yoh and comp go to kakashi for the misson.
yoh:hey kakashi sensei what's are mission.

kakashi:to day we have a mission to find a robber who has robbed ramen vendors
comp:O,K lets get going

yoh:hey comp i have a idea shadow clone jutsu (makes 15 clones)
comp:good idea.
yoh:spread out clones.
clones jump throuout the city.

Comp goes to vendors shack
Comp:Have you been robbed
vendor:no
ninja:Crap there after me
ninja runs away

yoh and clones corner the ninja.
ninja:oh crap.
yoh:hand over the money.
ninja:take it i got to get out of here.
yoh:never come back or else.

behind yoh's back ninja tries to jump him
Comp: You weakling
comp telaports to him and punches him
comp: only weaklings attack someone not looking

yoh:woh that was a close one.
kakashi:tou will become a grate shinobi.
yoh:al say

Gaara already lost the demon a long time ago by the atasuki!!!

*BEEP!! BEEP!!!*
"What is with this phone????"
Kankuro: Gaara is missin and we have realized that he is beign taken away by some mysterious ninjas fromt he sound. We know that you are at Konoha at the mintue so please look for him. He must pass by be4 getting to the sound village!
"Yes sir! I already who is behind this. It is Orochimaru and his companion Koopsta and Kabuto."
kankuro: Good, but who is Koopsta?
"He is one of Orochimaru's followers. I no that he is also an Uchiha!
Temari: No way! I must tell Shikamaru!
"What is with you Temari? You always talk about Shikamaru, and your love affairs with him. "
Temari(blushing): Well umm... I didn't like him....
Kankuru: I doesn't matter, I must tell the elders know. thank for your help, Ryoku. Remember this a S-Rank mission and are you sure you can handle it?
"Yes.Well I should be off now."
I wait in the forest in fornt of Konoha, and I see faces...
Rock Lee: What are you doing here Ryoku?
"Shut up!" and I leave and go deeper into the forest, unlike other dumb shinobis, I of all ppl have a GPS tracking system :D
"It look like there are almost going to land exactly where I am standing right now"
And so it happens.
Koopsta: It is you again...
Kabuto: Go away lousy ninj------
!WHAM! I just kicked Kabuto in the face.
"Don't you ever call me a lousy ninja!!!!!"
Koopsta: Sharingan
"Byakugan, 64 point division" it hits Kabuto and he passes out
"It is just me and you...and that kid that looks like a girl"

Randomly pops out of nowhere! Says "Hi"! "What's been happening?"

kakashi:Tomorrow were will start tranning
comp and Yoh:Yes seinsi
Later on
comp:well I think I'll practice in the forest
Yoh appears
Hey I really want to fight you no holding back

"Ryoku get out the way! This has nothing to do with you."
Ryoku: "What are you doing with Gaara and if its to destroy Konoha then it has everything to do with ME!"
*Kabuto wakes up*
Kabuto: "You little smuck!"
"Shutup Kabuto I can handle this"
Haku: "Well its time to go!"
*Haku performs some mist jutsu and traps Ryoku in a ice cage-like structure*
Haku: "You'll be released in 25 mins"
*They take off*
*While they are off Koopsta hands Ryoku a secret scroll*
"Give this to the Hokage so she'll know what Oro has in mind"
*takes off*

*I wonder what is in this scrool?*
"I let them escape on purpose Haku. Ice jutsus don't work on me because I can control ice at my own will."
I melt all the ice with a wave of my hand.
"I no longer need to follow you guys, I have all I need."
I sprint away and into the forest, back to Konoha.
Haku: I wonder what he needed when we didn't even do much at all??
He goes off and follows the rest of the group.
I sprint all the way back to Konoha at full speed.
"Ho--ka--ge--sa--ma!"
Tsunade: WHat is wrong, Ryoku?
"I letter from someone, about Orochimaru!"
Tsuande: Orochimaru??!!!
"Yes sir... I mean ma'm"
Tsuande: Tell me who gave this to you
*Think of something fast*
"I couldn't see, I was trpped by a jutsu! A genjutsu!"
Tsuande(doubtly): O..kay
"Bye"
I walk off into town into the ramen shop to take a rest."

yoh:second thougt i think that i will go for a walk see ya.
kakash:this kid is just like naruto.
comp:you mean naruto uzumaki.
kakashi:that's the one.

cimp: What a wierdo
he thinks
What aren;t you the guy who uses that lightning jutsu
Kakashi yes why
I have a form of that
shows kakashi the jutsu
kakashi:thats amazing for a ninja you're age
kakashi wonders why its only ice

runs to acadamy sees iruka sensei
yoh:hey iruka sensei do you think you can teach me a move.
iruka:o.k.

Kakashi: it's great that you able to copy my jutsu and make it your own thats what i'l work on tommorrow
comp: great well see ya tommorow sensi

yoh learned lightning bolt attack.
yoh:thanks iruka sensei.
iruka:your wellcome

the next day comp goes to find yoh
Yoh: hey what's happnen
comp: kakashi wanted us to go to the beggining of the forest
they go to the forest
kakashi:today well work on ninjutsu
Yoh:allright

kakashi:i want u two to practice on your ninjutsu together
yoh:hey comp lets try to domy fusion jutsu.
comp:lets do it
ninja art fusion jutsu tantsform in to yomp
yomp:allright haaaaaaaa.

