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OG
11-11-2006, 03:23 AM
Link to story:
http://www.narutolounge.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22647

Talk about the story so far here >.>......

Character pics....
Jaxon pic:
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2766/mwanr1.png
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b378/Jokerson/Mwa.jpg

Mooch pic:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y184/gbsbg/me4.jpg

Oakgyrl510 pic:
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8641/nin9hw.png

Brendan:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y184/gbsbg/brendan.gif

Mooch
11-11-2006, 03:35 AM
LMAO OMG! I sound like a masochist! lol wow, that made me laugh though. Sorry I blew your head up, Rhi XD Kickass so far! lol.

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 05:01 AM
>_> It wasn't my fault I say blame this song!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=ln_D7lvYfjg

>_>....I had to mix a sword with grenades some point in the story =3!

Mooch
11-11-2006, 05:03 AM
lol thats friggin awesome. Whats with the mom thing? Does that get explained later?

edit: nm, im an idiot, I just got it >.>

Nara Shikamaru
11-11-2006, 05:12 AM
wow better than mortal kombat xD...

Jarrid
11-11-2006, 05:14 AM
Amazing man you rock.. So bloody... Grenade in mouth lol.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 05:17 AM
Amazing man you rock.. So bloody... Grenade in mouth lol.

lol that was my fav part XP

coconaught
11-11-2006, 05:21 AM
yeah...I loved how it rained blood...

naritaUzumaki
11-11-2006, 05:27 AM
i'm not part of the story, but i read it! it's cool! better than the real battle royale....

Jarrid
11-11-2006, 05:28 AM
i'm not part of the story, but i read it! it's cool! better than the real battle royale....

Not even close to the real one.. GRRR

coconaught
11-11-2006, 05:30 AM
yeah...not better then the real one...maybe better then the 2nd one...but I haven't seen that one yet...

naritaUzumaki
11-11-2006, 05:30 AM
well... that's your opinion...but ever seen a brain scattered in the original?? cant remember seeing that scene

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 05:38 AM
Well it's better than the crappy American one in the making =P BR deserves to stay manga and Japanese movie!

New part is up =/ I'm cutting low on the kills for now so it doesn't end to quickly. Right now I'm working on some of the characters backrounds and discovering more about the island and how to escape from it.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 05:39 AM
well... that's your opinion...but ever seen a brain scattered in the original?? cant remember seeing that scene

*raises hand* My bad. *sips juice box*

naritaUzumaki
11-11-2006, 05:43 AM
*hands up* the story is really cool! (well luckily i'm not there, hate reading my self dead!)

Nara Shikamaru
11-11-2006, 05:44 AM
wow awesome story. Can't wait to see me fight...:D

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 05:45 AM
I'm still stuck as to who I'm putting up against each other =/.... I was planning on giving you Sasuke_Power for a warm up to see how you like the kill I give =P *He's a missing-nin anyway, who cares ;P*

coconaught
11-11-2006, 05:51 AM
that last part is great...I just don't see why kluang didn't stop the bleeding before he started to leave >.>

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 05:52 AM
Shit, I forgot to mention that XD! I knew it didn't look right when I posted it. thanks for the heads up.

*Goes off to edit*

Nara Shikamaru
11-11-2006, 05:53 AM
nope he'll be back. It wasn't his fault that he got banned. I've pmed a mod already and they are looking into his matter. If the mods find him innocent he'll get unbanned.

naritaUzumaki
11-11-2006, 05:55 AM
who will kill kluang?.... i'm excited about the next part....

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 05:57 AM
Sasuke_Power? He had like 4 multi's =/ Shinobi of light being one of them.

Nara Shikamaru
11-11-2006, 06:01 AM
That wasn't him. There were other people accessing NL from the same computer...
Anyways when will the next part be up?

Jarrid
11-11-2006, 06:08 AM
More more more.. This is amazing man... I just wish there was some more combat in that last part.. Who cares still great.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 07:00 AM
A bio pic I actually worked hard on :p My "Upgrade" >.>

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y184/gbsbg/me4.jpg

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 07:11 AM
>_>....I'm actually bordering on the lines of calling that a kilt.... XD

And you slightly resemble Rebecca chambers from Resident Evil XD!

Mooch
11-11-2006, 07:13 AM
LOL!!! People were saying I looked like Tatsuki from bleach, too. And it pretty much is a kilt, a plaid skirt :p (Though I have no idea why I drew myself in that, I wear that outfit as pj's...)

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 07:59 AM
WOW. Now I have to do something to rival Mooch's bio pic >_>

*grabs tablet and runs off to PhotoShop*

Mooch
11-11-2006, 08:09 AM
WOW. Now I have to do something to rival Mooch's bio pic >_>

*grabs tablet and runs off to PhotoShop*

haha tablet... I did mine by mouse >.> And its my second try at lineart <.< I dont have a tablet :p Apparently, I don't need one?

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 08:54 AM
haha tablet... I did mine by mouse >.> And its my second try at lineart <.< I dont have a tablet :p Apparently, I don't need one?

Yeah, mousedrawing isn't as hard as people make it sound =/
I just got tired of it, and bought a tablet.
Never looked back :cool:

Mooch
11-11-2006, 08:56 AM
Yeah, mousedrawing isn't as hard as people make it sound =/
I just got tired of it, and bought a tablet.
Never looked back :cool:

that works when you have money >.> lol.

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 09:08 AM
that works when you have money >.> lol.

True, I had money.
Now I have none ='[
Every action has a reaction >_>

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:10 AM
very true. Also, check out the newest addition to the BR XD

thats just.... sad almost, but he wouldn't get away with murder if blood splattered everywhere, and they'd eventually find him and it would lead back to the kid. Either way, cool blood scenes ;p.

