah..what happened since i was gone?

may i join? please

as a gift i found this funny naruhina (i guess) comic strip http://www.saiyanisland.com/images/details.php?image_id=8993&sessionid=7f614f67ee9be70cac9524bcbb97eb d7

of course you can!! heehee! go grab a banner and welcome to the FC ..

Welcom Das :D hehe well i've seen that manga before :) i've given a whole site with naruhina manga here :D dunno if anyone read :) if ur interested just tell me ^^ hehe, anyways so hows everyone going?

What i'm wondering is, shade where did you get that pic of hinata for your avi?

"KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!! U-ZU-MAKI! NARUTO RENDAN!!!" The Shinobi fell down unconcious...Naruto looked at the remaining ninja, "One down..."
As he looked up, the enemy shinobi could already see his eyes starting to burn even fiercer than before. Naruto's blood red eyes startled them, as his chakra began to condense around him and formed a tail. One by one, he tore them all down. Despite their fear, they charged in fearing the rath of their lord more.
Two attacked Naruto at once this time. As he ducked under the kunai of his first attacker, striking the shinobi in the chest, the second ninja charged Naruto from the rear only to be cut down by two chakra tails, the second which had formed almost immediately.
With the floor littered with the shredded and torn bodies of fallen shinobi, Naruto turned his hateful eyes onto the evil lord. All that remained of his guard were the four men holding up his protective barrier.
As a third tail began to appear, Naruto had become more kyuubi than himself and grinned, "So, who's next to die?"..........

Yey finally an update :D where did i get it Shadow? a place u may never find out about :X HAHAHAH xD i'm kidding :) send me a PM and i'll send u some sites where u can find kewl stuff ^^ hehhe including NaruHina stuff like the pic i took for my avi, its hinata laying on top of naruto :p hehhe sexy huh? ^^ shes wearing a top too XD

EDIT: I'd like to continue the story but, unfortunately i'm going to sleep XD, i'm dying of sleepage... anyways, Shadow send me a PM tomorrow i'll give the sites to u ^^, and if anyone wants to continue the fan fic, feel free to do it :D

had some extra time on my hands:

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n168/bignoel25/fcbanner5.jpg

as you can tell, i really like this stock of naruto and hinata...
hinata w/long hair = good

Any new members? If so, welcome!

rokudaime nice banners, mind if I snag them and add them to the NaruHina FC on Naruto Fan? Credit you of course.

and Sh4de the one you made thats on the first page, and I add that one too?

@darkhope...its not a problem, go right ahead

Good morning everyone ^^, oh darkhope go right ahead :) if u wish so ^^ just be sure to credit me XD hehhe, anyways hows everyone doing this fine day huh?

can i join in

Heya Benoit, i think there isn't a co-owner around... if there was one he'd let you in, but be attentive one should show up in a bit or so :D, so i'm sute they'd let u win ^^

Thanks and good morning to all

of course you can Sirbenoit...welcome to the fc! ^-^

See Benoit? i told u a co-owner should come by any moment ;p hehehehhe welcome to the fan club dude :D may u have fun here like no other :) and btw if u want to know what were doing, go to page 66 or so, we've started a group fan fic so we can post it up in another place, it starts around that page, the last poster was rokudaime in page 98 ^^ go read from teh beggining :D

See Benoit? i told u a co-owner should come by any moment ;p hehehehhe welcome to the fan fic dude :D may u have fun here like no other :) and btw if u want to know what were doing, go to page 66 or so, we've started a group fan fic so we can post it up in another place, it starts around that page, the last poster was rokudaime in page 98 ^^ go read from teh beggining :D
but didnt you say "HE"? you didnt mention girls ! :mad: lol j/k

hmm did anyone attach parts ?

HT to the fan fic? I think u haven't updated it with Shadow's part and with the last part, done by Roku :) go back a page or two and search for teh updates :D they are kewl ^^

.....sure.-________- aw....i hope i can make some parts today because i have plans for the whole weekend

Yeah i Hope so too i wanna read more ;_; if no one updates i will update it myself :X thats my way of the ninja ^^v ahahha :D

wow, HTs avatar has changed a few times this week lol
@shade, update it, i wanna read something lol

Wish granted Roku :D here it is ^^
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Meanwhile Kakashi and Hinata were already at Tsunade's office, "We're here... whats the matter" Kakashi said with his usual calm look, "Well as you two know Naruto has gone missing... we suspect he might have been kidnapped, you remember where you were found by Kakashi and Shizune, right?" Tsunade asked interlacing her hands in front of her mouth, "Yes, Tsunade-sama I still remember where we were found" Hinata replied still a bit shaken from the situation in hands... "From the reports I've recieve and what you said, Hinata, I believe that the survivor from Naruto's rage ran torwards the mountains... so their base must be hidden around there, this is a rescue mission complete it swiftly" Tsunade finished the briefing with her serious face and kakashi nodded back at her, as the two of them were leaving Tsunade's office, Kakashi laid a hand on Hinata's shoulder "Don't worry we will find Naruto for sure, i'll see that it will happen" he said with a grin behind his mask, she looked away and blushed lightly "Hai, lets go then" she said with vigor in her voice, and they exited the village heading torwards the mountains...