Suddenly the fusion breaks
comp: what happened
kakashi: you guy's lost your concentration

"I need to work on a new jutsu...maybe something that combines things to together...NO! I different world is what I need. Perfect!"
I go off and start working on a world transportation device.
"Finally! It is finished!"
Jump into a world.
Ichigo: What in the world...
"I will be taking that!"
I grab soul slayer and come back to the real world.
"That was easy, now how to use it..."
Trained for 10 days and nights.
"Great I got it down, now for some action."
I run to the sound village.

comp: Lets try the fusion again lets concenttate this time
preformes hand seals fusin
comp: great we perficted it

*Back at Oro's lair some things start to unfold*
*talking to Haku, Zabuza, & Kabuto*
"Listen here Oro is planning on destroying the Leaf village and we can't let that happen. If we work 2gether with Gaara then we might stand a chance againt Oro n stop him."
Zabuza: "I dont care what we do I'm just glad to be back alive"
Haku: "yes that is true!"
Kabuto: "but Oro is our master, and we can't betray him like this."
"Kabuto he wants to just get power and he is using us for that! Understand I know he gave us all home n stuff but we gotta do soemthing about this."
Kabuto: "But how?"
"Easy b4 we left I had Haku freeze Ryoku and I gave him a scroll with the locations and info on what Oro is getting ready for. So The leaf village is already preparing for an attack and sending nins to this location."
Kabuto: "But i thought Ryoku was ur enemy?"
"Hmm well thats something you or Oro doesn't know about! I've met with him a few times and we are on the same side. I know Sound village is our home but Oro doesn't deserve to be the leader of it anymore! Plus I had them not attack the village since they know nothing about Oro or his plan."
Kabuto, Haku, Zabuza: "Ok what now?"
"We wait for Ryoku..."

Picks up a cell phone calls hokage
"Hokage-sama! About the scroll, did you read it?"
Tsuande: Yes and we are ready
"Okay! I am on my way to the sound village!"
I swing the soul slayer a few times and cut down some trees.*I know this soul slayer will be helpful since the moment I use the sealing technique, I can cut the soul so I don't have to seal it in me.* "Yea that is a good idea"
Arrived at Oro's lair

*Ryoku arrives*
"Psst... Ryoku over here"
*Ryoku goes toward Koopsta*
"Ok I know we can trust Zabuza & Haku but I got a bad feeling about Kabuto. And Sasuke is out on some mission for Oro so we need to hurry b4 he gets back. 1st you need to capture Kabuto and trap him somewhere and me & Zabuza will take this forrbiden scroll back to Leaf Village while you n Haku search for Gaara got that?"
*awaits answer*

"Okay! I am on my way to capture kabuto first."
finds kabuto who is ready to fight me
"Byakugan, 64 point division"
after that "ice capture jutsu"
Kabuto(panting):What do you want??!!
"DIE! And urusai!" put ice on mouth too
Haku and i go off to find Gaara. After room after room, I finally found him. He was tied up in a room. It seems too easy, too easy.
*there is no traps*
"Haku you go first. Haku?"
Haku turned against me and has a kunai at my throat.
Orochimaru steps in
Orochimaru: You think that Haku still has a heart? The forbidden jutsu to get them back makes me the master of them. HAHAHAHAHA! Sasuke finish him off.
"Kusou"
Haku backs off
sasuke's hidden jutsu
"Ice shield! Sharingan awaken!"
sasuke: chidori natashi
I dodge and throw a kunai. He dodges and "Katon Gakuyoku no jutus(or something like that)"
I get servely hurt on my arm
*This is going to be my last jutsu, I must hit him with this*
ox, rabbit, monkey "Chidori!!!"
ox, rabbit, tiger "kasai doragon"like chidori but with fire.
Combines them "Chidori doragon"
sprints all the way to sasuke so fast that even Flash from the justice league can't see me.
Sasuke passes out
"It is only me and you Orochimaru"
Orochimaru:(chuckles)What about Haku? Finish him. Haku?
sees him passed out on the floor too
"Heh heh, Sealing technique"
Orochimaru: Not again
but he was too late
Got Orochimaru and when his arms and head's soul was out, I used the soul slayer to cut the connestion between us then the soul itself
Orochimaru: AAARRRGGGHHH!
"Its over"

Meanwhile
Kakashi:Comp i need you on a special solo mission I know you friends with Ryoku so i want you to see how things are going
Comp:yes sensi
Heads off for sound village
At the gate orochimaru's hench men are guarding the gates
comp:I have to be careful if I mess up there's no second chance
comp uses clone jutsu to attract the gaurd's attension
as soon as he is safe in the gate clone poofs
comp:great heads to oro's lair

As I am walking back to meet Koopsta, and bumps into comp
"You again??? You sure are annoying, from Konoha I suppose"

Comp:Kakashi sent me and i rather do anything other than this so if you don't need my help to bad im stuck with you and i'm not annoying

"Sure. Like making me lose the missin nin was like totally not annoying... but this is no time for that."
We go back to the base(where Koopsta is)

as soon as we get to the base ryoku and koopsta brief me on the mission
comp:so whats next?
turns to ryoku
i'll get you ninja o.k. wait a little while

how to join

"Comp we don't need anyone else! As long as Gaara is safe then I can take care of orders for now. Ryoku I know I'm not ur trainner but I've asked some to take you off for atleast 1 year to train because I'm going to need you when we go after Itachi. I've found out that this whole time hes been using a copy of himself to travel and if I stand correct a copy only has 1/4 the power of the orig. and that copy was tuff enough so theres no telling how strong Itachi or any other memeber of the ATK. group is. I've arranged thru the 5th Hokage for Tenzo Yamato to take you off for 1 yr training... I'll train Comp. while your gone and when you get back it'll be time for the plan to unfold!"
*awaits response*

Reading a manga book (DBZ).
"Wha... oh"
Reads a little more.
"Why don't we train a year in one day"
Koopsta&Comp: What??!!
"It says in this book, the room of spirit and time. One hour is 15 days."
Koopsta: How do we get into a book??!!
Comp:Yeah?
"Easy where do you think I got the soul slayer. Oh and by the way Orochimaru can't use his head, arms, and legs cuz their soul is gone."
Koopsta: You didn't have to go too far...
Comp:wow
after an explaination of the world travel
"I will contact Goku to use it"
Koopsta: you have been there before?
"Loads of time"
Comp:Then whya re you reading about it?
"Cuz it is funny, but w/e about the trip are you going to go?"
a pause of silence

Comp:sure i'll go this could be a good experince

yoh:i got to keep pratcticing this move
ninja:yoh a gift came to you at your door
yoh opend the box
yoh:wow it's a sword it's from sora.

ninjaboy you should try getting into the story more. :)

"Great!!! What about you Koopsta???"