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:11 AM
>_>.... *runs off to edit again then.*

I get the feeling atleast 2 of the people who correct me and my killings watch C.S.I....

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:12 AM
nope, hate that show. Actually, I never watch tv. I just know too much stuff XD

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 09:13 AM
Yep, good shapter.. Scarily Conor, you actually captured pretty much exactly what I did when I was 6.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:15 AM
Jax, dont creep me out >.>

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:16 AM
Edited it Inspector Mooch.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:17 AM
inspector mooch? lol I was just stating, I didn't mean to oppose or offend, im sowwy v.v;;

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:18 AM
>_>....Wha? I was just joking XD....

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:21 AM
oh okies then XD

Still as kickass as always, keep up the good splatters XD

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:24 AM
I'll try =/ If I can get 3 or 4 in one day over the weekend it's all god, I don't head out until half 6 tonight so hopefully I can add alot more of you lot in.

kluang
11-11-2006, 09:30 AM
I got shoot in the knee.... Man that hurts... As long I'm smoking I'm good...

Demi-God
11-11-2006, 09:31 AM
Interesting and bloody story...me likes

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:42 AM
Want me to add you to the list =/ I'm looking for 2 more to make it 25...

Demi-God
11-11-2006, 09:43 AM
Want me to add you to the list =/ I'm looking for 2 more to make it 25...

Sure =]

What do I have to do o.O

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:45 AM
Fill out le template as follows

Name: *Username*
Age:
Weapon:
Theme song:
Description:

Then I add you along with the others I gotta add, then it leaves one more space. =)

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:46 AM
Add Brendan, I'll fill out his form for him, lol.

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:49 AM
Who is Brendan Mooch? =/....

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:52 AM
a kickass rl friend of mine who joined this forum recently. His username is the same as his real name, it would be fun to enter him in this, then link him to his fight randomly one day and see his reaction XD

he wouldnt care all that much, but he'd get a good laugh out of it knowing him... lol

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:53 AM
XD Sure, go for it!

Demi-God
11-11-2006, 09:53 AM
Goo enough?


Name: 6_NaRuTo_6/Demi-God 0.0
Age: 16
Weapon: Bricks
Theme song: I Shot The Sheriff - Bob Marley
Description: (can I just draw a picture for this?)

Mooch
11-11-2006, 09:57 AM
Name: Brendan

Age: 18

Weapon: I'd say a stick or something just to piss him off, but I'll be nice and give him a katana. He likes asian things XD

Theme song: Hubba Hubba Zoot Zoot - Carumba (I don't think the song matters in the fights, but it would still be funny hearing this when he came in)

Description: I'll draw his pic :p

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:57 AM
Yep you can draw a pic if you want =)

EDIT: That was to 6_N_6 =P

kluang
11-11-2006, 10:07 AM
Bricks??? You gonna hit their head with bricks??? That victim head gonna look like a bloody elephant man.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 10:49 AM
Kay, here's brendan. : ) I decided not to care so much about the background or massive details because I know he probably wont care that much XD

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y184/gbsbg/brendan.gif

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 10:52 AM
=o...I really like that =D I'll add it before the next chapter goes up tonight.

Mooch
11-11-2006, 10:54 AM
lol kickass. He's going to get a kick out of this.

Nara Shikamaru
11-11-2006, 11:36 AM
Great chapter....quite bloody. Great drawings Mooch!!
And can anybody, if it's not so much trouble, draw my pic? It should be something like my avatar. Thanks. And can't wait for the next chapter.

ShinobiKnight
11-11-2006, 11:41 AM
So far, so good, but I'd better be in it soon. >_>

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 11:45 AM
I told you my plans foo' =o

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 01:31 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b378/Jokerson/Mwa.jpg

Yeah, I don't think it quite rivals Mooch's bio pic.
I cannot be bothered to draw a background to save my life.

OG
11-11-2006, 02:37 PM
*updated first post with pics XP*

oh yea evil-tsunade-you should cross out the names of those that have died XD

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 02:52 PM
I done that thing with the announcements =P

OG
11-11-2006, 03:05 PM
i meant in the first list XD

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 03:11 PM
Ohhhhh, yeah sounds good.

I might not be able to squeeze another BR chapter in, I'll try though.

Jarrid
11-11-2006, 03:35 PM
Lol new chapter was kinda wired.. But still great.

Haku2099
11-11-2006, 04:12 PM
I love it, just can't wait to see me in it
XD

Mooch
11-11-2006, 05:30 PM
*updated first post with pics XP*

oh yea evil-tsunade-you should cross out the names of those that have died XD

you can delete one of mine, I uploaded the me2.jpg one with the same name, so now both pics are the same :p

Haku2099
11-11-2006, 07:59 PM
I was wondering if you could draw me mooch, If so I'll send you a pm with a description.
XD

OG
11-11-2006, 08:25 PM
you can delete one of mine, I uploaded the me2.jpg one with the same name, so now both pics are the same :p
what? O.o......they both are different from what i see o.o;

Ninja48
11-11-2006, 08:30 PM
I'M LATE OH SHI-

When did this thread get here wtF. /reads story, Lol

OG
11-11-2006, 08:31 PM
well it got here today my time XD.......but late at night like after midnight or so >.>.........

Ninja48
11-11-2006, 08:44 PM
@Evil-Tsunade: You need a description of me for the story or wha? Can't really draw myself =\ lol. I can just say that ahhh, I should be wearing a white t-shirt, jeans, and white sneakers. Haircut is a fade (you know, army/marine type of hair cut), and I have a chain. Perhaps I'll choke someone with it =\ lol

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 08:46 PM
>_> PM me yo, you and Jax will be back up on wednesday hopefully mate.