-Naruto- "Who's next to die?.." he said with a grin on his face... the shinobi protecting the Lord with a barrier were starting to get frightened.. the Lord laughed at the attempts of Naruto and said "You little brat... You will never get me..." with that said Naruto growled and jumped at the barried laying down a red chakra hand punch on the barrier, almost breaking it with one hit, the Lord thought it was time to retreat and pressed something on his chair... with a maniacal laugh he dissapeared from the room.. "YOU BASTARD" the Konoha Ninja shouted and with an insane roar he killed the 4 shinobi still alive, and broke his way to the outside, he found himself in the mountains and looked around for signs of the Lord... he couldn't be seen anywhere, his rage grew, he let out a mountain rumbling shout "COME BACK HERE, COWARD OF A HUMAN!" his chakra aura enlargened and could be felt in a long distance...

Kakashi and Hinata were halfway through the forest and almost reaching the mountains... "Oh no... this can't be" Kakashi said right after he sensed the unnatural chakra "What is it Kakashi-sensei?" the girl asked him, and suddenly the abnormal chakra hit her senses too... Could it be? she thought to herself... "We need to hurry! Lets get a move on!" Kakashi ordered her and they increased their speed, reaching the mountain slopes and already going up the mountain in the direction of the red chakras origin...
"I WILL FIND YOU, LORD AND YOU WILL DIE BY MY HANDS... NO ONE THREATENS MY FRIENDS!" Another rumble was felt and heard in the mountain with Naruto's shout to apparently no one... but the two Konoha shinobi felt it and reached the entrance of the Lord's hidden base... and right by the entrance was the source of all the energy being released... Naruto... he croushed and roared one more time preparing to attack any threat, like a mother fox protecting his younglings, Hinata came into his view with Kakashi right behind her... as he was more animal than human right now he went into an attack stance directed right at them... "NARUTO-KUN!" Hinata shouted and ran torwards him, "NO.. HINATA COME BACK! HE'S NOT NARUTO!"Kakashi shouted trying to discourage her but she ran torwards the "posessed" blond haired boy, he looked at her and moved in for the attack, and as he was in about to lay a punch in her she cried out to him "NARUTO, IT'S ME... HINATA" He suddendly calmed himself and stopped his attack inches before it hit her... "Hinata?" he said under his heavy growl like voice... "Yes, it's me..." she replied and slowly the red chakra and the tails envolving Naruto started to dissapear... leaving a tired young boy in the arms of the girl that loved him, Kakashi was wide mouthed at her abillity to calm him down....
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Long ass chapter, hope u all like it ^^

two thumbs up for the addition, shade...it was a nice read

woah let me read that......later ^_^

Nice addition shade :D

Hey guys I was just wondering if I could join??

Welcome ^.^

Thx all for the support :D but now is ur turn Muahahha prepare urselves for u shall do way better than my crappy additions :p heheh

EDIT: how did u like the sites shadow?

EDIT2: YEY WE'VE REACHED PAGE 100 CONGRATS EVERYONE ^^

what do you mean?

I liked em good. :D

PAGE 100 WHOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

hm....we are at page 100....hmm cant beleive we made it this far

lol
like three days ago we were on like page 70

that was because me and shade were spamming heehee

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL! don't say that HT we are going to get ourselves busted :p hehehe we were just talking about the fan fic ;_;, Shadow now... has a pay for giving you the awesome sites... i want you to write the next chapter :D muahaha

EDIT: look at my avatar ;_; shes sooooooooooooooooooooo cute *_*

your avy is scary

Why? ;_; its soo damn adorable hehhe ^^ so shadow.. have u considered doing the next chapter? or should i black mail you with more naruhina or just hina websites? x) hahahah jk :D

hinata's eyes are....ack!

They're frighteningly adorable. But i have yet to find a picture worthy of my taste shade. lol.

Shadow, u've yet to find it? try deviant art first... theres tons there for real, or do i need to do the work for you and send you pics like the ones i had on my avi? hmm? :)

EDIT: her eyes are like that because they are almost crying... or better she's so happy and embarassed that her eyes shine ^^ adorable :D

Edit2: since ur complaining, hows this one? :)

They're frighteningly adorable. But i have yet to find a picture worthy of my taste shade. lol.
you've had that avy since the first day you became a member O_O

That one's good. and YES I'VE HAD THIS AVI FOREVER

Ok ok... Shadow i can't believe u are yet to find a pic that suits ur likings.. do I really (now for real) need to send them to you ? xD, theres kakashi stuff over at Deviantart.com too ^^