Hey ry(is it o.k if I cal you that)could we go tomorrow i have something i wwant to do today since oro's not a thret

"sure! We can wait. Besides you can only use the room 2x in a life time, so you should find the perfect time to do so:)"

yoh:hey comp who's your friend

comp:freind yeah right like he would be my freind dude's triyin to kill me
yoh :then since we belong to the same team we have to help each other
just then missing nin ally attacks yoh jumps out of the way but comp almost gets cut
comp:so you wannna play like that, yoh time to use the fusion jutsu
they use the fusion jutsu
Yomp(the mix of yoh and comp)time to kill you
comp thinking :what amazing power

Watching from behind the sences.

"WOW! If they have power fusing, I wonder how much power there would be if me and Koppsta were to morph!"

Yomp(in a threatining voice):Your finished
yomp uses his 2 swords that cuts the ninja a little
time to end this
they punchhim and jump in the air
yomp:yomps ultimate barrage
yomp slashes opponet 100 times then kicks him then he finishes with a strong slash

yomp:well thats about it told you you were finished.
yomp goes to exit sees ry
yomp:were you looking at us the hole time.
ry:........................ maby.

Missing ninja and allie come again and try to attack yomp from behind
yomp:I gave you a chance to live
yomp hits then in the head with the back of the sword ninja fall unconcious

yomp:ha ha ha loooooooser you suck.
ry:nice job.
yomp:oh thaks.
yoh and comp split
yoh:WOW that took up a lot of chakra.
comp:huf huf huf your right for once.
yoh:whats thats sopose to mean.

comp:Well you don't seem to smart
Kakashi appears
Kakashi: Good news I think you guys should take the chunin exams
Comp:already well i think we should do it

yoh:ALRIGHT!!!!!!!!! im going to be one step closer to be hokage.
two days later yoh and comp train with kakashi
kakashi:i am going to teach you summonigs.

Comp:kakashi most of my moves are based off of ice can you do ice summonings

kakashi:what about you yoh.
yoh:can you teach me your dog sommonig.
kakashi:when your chunin.
two days later yoh and comp go to ninja academy.
yoh:lets sign up for the exams.

comp:Sure i still think i should learn an ice summoning

"What a wierd team...they only have 2 members..."
Practices fusion dance

yoh:we are not a weard team lord hokage said we are getting a new teammate her name is koyuki.
comp:oh you mean your girlfriend.
yoh:she's not my girlfriend
kakashi:guys stop fighting.
ryoku:hey kakashi can i train with you,yoh,and comp.
kakashi:okay you could show them a thing or two.

comp:Um...i have a Question how come my chidoiri is made of ice instead of lightning
kakashi:you chacra nature is ice
comp:really
kakashi:yep

two weeks later yoh and comp learned their summonings
yoh:alrighty lets do the chunin exams.
kakashi:comp yoh follow me.

"Exam?! What exam?"
Ryoku stands in confusion...

ninja boy how about later thats way to early for the exams what about our third teamate

*walks in* sorry to intrudde. But can I join?

lord hokage walk in
hokage:this is koyuki hyuga.
koyuki:hi.
yoh:my name is yoh yakamora and this is comp.
comp:hi
kakashi:alright time to go oh welcome to the team koyuki.

"I wonder what happened to Koopsta..."
Heads off to sand village

yoh:alright lets do this
two hours later
yoh:wow that writen exam was hard i don't think i got one right.
comp:i got them all right.
yoh:your luckyfor having a IQ of over 300.
kouki:wow you must be smart.
Anko walks in
Anko:for those teams that passed meet me at the gate of the forest of death gate three days from now.
yoh:hey kakashi can train with me.
kakashi:ok
yoh wakes up in the morning kakashi walk up at yoh.
yoh:how did you get here.
kakashi:it's called a window look it up in the dictionary.
yoh:whatever lets go.
kakashi:thats all you got .
ninja walks up to yoh.
yoh:who are you.
sasuke:my name is sasuke uchiha.

"Impossible!!!!!!!!! If you are the real Sasuke you would be still in the country of sound because you just killed Orochimaru "
I can't do chunnin exam. I am a chunnin.

shino me comp and my made up character koyuki are doing the chunin exams because we arn't a chunin.

I know but he included me that is why...
Anyways back to the story...
"Damn him! I don't know where he is..."

O.K. now that were all on the same page back to the story
the 2nd exam procter (i forgot her name)Appears
Now its my turn my exam is the forest of death you must get the oppisite of the scroll you have and apear in the building exactly in the middle of the forest with both scolls to win.There are 2 scrolls earth and heavens scroll

comp recieves a scroll
procter you have 10 minutes to dissaper in the forest before it begins.You have 48 hours ready begin
ninjas scatter into the forest

Amazingly the other teammate of yours receives the heaven scroll and you had the earth scroll. When you get there and release your scrolls, I pop out.
"Huh? You again... I thought you guys werein group (some #), but I guess not"

yoh:soooooo comp what do we do now.
a boy pops out of the trees
yoh:who are you
???:my name is nekobe.
comp:he looks pretty strong.
nekobe:i have been keeping my eye on you yoh.
koyuki:i have a bad feeling about nekobe.

"Here they are...ignoring me...."
yoh:Huh?
"Now they notice...You are late for the third exam. If they call your name and you aren't there, they think you failed the second exam, so begone."

Since no one types in here for quite a while, maybe we should start a different story...

May i join?
character: kaguya komacki
Gender:male
age:15
genin
village:hidden mist
bloodline:kaguya
apearrance:white hair like the younger kimimaro, white no sleeve vest, no under shirt, long pants like kimimaro, bandaged arms like lee's, scarlet dots on forehead like kimimaro, mist forehead protector around neck

jutsus:
shadow clones
mass shadow clones
water cutting blade
water whip
hidden mist
silent killing (still training with)
water prison (weak version)

Bio:komacki was thought to be dead but he was found along the border of the hidden mist village by a couple from the hidden mist village. he has a knack for his bloodline trait like his brother, kimimaro, but he is not as adept at using it yet because he discovered that he had it only 2 and a half years ago. He is not evil like kimimaro, but he is actually simialer to naruto because he wants to be the mizukage someday and will never give up. he also has tons of chakra that, when it fully grows, will probably rival that of kisame's. And he has learned how to use the shadow clones in training.

so, can i join?

that is great, since you are ban for a while I hope you don't do that again. if you could get more members... i would like to start a new story with the same charaters.:D my character is Ryoku

Hi, I'd love to join!