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 09:38 PM
What I want to know is, where's Miburo?

We need some Jaxuro48 ownage.

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:46 PM
wait your up for that? Ok, well make sure to remind me of it on MSN mate and I'll include it XD

Jaxon
11-11-2006, 09:47 PM
Wicked, yo. I shall, whenever we're not knackered by lack of sleep.

I.e. now.

OG
11-11-2006, 09:47 PM
oh i meet 6n6 XD.......

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:52 PM
XD I <3 the ocnversations we have when out of our minds and nearly falling asleep on the keyboards =P

Yesh you do meet 6_N_6 But *twighlight theme interupts the next few words* and thats what happens!

coconaught
11-11-2006, 09:54 PM
lol nice story so far <.< is 6n6 going to be in tip top shape to be shot at after getting hit by a car?

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 09:55 PM
He's recovered by now fool, poor bugger though...he can't turn right =(

Jarrid
11-11-2006, 10:01 PM
Lol nice chapter..Once again good work.. but you need to get back to the killing.

Evil-Tsunade
11-11-2006, 10:04 PM
I'm trying to cut down on it, maybe one or two more background stories and them some more.

OG
11-11-2006, 10:25 PM
the car trips over 6n6's bricks and the car crashes and i die XD....but that wouldnt be a cool nor freaky way for me to die so no -.-.......XD

coconaught
11-11-2006, 10:43 PM
well...since that is a backstory...so it's before you got on the island...I doubt that is how you will be going out...

Mooch
11-11-2006, 10:59 PM
what? O.o......they both are different from what i see o.o;

refresh, and sure haku send away.

OG
11-11-2006, 11:18 PM
ah i see now lol.............

coco- i forgot it was a backstory XD

Ninja48
11-11-2006, 11:43 PM
OMG PHOTOSHOP + MOUSE = CRAPPY SELF PORTRAIT OH SHI-
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/862/menr8.png
Woo, I never draw anything =\ lol

Haku2099
11-12-2006, 12:13 AM
great chapter, hope I get a back story too, >.> <.<
wonder who I get to kill.:)

Jarrid
11-12-2006, 12:22 AM
I'm trying to cut down on it, maybe one or two more background stories and them some more.

Why dont you do it like the Real Battle Royale.. Only do back stories for like 5 people.. and do them like Battle Battle Story Battle Battle Story Battle Battle Story so on and what not XDD..

Just a thought.

Evil-Tsunade
11-12-2006, 12:10 PM
New part is up, I didn't feel it's my best =/ I'm a bit drowsy at the moment and I was working on it while doing art homework, a shorter piece but a bit gorey....

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 12:12 PM
It's a good chapter, but I noticed a few typos. o.o

Oh well, doesn't matter. Still a good chapter. :)

Evil-Tsunade
11-12-2006, 12:14 PM
Keh keh, gimmie till i tone in my cactus and I'll MS word it.

Haku2099
11-12-2006, 01:06 PM
I liked it evil tsunade, just wish I could kill someone, maybey LN, or Shinobi Knight.

Miburo
11-12-2006, 01:10 PM
Pride getting owned in the face by a bowling ball is full of win. Good game. ^^b

Still some Linkin Park 'team evil' kiddies still alive though, hopefully they get wiped out pretty soon. ; )

Jarrid
11-12-2006, 01:48 PM
Amazing once again man, Rib smashing.. Leg smashing... Face Smashing.. Pure Bliss.

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 02:01 PM
I liked it evil tsunade, just wish I could kill someone, maybey LN, or Shinobi Knight.

SK, not me! o_o

I don't know who I want to get beat-up by <.<
Not Haku >.>

It'd be cool if I killed someone though. :D

cursesealer
11-12-2006, 02:15 PM
Evil Tsunade~ That was pretty cool so far in the story. Do you think I can be in this? If not then that's okay. I'm just asking.

Jaxon
11-12-2006, 02:53 PM
SK, not me! o_o

I don't know who I want to get beat-up by <.<
Not Haku >.>

It'd be cool if I killed someone though. :D

In the end, I'm going to beat the crap out of everyone. It's just a matter of time.

On a side note, this story is officially:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v64/spacebuggilly/magnum2.gif

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 03:29 PM
In the end, I'm going to beat the crap out of everyone. It's just a matter of time.

On a side note, this story is officially:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v64/spacebuggilly/magnum2.gif

Sure you will. I'm betting on Mooch or 6n6 or Oaky. :p

My money is against me though. <.<

ShinobiKnight
11-12-2006, 04:23 PM
If Haku killed me in the story, I'd commit suicide by dismemberment. I'm not dying to the likes of him. Oh well, it's not my decision. Great chapter. I was a bit confused by the chapter before it, with Oakgyrl and the teacher and someone getting run over.

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 04:26 PM
I have a great idea!

Me and SK fighting Haku! :D

ShinobiKnight
11-12-2006, 04:27 PM
Now that would be a kickass chapter. :cool:

Evil-Tsunade
11-12-2006, 04:29 PM
I was going to somehow get S.K and Slayer91 tied togehter due to a trap that they barely escaped XD it would add a tint of comedy to it, but yeah that could work

New chapter is up. I feel I've made the best kill ever, it's like predator minus the flashy helmets and Danny Glover.