Here's my character.

Name:Akiko
Age:13
Gender: Female
Clan: Haruno
Rank: Genin
Village: Konoha
Physical Appearance: Bright green eyes and light pink hair like her sister, except hers is longer and kept in a ponytail or a messy bun. Her forehead is quite small, actually.

Jutsus:
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu: Shadow Clone jutsu (learned from Naruto)
Kawarimi no Jutsu: Replacement Jutsu (Ahh, logs. Don't you love them?)
Henge no Jutsu
Currently working on Medical Jutsus and the Summoning Jutsu (with cats.)

Short biography: Akiko is just as talented as her older sister, and has great chakra control. She can spot a genjutsu in an instant. But one thing that she cannot control is...Her love for the Rower! His voice...His style...And she knows that he can beat A. A. Tusha! Hah...Just kidding. But, she will always fall for...The Kazekage: Gaara!

Hello, Akiko Haruno. Once I can get one more member again, we can start unless you want to start now?

The more, the merrier! :P

how do you recruit members?

Ehh...I don't know.

1. I know how and two can I join?

You didn't really need to ask... you could of just posted your character's info... o yeah I forgot to mention, mines is on the first page:D but yes you can join.

Question: Can I be part of the Huyga/Uchia clan?

You mean the clan that I said I was in? having the byakugan and the sharingan together? yes or whatever the other thing you really meant.

You mean the clan that I said I was in? having the byakugan and the sharingan together? yes or whatever the other thing you really meant.

Yep and ok.

Name: Renshin
Gender: Male
Age:15
Rank:Chunnin
Village: Konohagakure (Village hidden in the Leafs)
Bloodline: Hyuchiha
Apperence: http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs12/i/2006/299/2/f/The_eyefolded_ninja_by_JL89.jpg
Jutsu
All Uchiha and Hyuga attacks
Almost all Fire
Shadow Clone
summoning:Jaguar
Sealing
Forbiddin Jutsu

Info: During the night of the attack of his clan Renshin was down by the lake. When he came back the only person left was Ryoku his 'brother' in a sort. Renshin has been training for a long time so he is very skilled in all areas of jutsu.

OMG! Did you draw that? Great character...we could start anytime only if you want to:D so this FC could start doing what it is supposed to do.

No I did not draw it! Gosh everyone ask me if I draw these pics I post.

And I want to staarrrrrrrrrt now!:

Renshin walked through the forest his Shiakugan active. "Where are you I know I saw you!"

Sorry...

"..." I climb out of the bush. "Long time no see...Renshin.
I almost thought you die out of shock after seeing what happened to our clan" (said all calm and smooth:D)
" I just finished watching the genins and none of them passed, pity."

"No not really." Renshin looked him over. "Been a while Ryoku." he said. "Do you remember what color my eyes are?" he asked.

"Akiko-chan! What are you doing out so early in the morning! It has to be only 5 AM!" shouted Sakura, even though sleep was creeping up on her.

"You weren't home by 11," said Akiko, worried. "I was wondering if you were okay."

"Don't worry about me, Akiko-chan. I'm fine," said Sakura. "But I can't say the same for the Hyuchiha clan."

"Wh-why? What happened, Sakura-chan? Tooya is in that clan!"

"They were attacked, Akiko-chan. Hokage-sama doesn't know who, though. Or why."

"Wh-what? What about my teammate?"

"I don't know who survived, Akiko-chan."

Renshin heard some yelling. "Huh our clan." Renshin went to the disturbence and looked through the window. Akiko? he thought,

"Akiko, I'm going back home, and I'd advise you to follow me," said Sakura-chan in a stern voice. She started off towards their house.

"Yeah...Advise...Psh, no," said Akiko, talking to herself.

She turned her head in the direction of the forest.

Renshin-san?

Renshin waited till Sakura was gone till he climbed into the window. "Hi Akiko." he said.

(bbl later!)

"Renshin! Are you okay? What happened? Is anyone else okay?" asked Akiko in one breath. "Hey...Where is Tooya?"

He looked down. "Ryoku and I are the only ones left....I'm sorry." tears fell down his cheeks.

Tears poured down from Akiko's bright green eyes. Before Renshin could say anything else, Akiko left in a heartbeat, in the direction of Training Ground 3.

Edit: Yeah, umm, gotta leave. Sorry shino. Be on later.

*(means thinking)Confusion has struck our clan, but probably only I know what cause all the destruction...the eight tail fox. Luckily hte akasuki came for it and dismantled it. They took it with them. Renshin was down at the pool, and the akasuki thinking I was the only one left asked me to join... should I?*
"Where'd that Renshin go? I was just talking to you!What the hell happened to your eyes?"



do any of you have a AIM? cuz if you did, it would be easier to know if you are on:D no I am not a stalker or sumthing like that,, ihate it when the people I add ask.

Yeah, I do. It's just that I'm usually never on because my Buddy Info won't work and whenever I want to edit it, AIM freezes.

But my sn is: singergirl0226

No I have msn.


Renshin watched her poof off and went back to Ryouk. "My eyes need not to be seen that's why I have this scarf over my eyes." Renshin looked down. "Why.....why....did it come.....Ryouk why!"

"Why did what com-! How did you know????" Does that mean he knows about the akasuki too? "So" tryong to change the topic "how is that Akiko girl person?"

"I saw the foot prints." Renshin said.

*Whew, I guess he doesn't know then*
"Well... we have a bijuuki( i forgot what it was called) in our country and the container couldn't hold much longer. Now if you will excuse me, I have to go and finish my mission, but if you would like to follow you may, you may bring that Haruno girl with you 2

Akiko wiped away her tears as soon as she got to the cherry tree at the training ground.

"Hah! Hah! Hah!" came a voice from not far away. Akiko looked behind the cherry tree and saw a familiar kunoichi practicing with her shuriken.

"Moegi?"

Moegi recognized the kunoichi's voice in an instant. "Akiko? What are you doing here?"

"I was going to ask you the same question. Why are you training so early?"

"The Chuunin exams are next week! Did you forget?"

"Oh! Right!" Even though she had been studying her heart out for the past week, she usually forgot most things when something else was occupying her brain.

But now, she wouldn't be able to go to the Chuunin exams. Because Tooya is gone...

"Oh, and since we will be against each other come next week...Here." Moegi searched in her bag and produced a package wrapped in pink wrapping paper.

"Wow, Moegi. You really didn't have to get me anything- Oh my gosh!" said Akiko as she unwrapped the package to find a beautiful pink dress. She took it out of the box and held it up to herself.

It had a halter strap and went down to about her knees. There were ruffles in the front and it was low cut in the back, so it would show most of her backside.

"Oh, Moegi! I love it!"

Renshin scoffed. Same old ryoku. Renshin set off to find Akiko

"O and one more thing Renshin, I have to watch the chunnin exams next week...what a drag, if no one proves to be good this time...w/e"

Renshin laughed. "Same here." He found Akiko talking to someone else so he waited his turn.

Heads off in the different direction to finish off my mission. "Stolen scrolls... rank D WTF! I have to do a D-Rank mission? I do A-ranks more then D's. Geez! But wait... 50000 yen? Awesome! Some Ramen will do!"

if you want to know what happen during the mission open
I realized that the theif was actually a Hyuuga. i surprise to Konoha, which got angry and all byakugan users are banned (for a year)to use byakugan. If they do the curse mark upon their head will burn. THe head family has worse. All heads will have the mark on the hand and if they used it, their whole body will hurt.

"Hey Moegi!" called another person. The two kunoichi's looked over and found Konohomaru and Udon.

"C'mon, it's study day!" added Udon. "Hi Akiko!"

"Hi Konohomaru, Udon...Well see you later, Moegi! Thank you so much for the dress!"

"Your welcome. When I saw it, I knew it was perfect for you. Bye!" And the three new genins left.

They have no clue what they're in for...

Akiko turned around and saw Renshin standing up against a tree. Akiko's happy expression changed back quickly into sorrow.

"Umm...Sorry for running out like that...It's just that..."

Renshin held up a hand. "It's ok I know.....I didn't think you would listen to me as long as you did." He got off the tree his face sad his eyes hidden. "The thing that killed the all was......a bijju....now I wish I was there to as so I didn't have to live in sorrow." he looked down. "Sorry to ruin your mood." He turned away from her his shoulders heaving as he cried.

"Wait! Renshin!" cried Akiko. She ran in front of him to stop him, with her new dress still in her arms. Her eyes started to fill up with tears again.

"Yo! Naruto! Waz up? I heard that you are the new Hokage?"
Naruto: yep
"you're still genin in realilty*cough*"
Naruto: Shut up
" O I wanted to ask about Itachi, any luck finding him and Sasuke"
Naruto suddenly looked sorrowful.Naruto:No...
"O"I guess I can't join...geez the akasuki are stupid *imitates* do you want to join *finishes* they didn't even tell me where to find them.
"Naruto, when do I have to put the seals on the people with byakugan?"
Naruto looking out the window: Now.

He looked up. "What?" he asked his voice wavering.

"I-I'm" her voice quivered. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry it all had to happen..." Tears poured down her cheeks as she turned around and walked to her home.

"It's not-not your fault." As she walked away he grabbed her arm. "I'm sorry that....I wasn't there to help them....maybe some could have survived." He let her go. "I-I just wanted to let you know." Renshin walked off. "Why didn't he save them." He sat down punching the ground. "DAMNIT!"

I traveled to find Renshin"Renshin! I am sorry but I will have to cut you off from using your byakugan for a year!" Sad in the heart impassive on the face. "You will have to put on the seal." This has brought more unhappiness to Renshin.

Through blurred vision, she watched Renshin's actions. "It wasn't your job to protect them all..." she said, but Renshin probably couldn't hear her. "So don't blame yourself for not protecting them."

"WHAT!" Renshin looked down and grabbed it. "Ok." He put it on his hand. Pain went through his body. He had to deactivate the Byakugan. For the first time in years he took the cloth off of his eyes. His eyes where a deep red in color just like his cloth.

(Tea check your PM's...)

"sorry if you have to put the seal on.If you really think all of our clan died then you were wrong. Most of them survived, but only us few survived with our eyes. If you saw the eight tails you will become blind not dead. I gave you the wrong impression. All are in hiding and pretend to die because what would our pride become if we told everyone that we could no longer see?None knew I was part the clan, so I don't have to wear the seal. Maybe after a while and they know that you are wearing the seal, I will remove it from you."

Renshin looked up...."But I thought......." Renshin pondered this. "Some did die though didn't they Ryouk?"

"Some not all. Most of the teens survived.The rest aren't that lucky..."

Akiko looked up to see Renshin and Ryoku talking to each other some meters away. She wiped away tears on her cheeks and ran off to her home to put away her dress.

"So there is a chance that....Tooya might be alive......" Renshin pondered this.

"Chance? No it is probably a fact cuz not a dead teen was found. Anyways I think the hid among the... I will treat you to ramen and Akiko can come too. then I will tell you more" I jump into the street and run off. To he Ramen shop!

Renshin stood there dumbfounded. He walked off towards Akiko's house.

Akiko climed through her bedroom window rather than walking through her front door. She opened her closet and took out a hanger and hung the dress on it. She took one last look before putting it away.

Then she went to her desk and picked up her team picture. There was Lee-sensei (who encouraged us to train and be full of youth!) Agito, her in the middle, and to her right...Tooya. She held back her tears.

Renshin climbed up and knocked on the window. "Akiko?" he asked from outside.