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 04:30 PM
Now that would be a kickass chapter. :cool:

Indeed :cool:

Edit: Just read the chapter. NICE!!! :D

DarkAztek
11-12-2006, 04:55 PM
I dunno how I missed this before... But I'm not middle aged. I'm 23. I'm barely out of college. Middle aged is over 10 years away.

P.S.

I'm going to have a good picture soon.

Jaxon
11-12-2006, 05:02 PM
I dunno how I missed this before... But I'm not middle aged. I'm 23. I'm barely out of college. Middle aged is over 10 years away.

Lol, I noticed that too.
Middle age would imply that DA is like, 40.

Haku2099
11-12-2006, 05:25 PM
yes I finally make an apperance, great chapter evil tsunade. sorry to see sasuke power go though, oh well.

OG
11-12-2006, 05:39 PM
nah i dont think my chara will win [besides, i want to read about my cool but freaky death XD] >.>...i think DA will take it all the way XP.........or else o.o...lol.....

Haku2099
11-12-2006, 05:54 PM
I just want to see my first kill, XD
can't wait to see who it is.

DarkAztek
11-12-2006, 06:02 PM
I can see it now... Edit final post:

And DarkAztek, despite dying earlier, wins the game. He killed everyone and is worshiped as god. THE END OR ELSE!!@#$(@#%*@&#$%!!

Jaxon
11-12-2006, 06:06 PM
I can see it now... Edit final post:

And DarkAztek, despite dying earlier, wins the game. He killed everyone and is worshiped as god. THE END OR ELSE!!@#$(@#%*@&#$%!!

Best ending ever.
It gives total closure.

OG
11-12-2006, 06:13 PM
roflmao XD..........

Mooch
11-12-2006, 06:23 PM
this is getting so gruesome it's hilarious.

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 06:24 PM
I know, I can't wait to see how I'm going to die! :D

Yes, I'm looking forward to my character being slaughtered. <.<
Hmmm... >.>

Btw, I like that picture of you, it looks awesome! :D

Jaxon's pic kinda scares me though <.<

OG
11-12-2006, 06:24 PM
gruesome is what battle royale is all about XD

Mooch
11-12-2006, 06:28 PM
exactly :p

And thanks LN, I'm proud of that pic... I have fallen in love with lineart and the eye coloring technique I learned XD

And I love Jaxon's pics, he captures expressions REALLY well. : )

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 06:29 PM
exactly :p

And thanks LN, I'm proud of that pic... I have fallen in love with lineart and the eye coloring technique I learned XD

And I love Jaxon's pics, he captures expressions REALLY well. : )

I wish I could draw like that... *sighs*
Would you draw a pic of me? XD j/k lol

And that one Jaxon pic is good at capturing insanity, that's for sure. o_o

I just noticed... Your pic reminds me of Sakura from Street Fighter ALPHA. That's a compliment, btw. :D

Mooch
11-12-2006, 06:31 PM
I wish I could draw like that... *sighs*
Would you draw a pic of me? XD j/k lol

And that one Jaxon pic is good at capturing insanity, that's for sure. o_o

I just noticed... Your pic reminds me of Sakura from Street Fighter ALPHA. That's a compliment, btw. :D

insanity pwns. And if you can get me a better pic of yourself, then yeah I probably could. The more I can see of you, the better. (What I mean is, if you've got a pic of you standing somewhere, thats perfect. Just a shoulder pic doesn't show much of your posture, stance, etc)

And I think I know who you're talking about, was she the Sakura in Project Justice for the Dreamcast? (I know Sakura appeared in many games) My ex's mom said I looked like her, too :p if that's the case

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 06:37 PM
insanity pwns. And if you can get me a better pic of yourself, then yeah I probably could. The more I can see of you, the better. (What I mean is, if you've got a pic of you standing somewhere, thats perfect. Just a shoulder pic doesn't show much of your posture, stance, etc)

And I think I know who you're talking about, was she the Sakura in Project Justice for the Dreamcast? (I know Sakura appeared in many games) My ex's mom said I looked like her, too :p if that's the case

I was joking about you drawing my pic. :p
I can draw my own, but it'll suck. <.<

And I was talking about Sakura Kasunogo (I think that's how it's spelled.). I couldn't find a pic that looked like yours, but it's the skirt, face and hair that I recognize the most.

Mooch
11-12-2006, 06:38 PM
I own that plaid skirt, and my hair is pretty close to that messy bundle of tufts. Look up Project Justice characters and tell me if it's her. :p

http://www.projectjustice.com/

It is the same Sakura XD and its spelled Kasugano

LonelyNinja
11-12-2006, 06:41 PM
I looked it up, and she's in there. Yeah, your pic looks like heres. :)

Mooch
11-12-2006, 06:42 PM
just a tad <.<

My ex's mom said I looked like her and Hinata from that game. Good game : ) Edge is a cutie >.>

Jaxon
11-12-2006, 07:22 PM
Y'know, I thought you looked like Sakura as well o_o
I think she might have been in Rival Schools as well. Never played that tho. Wait... Rival Schools WAS Project Justice.

Haku2099
11-12-2006, 08:50 PM
look out jaxon, I'm out to get you in the battle royal
Can't wait to see what happens next.

Rhi
11-12-2006, 08:57 PM
* pulls pin out of a grenade* *throws grenade with complete accuracy and hits Haku2099* Now you wont get jaxon coz YOUR DEAD meawhahahahah *chucks head back and chuckles with evil laughter*

kluang
11-12-2006, 09:30 PM
Nice chapter....More blood,sweat and tears... Hope the other kill are more gruesome...

Well in this battle royale no one is using a sniper rifle....