I sat at the ramen shop for a while. *Itachi, I will find you and tell you the truth and join the akasuki!* "Well I am not waiting any longer! Itadikamasu!" Slurp.

"Huh?" Akiko turned around to find Renshin outside of her window. "Oh! Hi Renshin-kun!"

"Can I come in?" he asked still outside her window. He looked down at his hand. "Darn you Naruto!"

"Umm, sure but...What? Naruto?"

"Nothing it's nothing." Renshin said climbing in. "Akiko, Ryoku told me that Tooya might have survived but....." he struggled seeing as Tooya was his best friend. "He might have died they found a dead teenager body." he said looking down.

Finishes the soup and stands." I guess they aren't coming." I go to jiraya. "Old Man, any news about Itachi?" Jiraya:yes
"!"
Jiraya: He is now in the Tea Country. Why are you looking for him? Hey what did you go?
I was off to the Tea Country to find him.
"You just wait. I will kill you if you lay a finger on her..."


Umm.. Renshin, there wasn't a dead teen body found...

"Oh..." said Akiko. "But, there's hope, right?" she asked, looking towards the bright side.

To think that she would never see that goofy smile of his, or hear his latest jokes, or laugh at him when dark black hair was messed up.

"I hope so...my whole clan...." He looked up a question forming on his lips. "Akiko will you be my girlfriend!" he said fastly. He instantly covered his mouth, put his cloth over his eyes, and looked down.

Akiko blushed. "Wh-what?" she asked.

"Hey! Keep it down in there! I'm trying to sleep!" called Sakura from the bedroom next door.

"Sorry, Sakura-chan!" she said so Sakura could hear from the room. Her cheeks turned a darker shad of red.

"Umm uhh." Renshin couldn't think of what to say. "I think...I-I-i like like you."

Akiko pulled a Hinata and turned an even darker shade of red. "I-I think I like you, too."

OMG! O_o That was sudden!

Ta-thump! Ta-thump! Heart beating. *He could be in there*
Slides the door open!
"Itachi!"
Itachi looks up.
"What did you do to my sister?"
Itachi: Nothing...
"You personally killed her didn't you!"
Itachi: Accusing me? Yes, I did kill her cause she blocked me from killing one of your clan's successors-your brotherly friend's so-called "Tooya"
"!"
Itachi:If it weren't for your sister, he would have died...
"What?!"
The world seemed to die around me...Itachi whispers somethings in my ear and knocked me out cold on the floor and left.

He was still looking down. "S-so you wanna g-g-go o-o-out sometime?" he asked.

"Uh-Umm..." She paused to form the word. "Yes!"

I secretly had sent a kage-bushin to watch Renshin's every movement cuz if the thing awakes in him...it could cuz damage.

No alone times always being stalked:D

He looked up in time to see her form the word yes. "Ok umm." he checked his watch. "How about now?" he asked putting his cloth barley above his red eyes.

"Umm, okay! Hey, do you feel another chakra sense? I feel four...Your's, Sakura's, mine...But who's the fourth?"

"Ryoku's shadow clone." He opened the window and flung a kunai at it. He heard a satasfying poof. "So let's go?"

"!" Darn they knew
"Guess, I have to follow personally."

"Okay, sure!" exclaimed Akiko. She followed Renshin out the window.

Renshin found a ramen shop. "After you." he said letting her past first.

"Thank you," she said with a smile on her face as she walked past him into the shop and sat down on one seat at the counter.

"What would you like." Renshin asked. "It's all on me."

Forget it!


When did this turn out to be a love story??? :confused:

"Really? You sure? You don't have to pay for it, I can pay for my own ramen," said Akiko.


Edit: Oops. Well, we planned it.

OMFG WTF DUDE THAT IS SO SCREWED! UPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!


GTG SORRY!

I will sit on the sidelines cheering you on! While this fanclub turns to a love story, very well.:D

GTG BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, agreed. Damn you Itachi! And you for thinking that up, Ryoku!

See you tomorrow, Renshin-kun.

Sorry, but somehow I am totally out of the story, but whatever. Until the love story comes to an end, you are co-owner.

Don't worry, you're not out of the story! We need a meanwhile story to know what's going on in the world. I mean, we're just on one date.

Edit: Oh, wow. You really haven't made anyone a co-owner yet.

:D No one ever asked while my character is on a one week cruise to the Hidden Country of Mist, you can continue your story peacefully, okay?

No! Don't go! *sobs* No!

Actually I really do have to go on a trip for about 10 days to China:D I think that maybe this thread should be deleted...no one really types in here because Roleplay FC seems to be a hit... Sometimes I wonder wether anyone understands the word RPG... Life is filled with gloom. If you gave me a cup half-filled with water... I would ask "Why do you give me a half-emptycup?"

Don't delete it!

Wait a...SHINO! YOU'RE CRAZY!

...We're having fun.

Edit: Umm...brb lol

Yea don't go crap you!

...WTF is that supposed to mean?

And shino is going away soon, so we can beg him to keep this FC up. He'd have to agree with both of us because we're now co-owners.

Ahh I see.....so wanna RP for now?

Yeah, only a little bit, though. I need to help my mom clean the house.

Aww ok.

Umm where did we leave off?

Ehh, I don't know. I think we were getting ramen. ^_^

Oh yeah!

Renshin looked at her. "I'll pay for it Akiko." he simply said. "Now what kind do you want?"

"Thank you, Renshin-kun. I guess I'll have ramen, hmm, with shrimp!" she said with a smile on her face.

He smiled and turned. "Two Shrimp ramens please." The man nodded and started making them. Renshin edged his hand towards Akiko's.

Oblivious to what Renshin was doing, Akiko was looking outside of the shop at...Another shadow clone of Ryoku. Or maybe the real thing.

"Does he always follow you around?" asked Akiko. She would either laugh any second or go punch Ryoku in the face.

Renshin looked down. "Well recently....all Hyugga or Hyuchia had to have a seal put on preventing them to use Byuakugan." Renshin sighed. Renshin took a small kunai with a bomb tag and threw it at Ryoku. "He dosn't want it to activate."