Rhi
11-12-2006, 09:36 PM
no sniper rifle but grenades are just as good and very dramatic! all that explosionie stuff and shrapnal getting in ppls butts and stuff

kluang
11-12-2006, 09:39 PM
Grenades are not that accurate...

coconaught
11-12-2006, 09:39 PM
grenades don't need to be accurate...they blow up everything within a 5 foot radius...

Haku2099
11-12-2006, 11:49 PM
* pulls pin out of a grenade* *throws grenade with complete accuracy and hits Haku2099* Now you wont get jaxon coz YOUR DEAD meawhahahahah *chucks head back and chuckles with evil laughter*

didn't mooch kill you already, you can't kill me outside the story.

Nara Shikamaru
11-13-2006, 06:26 AM
awesome story so far......and pretty gruesome. Can't wait to see me...

Mooch
11-13-2006, 06:46 AM
Y'know, I thought you looked like Sakura as well o_o
I think she might have been in Rival Schools as well. Never played that tho. Wait... Rival Schools WAS Project Justice.

Yes it was and yes she was XD I played PJ more than RS though. And thanks I guess ^^;; I tried to keep as much to my features as possible o.o;;

DarkAztek
11-13-2006, 12:57 PM
No. Really. Fix the middle age thing. ...And I'm not grizzled looking, I'm just grizzled on the inside.

Evil-Tsunade
11-13-2006, 01:01 PM
>_> Describe Boi!!!!!

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:16 PM
didn't mooch kill you already, you can't kill me outside the story.

dunno coz i can only get on the net 3 days a wk coz i dont have it at home!

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:19 PM
she came back from the dead as a hollow : D And now she's my pet hollow >.>

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:23 PM
LOL awesome... i'm Mooch's pet Hollow that can use GRANADES!! beware ppl!!

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:26 PM
Only when I allow it! *nods* Considering it's very hazardous towards my health having a pet hollow that I killed myself with grenades, I'm going to hafta limit your supply. *leashes* lol

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:28 PM
*sad face, shrugs*didn't know you had grenades??

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:29 PM
I did once I took them from you :p Once I die you can have them back XD

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:31 PM
do i have immunity when im away? (thurs,fri sat,sun)

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:32 PM
hmmm... What do you plan to do during those periods if I allow it?

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:36 PM
watever 19yr olds do oh and go buy / watch naruto, FMC, one piece on Toasted TV and mayb if i get the time go to adelaide and go to Borders and get some manga

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:40 PM
okay then, i'll allow it XD

Though most 19 year olds do different things than I do >.> I'm not a partier, nor do I smoke/drink/drug it up like most people my age group tend to do XD

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:43 PM
neither do i! i can't stand sigirette smoke/ don't take drugs and i don't drink so i'm considered boring! i do however have a church (youth) thing on this friday which im going to.

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:45 PM
I'm an athiest, I don't really believe in anything religious, so churches are more so creepy to me due to video games such as Silent Hill. wow, i'm so going to hell if I'm wrong >.>

Rhi
11-13-2006, 05:50 PM
WoW is a great game! skill is involved! neway ive now got immunity... awesome thankyou.

Mooch
11-13-2006, 05:52 PM
no problem. And since my friends are all addicted to WoW, I refuse to play it. I dont wanna waste my money XD

Haku2099
11-13-2006, 06:10 PM
wonder if there is gonna be another chapter today.

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 08:54 AM
New part is up, sorry for the no-post yesterday, I'll make up with it today with an extra hopefully. I'm ill at the moment so excuse the lazy typo's, tell me if there is *most likely is* and I'll go ahead and straighten it out. Expect the next chapter to have alot of blood in it =D!

Note: Still need bloody appearences from you guys =/

Nara Shikamaru
11-14-2006, 08:55 AM
Hi et!! I'll go check it out...

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 08:57 AM
I feel sorry for going back to Jaxon and 48 again but I just HAD to end that cliff hanger =P, at least you know Jax,48,Mib might all be teaming up later.

Sorry if I have missed alot of you out =/ I'll really try and focus on getting you in Nara 'cause your an active reader of it.

Nara Shikamaru
11-14-2006, 09:02 AM
great chapter..
Sorry if I have missed alot of you out =/ I'll really try and focus on getting you in Nara 'cause your an active reader of it.
but there is no hurry...take your time...
btw some of the dialogs were pretty funny:D

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 09:04 AM
I was trying to get the weird funny English side of James that'll show when he borders on insanity >_> If he goes insane I HAVE to add a few bits of cockney here and there...

Nara Shikamaru
11-14-2006, 09:07 AM
yeah man the 'christmas lights' part was damn funny

Miburo
11-14-2006, 10:42 AM
Yeah! Now we're getting to the good stuff! Glad DA didn't get killed, I like the old guy. ; )

And the foreshadowing seems promising too. Can't wait. ^^b

Just an updated list of deceased contestants:Living=bold, Dead=italics

Sasuke Power, number one
Coconaught, number two
Miburo, number three
Ninja 48, number four
Jaxon, number five
Shadowclone, number six
Shinobiknight, lucky seven
Slayer91, number eight
Rhi, number nine
Kluang, number ten
Mooch, number eleven
DarkAztec, number twelve
LonelyNinja, unlucky thirteen!
Oakygyrl510, number fourteen
Swt, number fifteen
Lufia, number sixteen
Nara Shikamaru, number seventeen
Lesserblade, number eighteen
Pride, number nineteen
Niru, number twenty
Kakashi S.S.4, number twenty-one
Haku2099, number twenty-two
Shinobi of light, number twenty-three.
6_Naruto_6, number twenty-four
Brendan, number twenty-five

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 10:43 AM
Thanks Miburo =D

Mooch
11-14-2006, 11:21 AM
nice one miburo. *goes to read new chapter*

edit: omg, lmao, jaxon is my hero! that was awesome! (haha, maybe the hero thing could be incorporated into the story, then boom for backstabbing! lol)

Haku2099
11-14-2006, 01:34 PM
Great Chapter evil tsunade, jaxson sounds like he might be as crazy as me LOL!

by the way, I sent you a pm with a description of me did you ever send it to jaxon so he could get my picture done, mooch can't do it she has to have a picture of me and I don't have a way to put one onto the computer.

Jaxon
11-14-2006, 01:52 PM
I've had a couple of requests for pictures lately, but I've had to sort out my tablet drivers. So tonight, I'm going to finish ShinobiKnight's at least, then do Kluangs, and if you send me a PM, Haku, I'll endeavour to get yours done as soon as I can.

On the other hand, jolly good chapter Conor. I'm glad you found a use for both my obscenely large weapon and meandering vocabulary =]

coconaught
11-14-2006, 02:39 PM
great chapter man...and seeing as you have a lot of homework and stuff you don't have to hurry up with the story, just do it when and if you have time...

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 04:24 PM
I feel like a million fresh snipped horny dogs =) I'll go and do the next chapter either today or tommorow <_< See if I get this finished by christmas I might make a special one just for christmas XD, hopefully all of it will lead to christmas though....

Nest scene I'm promising a lot of 'T^T!!!!!'

Nuerhachi Niru
11-14-2006, 05:45 PM
Bloody awesome. Literally. XD
This is some kick-ass writing, dude.

How teh hell do you find the time to do this in a matter of days? xP

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 05:47 PM
I go out at evenings, saves me from trouble within the time space when I'm bored *I.E kitchen darts....*

Rhi
11-14-2006, 05:50 PM
Yeah! Now we're getting to the good stuff! Glad DA didn't get killed, I like the old guy. ; )

And the foreshadowing seems promising too. Can't wait. ^^b

Just an updated list of deceased contestants:Living=bold, Dead=italics

Sasuke Power, number one
Coconaught, number two
Miburo, number three
Ninja 48, number four
Jaxon, number five
Shadowclone, number six
Shinobiknight, lucky seven
Slayer91, number eight
Rhi, number nine
Kluang, number ten
Mooch, number eleven
DarkAztec, number twelve
LonelyNinja, unlucky thirteen!
Oakygyrl510, number fourteen
Swt, number fifteen
Lufia, number sixteen
Nara Shikamaru, number seventeen
Lesserblade, number eighteen
Pride, number nineteen
Niru, number twenty
Kakashi S.S.4, number twenty-one
Haku2099, number twenty-two
Shinobi of light, number twenty-three.
6_Naruto_6, number twenty-four
Brendan, number twenty-five

Actually i got revived by Mooch and am now her pet Hollow or something along those lines so i'm alive now

Evil-Tsunade
11-14-2006, 05:52 PM
....0.0 Jaxon...still needing that hollow stage? I'll allow you to finally kill her =P!!!

Rhi
11-14-2006, 07:00 PM
You might not want to say "his pet", since Mooch is a girl. <.<

well i didn't know that now did i!

LonelyNinja
11-14-2006, 07:01 PM
well i didn't know that now did i!

Now you know. >.>

Edit your posts and then I'll delete mine. <.<

Ninja48
11-14-2006, 08:04 PM
Too late:
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1049/1162778974155se4.jpg

LonelyNinja
11-14-2006, 08:06 PM
You saw NOTHING!!! <.<

Rhi
11-14-2006, 09:37 PM
its fixed, its fixed

kluang
11-15-2006, 02:49 AM
Good a new chapter.....

Jaxon
11-15-2006, 01:43 PM
....0.0 Jaxon...still needing that hollow stage? I'll allow you to finally kill her =P!!!

LOL. It'd be so awesome if we ever fit that in.

Haku2099
11-15-2006, 03:52 PM
I can't wait for today's chapter, wonder who'll die next?

Evil-Tsunade
11-15-2006, 04:01 PM
There wont be one today sorry.

Mooch
11-15-2006, 04:02 PM
pfft. you suck ET. *please dont kill me yet, I like blood and gore* >.>

OOH! can I kill brendan? lol

Demi-God
11-15-2006, 04:08 PM
There wont be one today sorry.
Hurry and post :P I wanna read something fun... and bloody. =.=

Evil-Tsunade
11-15-2006, 04:22 PM
Tommorow- 2 chapters if I'm ok.

Demi-God
11-15-2006, 04:26 PM
Tommorow- 2 chapters if I'm ok.

Goodie, Ill have my picture up soon as well... just need to colour it and add more blood.

coconaught
11-15-2006, 04:27 PM
but mooch if you kill brendan than that means either me or you would have to die because me and him are alligned at the moment >.>

Mooch
11-15-2006, 04:27 PM
im not saying right away, im saying later on in the plot. I wanna be the one to kill brendan eventually, just so I can laugh in his face irl and say I pwned him. XD

Also, I dont trust anyone lol. If I were to "team up" with someone, I'd hope to kill them soon enough, due to the fact that I KNOW they'd backstab me, considering its a BR.

coconaught
11-15-2006, 04:31 PM
yeah I wanted to go solo too...but I'm ok with whatever ET does...makes it more interesting

Mooch
11-15-2006, 04:31 PM
lol same here, I just like that I killed Rhi so bloodily XD

Jaxon
11-15-2006, 04:32 PM
I reckon me and Mooch should team up at some point.
Somehow the idea of two grinning, mentally unstable people with large sword and firearms cutting a swathe through an island full of people is oddly appealing.