"Oh," Akiko looked down. "But, what's so wrong with the Byakugan?"

Meanwhile:

The Ryoku clone gasped. "Gah!" Then, it blew up.

"Well..some Hyuggas stole a couple of scrolls so we can't use it for a year."

"Oh, I'm sorry."

Oh, this is not a good day for Renshin. I feel so sorry for him. thought Akiko.

"It's not your fault." he said. His hand with the seal was almost pure white since his hand was shut so hard. His knuckles cracked very loudly. "At least I can still you the Sharigan."

Akiko heard the crack. She hesitated before putting her hand on his closed fist.

Renshin sighed and calmed down. "It will bring emense pain...worse then the branch faimly for it hurts the whole body.

Akiko gasped. Naruto had "educated" her about the Hyuuga Branch Family and what they have to go through, and that seemed close to unbearable.

The ramen came and he handed her bowl to her. "Here. Eat up!" he said with a fake smile and a joyful look.

Akiko was confused with his sudden mood change. But, she took the bowl anyway, picked up two pairs of chopsticks and handed him one. "Itadekimasu!"

"Itadekimasu!" he said also. He ate his ramen sadly. To think because of a lower clan I can't use my Byuakugan. Just then Nartuo walked by. Renshin glared at him his red eyes glowing brighter and brighter. Naruto looked scared a little and walked off fastly.

Akiko looked up in time to see something yellow pass by. "Is it just me, or did you see the 'Yellow Flash of Konoha'?"

"Oh I saw him and I am pissed at him."

"Why? What's wrong with Naruto? I've known him for a couple years, and he's a great friend, almost like a brother," said Akiko, confused. How could anyone hate Naruto?

"He's the reason....he did nothing he knew it was there.....but he did nothing!"

"Are you sure? I assume you've met Naruto, and he isn't the brightest tool in the shed."

"Yes he knew.....that.....he told me!" Renshin laid some money on the table and ran off.

"Renshin!" shouted Akiko. She took off after him, leaving the two people working at the ramen shop confused.

"Hey, wait! You forgot your change!" the old man said.

Renshin had ran off towards where his clan used to live. "They have to be here someone." Not caring about the pain he yelled. "Byuakugan!"

"Renshin, no!" Akiko cried when she realized what he was doing. "Stop! Renshin, please!" She ran to him and touched his arm. "Please stop, Renshin!" Tears started to form in her eyes.

Renshin saw a Hyuchiha then shut off his Byuakugan. "I-I'm sorry but I think I found Tooya."

"Wh-what?" Akiko asked, now very confused. "Isn't that a good thing?" Akiko had no clue what Renshin was hinting. "Where is he?"

"Follow me." [I'll NPC as Tooya] He walked down the street.

Akiko followed him, excited. I'm coming, Tooya.

Renshin turned a corner and stopped dead. Leaning against a tree was Tooya. "TOOYA!" Renshin yelled running up to him. Tooya turned one of his eye's gone the other part milk blue. "Renshin....quick I must get to the hospital!" Renshin nodded and picked him up. "Akiko help me please"

"Tooya!" Akiko ran towards him and helped Renshin lift him up. "Oh, Tooya. What happened to you?" she said softly as she looked at his wounds.

"I....looked at the fox." he said. "Tooya baka!" Renshin said. He flickered away.

"Wh-what?" asked Akiko, looking around. "...Renshin...?"

A clone stood in his place. "Flicker to your house. Sister help." is all it said then it poofed.

"Okay...Even though I only learned this jutsu yesterday..." Akiko sighed and flickered to her house. She ran inside to the kitchen and screamed, "SAKURA-CHAN!"

"ACK! WHAT DO YOU WANT YOU LITTLE BRAT?" Sakura's temper came out.

"Tooya is hurt! Come on! Flicker to the Hyuchiha estates and heal him!" shouted Akiko.

"Fine, but on one condition," said Sakura smoothly.

"What is it?! I'll do it!"

"You're going to put your training to use and help me."

"Okay fine! Let's go!" Akiko barely even let Sakura finish her sentence. The two flickered to the Hyuchiha estates.

Renshin went to his house looking for something. "There!" he pulled out some medical supplies and ran back. "HERE!" he said tossing the bag.

Sakura caught it with ease and then handed it to Akiko. Sakura rushed over to Tooya, with Akiko in tow.

Sakura inspected Tooya's wounds. There was a gash going down his torso. "You remember that jutsu I taught you?" Akiko nodded. "Use it now. And hurry!"

Akiko made the seals and placed her hands down on Tooya's torso. Chakra flowed from her hands to his wound.

That's it, Akiko-chan. Sakura tented to his other wounds, including a deep cut on his right leg.

Renshin looked luke he was going to heave.

Sorry I was out, I went on a vacation. So, anyone on?

Yo yo yo Tea Tee...check teh advertisment please!

What time is it there? OMG its 5 o'clock. I came at a bad time:D

I guess the thread is doing well...

That afternoon at Konoha,
"Naruto, it is a bad idea. *pant*You can't put the seal on them. You unbelievable lier!*pant* You are a horrible person *pant* at keeping your promises. You tell me what you said *pant* at the third chunnin exam at the fight of you and Neji."

A moment of silence.

Naruto put down his head, tears in his eyes yet covered by the hat. Quickly performed a release justu.

Finally over, I forgot about what Naruto said about that sry.:D

Huh? What advertisement?

I'm sorry. I'm slow.

Uhh never mind I'll get an infracition..

Renshin felt a tingling and looked down. "It's it's gone!" he yelled! He activated his bloodline and put the rag over his face again.

"Thank you Hokage-sama..."
Loud cheers out the windows made by the Hyuuga-clan. Head family came to the office with lots of presents, which was abnormally easy to get...:confused:
I run off to the Ramen shop.

"Huh? What?" Akiko asked. She found that the wound she was healing was gone.

"Good job, Akiko-nee-chan," said Sakura, tending to a few other slashes on Tooya's body. Then she looked at Tooya's eye. "This doesn't look good..." she stated.