Demi-God
11-15-2006, 04:38 PM
Can I stab Jaxon in the eye then run?...

Mooch
11-15-2006, 04:42 PM
I reckon me and Mooch should team up at some point.
Somehow the idea of two grinning, mentally unstable people with large sword and firearms cutting a swathe through an island full of people is oddly appealing.

absolutely, but the end brawl would be horrifying o.o

coconaught
11-15-2006, 04:45 PM
yeah...well...I want to own someone with my fan >.>

Demi-God
11-15-2006, 04:46 PM
yeah...well...I want to own someone with my fan >.>

Can I fight Coco near the end and have a double KO... o.o...pleeeease

Haku2099
11-15-2006, 04:47 PM
wonder who I'm gonna kill next?
and If I'm gonna team up with anyone?

coconaught
11-15-2006, 04:48 PM
<.< so you want us to kill each other? I don't know if I'd rather feel honored that you want me to kill your, or scared that you want to kill me >.>

Demi-God
11-15-2006, 04:49 PM
<.< so you want us to kill each other? I don't know if I'd rather feel honored that you want me to kill your, or scared that you want to kill me >.>

Bit from column A a little bit from column B? = /

coconaught
11-15-2006, 04:52 PM
lol alrighty that will work >.>

Brendan
11-15-2006, 07:09 PM
What have you gotten me into mooch T_T Although the body parts exploding and stuff is cool @_@! I can't wait to fight you... ^_^

LonelyNinja
11-15-2006, 07:11 PM
I want to kill at least one person before I'm horribly mangled. <.<

kluang
11-15-2006, 07:16 PM
If I'm going down, let me take a few people with me..

Haku2099
11-15-2006, 07:53 PM
I'd like to be one of the last on the island, but what ever happens I'm sure ET is gonna come up with something great.

Nuerhachi Niru
11-15-2006, 11:30 PM
Those who live by the sword... get shot by those who don't. o.o

I just learned that. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter. I hope we get 50% more blooood. >xD

kluang
11-16-2006, 12:21 AM
I'm gonna kill that teacher slowly....

Do we have a quote??

My quote is... And now I'm back on my feet, time for the climax baby, kill the bad guys before the credit rolls.

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 06:31 AM
XD WTF? I'm planning on getting one up today =P.

Nara Shikamaru
11-16-2006, 06:35 AM
Thats awesome! can't wait...

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 07:40 AM
New chapter is up.

Nara Shikamaru
11-16-2006, 08:37 AM
awesome....just awesome!!!

Mooch
11-16-2006, 09:50 AM
okay, I'm a GIRL and I still felt that one >.>

Ouch to swt, what a way to go <.<

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 10:02 AM
=D Yay so it is brutal!

Mooch
11-16-2006, 10:03 AM
I have a vivid imagination... I so did not need to picture blood pouring out of swt's scrotum, thanks >.>

lawl. good though, keep it up : )

kluang
11-16-2006, 11:10 AM
Twist the sword while in the belly is pure wicked man........

OffTheChain
11-16-2006, 11:29 AM
que pasa? O.o


lol interesting..

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 11:36 AM
Que Pasa???? What does that mean?

Mooch
11-16-2006, 11:38 AM
que pasa = "what happened" im pretty sure.

Though I'm pretty sure that's que paso.

I'm getting confused...

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 11:41 AM
0.o What happened where?

;O;???

Mooch
11-16-2006, 11:41 AM
she probably meant "what happened?" as a shock to what i said, and hadnt read the new chapter yet :p

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 11:43 AM
=O Oh.....i donno what to do for new chapterrrrr ;O;

Mooch
11-16-2006, 11:47 AM
whoever hasnt been used, use them :p Like any writing, once you start you'll just overflow and won't be able to stop until you run out of ideas, which for most people is tough after you get going, it's starting that's hard ;p

Demi-God
11-16-2006, 11:48 AM
=O Oh.....i donno what to do for new chapterrrrr ;O;

Read this thread, youll get a few ideas :P

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 11:50 AM
I got it =D the Slayer91 and Shinobiknight combo XD!!!

kluang
11-16-2006, 11:52 AM
hmmm.. how bout some student united to go against the teacher
or
the teacher sent a psyco that was in the class and started shooting students....

4 student hiding.... one student hate the other and poison a food hope the hated one eat it, but another dude ate it... that dude shoot a student, that student stab another and the that student stab the other one... 4 killng in one go

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 11:55 AM
>_> thats from the movie is it not when the girl pukes up her stomach? NO MOVIE PIECES >=O!!!

Btw, for those in UK Battle Royal 2 is on tonight I heard =/..... I might watch it.

P.S: Teacher will be unmasked near the end =P, I wanna keep you guys guessing. Only me and Jaxon knows =_= *shoots all of you*

kluang
11-16-2006, 12:42 PM
How bout a female student using her body as a weapon/tool...

Haku2099
11-16-2006, 02:13 PM
How bout a female student using her body as a weapon/tool...

now that sounds interesting.
great chapter Evil Tsunade, can't wait for the next one.

Nuerhachi Niru
11-16-2006, 02:16 PM
It'd be awesome if all the battles were held in a place that actually exists, though. XD

Like a battle on the Eiffel Tower...or in Undeground Tokyo.
Something like that. XD

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 02:26 PM
Yes, then I have to write how they must get a train to go to each destination to kill students =P!!!

Haku2099
11-16-2006, 03:21 PM
Yes, then I have to write how they must get a train to go to each destination to kill students =P!!!

true, then we'd be waiting even longer for our characters to fight, and I can't wait to see who I kill first.

Nuerhachi Niru
11-16-2006, 05:14 PM
Lol.
Yeah, I bet you are. (i_i)

@ET: Well, it is sort of like a tournament, no?
You don't have to write how they get to there, just what happens when they get there. XD

Evil-Tsunade
11-16-2006, 05:20 PM
Well, when or if I get BR done. I'm starting BR 2, no it's not going to be the shit one that is on tonight when all of a sudden 24 people die at the start.

It will take a few weeks of planning but the story for BR 2 is pretty much BR 2 without

-24 people getting killed at the start
-When one gets blown up the other dies *when one dies the other has a day to win the tournament*
-Random weapon like in BR1 NL
-No shitty camo uniform =P

Haku2099
11-16-2006, 05:44 PM
Well, when or if I get BR done. I'm starting BR 2, no it's not going to be the shit one that is on tonight when all of a sudden 24 people die at the start.

It will take a few weeks of planning but the story for BR 2 is pretty much BR 2 without

-24 people getting killed at the start
-When one gets blown up the other dies *when one dies the other has a day to win the tournament*
-Random weapon like in BR1 NL
-No shitty camo uniform =P

sounds interesting, maybey my character can be in that one too, kinda like sephiroth, he just keeps coming back LOL!
that would be great.

Swtvi3tboi08
11-16-2006, 06:06 PM
rofl. i got killed. xD. nice way though. :D

Haku2099
11-16-2006, 06:11 PM
rofl. i got killed. xD. nice way though. :D

yeah atleast you put up a good fight, can't wait for the next chapter.

LonelyNinja
11-16-2006, 06:13 PM
Swt got a chain shot into his left testicle! XP lol

Good chapter. Who woulda thought that all the members in the story are so violent! :p

coconaught
11-16-2006, 06:16 PM
actually...I really didn't seem that violent...I was just helping somebody >.>

Haku2099
11-16-2006, 06:51 PM
me I'm just plain evil.

LonelyNinja
11-16-2006, 06:52 PM
Me.... Wait, I'm not in it yet. >.>

And I'm unlucky number 13. Yeah, that's a good sign. :rolleyes:

Haku2099
11-16-2006, 06:57 PM
Me.... Wait, I'm not in it yet. >.>

And I'm unlucky number 13. Yeah, that's a good sign. :rolleyes:

it could just mean that your gonna be one of the more grusume deaths.
so don't feel safe yet.
and by the way love the new avatar, Link rocks!

LonelyNinja
11-16-2006, 06:58 PM
it could just mean that your gonna be one of the more grusume deaths.
so don't feel safe yet.
and by the way love the new avatar, Link rocks!

I never wanted to be safe, so HA! :p

And 13 is my lucky number. o_O
Go figure. <.<

And Link doesn't rock. He pwns. :cool:

Nuerhachi Niru
11-16-2006, 08:37 PM
That chapter was kick-ass, dude.
Just like the rest, of course. xP

For some reason I'm expecting some 'backstabbing" to occur later on. o.o

Evil-Tsunade
11-17-2006, 01:36 AM
Promises: All story characters unmentioned I shall mention within the week coming. Right now coco =P. *goes to write it*

coconaught
11-17-2006, 02:23 AM
muahaha BOOMARANG FAN! Nice story man, I loved it. Keep up the blood and gore >.> I mean good work <.<

kluang
11-17-2006, 02:55 AM
Coco....you kill brendan with a fan.......0_0

coconaught
11-17-2006, 02:59 AM
yes...my weapon is a fan...YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT!?

kluang
11-17-2006, 03:10 AM
Fan like Temari's???

coconaught
11-17-2006, 03:12 AM
somewhat...yeah...not quite as big...and it's got bladed tips <.< and it's a throwing fan >.> and come back like a boomarang

kluang
11-17-2006, 03:13 AM
Like a boomerang ehhh???

Cool weapon.... Just like a rose.. beautiful yet deadly..

coconaught
11-17-2006, 03:17 AM
exactly >.> I like how conor worked it in...I was originally thinking just like a paper fan...be he made it kick ass <.<

Haku2099
11-17-2006, 01:50 PM
Great chapter Evil Tsunade.
and cool fan Coco.

DarkAztek
11-18-2006, 04:23 PM
So wait... I can't have a green lantern power ring, so I'm given brass knuckles... But another person can have a freeze gun? (Not to mention the other ridiculous weapons.) Oooookay.

Jarrid
11-18-2006, 04:39 PM
Yeah I agree thats Kinda strange...

I also find it wired how these people are so skilled with these weapons.. like they had been training with them for years.. even though there random weapons they got.. such luck.

Haku2099
11-18-2006, 04:52 PM
So wait... I can't have a green lantern power ring, so I'm given brass knuckles... But another person can have a freeze gun? (Not to mention the other ridiculous weapons.) Oooookay.

yeah that is kinda messed up, but hey I wanted clouds buster sword.
but the weapon I have is good.
@Jarrid- I happen to be great with a sword, so mine is belivible.

Evil-Tsunade
11-18-2006, 05:10 PM
>.> Fine then, you get a green lantern power ring >.> WHEN YOU RETURN.

I'm sorry but no BR will be up today =/ I'd like to keep the reason to myself but I'll make it up.

Haku2099
11-18-2006, 05:13 PM
>.> Fine then, you get a green lantern power ring >.> WHEN YOU RETURN.

I'm sorry but no BR will be up today =/ I'd like to keep the reason to myself but I'll make it up.

it's cool ET, just as long as you keep the story going it's cool if you miss a day.