Renshin looked at his eyes. "I know how to do this." Renshin foucsed some chakra in his hands. "By the power of the Hyuchiha clan I commonad this eye to hell." Tooya's body jerked then stoppe. His eye was healed.

Sakura and Akiko were astonished.

"Wow, I've been researching things about healing eyes and never have I thought of that," said Sakura. "But I don't think it will last for long. I'll take him to the hospital for some rest." Sakura picked up Tooya and headed off for the hospital.

Akiko watched them leave.
Be strong, Tooya.

Renshin stood their gasping. "Fun." he said then collapsed.

"Renshin!" Akiko shouted. She rushed over to him and pulled him onto her lap. "Renshin? Are you alright?" Akiko held his hand in hers.

Renshin opened one eye. "To much chakra I used." he said smiling at her. He pulled her into a hug.

Akiko blushed and wrapped her arms around Renshin. "Try not to next time, okay?" she asked, joking with him.

He laughed. "Ok I'll try." he said smiling. He pushed himself into a sitting position and helped Akiko up. "Well of to the hospital we go."

"Thanks," said Akiko after Renshin pulled her up. "Alright, let's go to the hospital. But we have to remember to stay out of Sakura-nee-chan's and Tsunade-sama's way." Akiko knew how powerful their wrath is when combined.

"Yeah I've heard some stories of their might when their angry." Renshin grabbed her hand and walked down to the hostpital with her.

Akiko walked along with him. Tooya will be okay, I know it.

Renshin pulled her closer and wrapped an arm around her waist. As they arrvived he activated his bloodline. "2nd Floor Room 221." he said.

Akiko wasn't really paying attention at the moment and was focusing on the arm wrapped around her. "Oh? What? Oh, right." Akiko blushed in embarrassment.

Renshin walked inside with his arm still wrapped around Akiko. He walked up to the front desk. "Hello we're here to see Tooya Hyuchiha."

The woman at the front desk replied, "I'm sorry, but you can't see him right now."

"WHAT?" asked Akiko, enraged. She tried to break away from Renshin's grasp in an attempt to strangle the poor woman's throat. Akiko was known for having her sister's temper.

Renshin held her back. He let her go. "Why not! You denie my from seeing my own blood!" he yelled. Renshin jabbed her in both shoulder where her chakra system was.

Wait...Ino, translate. Me? Or the poor woman at the desk?

The poor woman.

(Oh God, that's horrible. lulz)

Akiko watched with saucer eyes as the poor woman shook in fear.

"S-s-sorry ab-bb-out th-th-tha-aat. G-go on ah-hea-ead."

Thank Kami it's a slow day in the hospital.

Renshin frowned and beconed to Akiko.

"I'm sorry you had to see that Akiko but we have to see him."

Renshin was going to rap an arm around her but decided against it.

Akiko nodded silently and followed Renshin to Tooya's room.

When they got there Renshin looked at all the tubes hooked up to him. "Tooya I'm sorry." he sighed.

Akiko gasped. She looked at her sister, sitting in a chair and taking notes. "Sakura-nee-chan? Is all this necessary?"

"We just want to make sure he's okay, Akiko," Sakura said in a comforting tone.

Akiko walked over and gently sat on the end of the bed. "Oh...Tooya..." She felt as if she was going to cry.

Tooya grabbed both of their hands. "Thank you." he said in a raspy voice. Renshin smiled as tears fell down his face.

Akiko now started to cry. "Oh, Tooya. You didn't deserve this!"

"No i didn't." he said. "But I'm glad it happened."

"Huh? But why?" Akiko asked. "Almost you're whole clan was wiped out and you're 'glad it happened'?" choked Akiko through the tears.

"Well most of the clan had a plan...only a few of us, us being Ryoku Renshin and I, wern't part of it. They wanted to destroy the Leaf Village." Tooya finished. Renshin nodded.

Akiko gasped. Sakura looked up from her papers in shock. Shizune and Tsunade, who just walked into the room, stopped in their tracks. Shizune even almost dropped Ton-Ton. "What?" asked all four kunoichis.

"Eh-ehh?" added in Ton-Ton.

Tooya and Renshin looked at each other. "Yes well." they started explaining. (make something up ok?><)

(You run out of ideas? lol)

The four shinobi and one pig listened as they took turns explaining. It seemed that the elders of the Hyuchiha Clan believed that they were superior to others in Konoha, and they planned to destroy everyone in the village. Then, they could rebuild it with them in power.

"That's horrible!" shouted Tsunade. The three other kunoichi nodded their heads in agreement, with looks of astonishment on their faces.

"Squee, squee," Ton-Ton oinked. (lol Such a cute pig.)

(lol piggy and yes kinda)

Renshin and Tooya nodded. "Yeah but the worst part..." Renshin paused. "They were going to....rape all the women and decapitate all the men and not bury them." he finished crying.

That did it. Tsunade started to build up anger. "WHAT?!?!"

Shizune dropped Ton-Ton with a shriek. Ton-Ton squeaked in dissapointment.

Sakura dropped her papers. "Kuso...Why?" she said through gritted teeth.

"Oh...My..." whispered the youngest of the four, and fell off the hospital bed.

(Oh my God, you are horrible!)

They both nodded crying.

Akiko sat on the floor and started crying. Ton-Ton went over to Akiko and she picked up the little pig in her arms. "Why...Why do people have to be so cruel?"

"Because our clan was flawed." Renshin said punching a hole in the wall. He jumped out and ran off.

Yo! Anyone on?

MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Hey! Just got back from the Simpsons Movie. It's great!

So, wanna RP?

Cool and YESSS!

Alright, I'll pick it up where you left off.


Akiko watched Renshin leave. "I better go after him." Akiko stood up and placed Ton-Ton back into Shizune's arms. She walked over to Tooya and gave his hand one last squeeze. "Tooya...You're stronger than I'll ever be." Akiko then left the room and followed Renshin.

Tooya shoo his head. "No I'm not." he said.

Akiko chose not to hear him. She knew what he said wasn't true. Instead she focused on the figure down the hallway. "Renshin?"