What I'm Called [Archive]

Gemakai

03-20-2005, 04:29 PM

This is a little Gaara poem I wrote one day during this one creative writing club meeting my friend forced me to come to...I should go back though... but I digress...

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Do you see these wounds,

These scars upon me?

Scars representing

All my misery?

No, of course not,

And why would you care?

Afterall, your kind

Had place them here

You said you loved me

Like mother did before

Then you betrayed me,

Resented me, even more.

Gaara, what you called me,

A demon that loves himself.

I live for my existence

And no one else.

People’s eyes, they hate me!

I see it day by day!

So why should I care

Of what they say?

I’m always alone,

With scars buried down

Deep into my soul

Now, love can’t be found.

Gaara, I am called,

A demon that loves only himself.

I live for my existence

And no one else…

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And there you have it. Undeniable proof that I've gone batcrap freaking insane!

Yunacat

03-20-2005, 05:30 PM

You haven't gone insane. That poem is very true. It's probably pretty much how Gaara feels and thinks too. It's the sad truth of him... I liked it so much i feel like writing one myself... >> << >> << >> ^^

Jaded_Ninja_23

03-20-2005, 05:53 PM

Wow, I like that, makes me think of the stories I used to write when I was in school. *sigh* I love the poem though, Yunacat's right, It probably is what he's thinking though.

OffTheChain

03-21-2005, 04:23 AM

that is so true and yet soo sad :( , but its really good poem, :D

Kites

03-30-2005, 12:49 AM

dang man!!!!! you got some nice rythems there! I live for exsitance and nobody else!!! omgz man that was pimp!

UND3R D0G

03-30-2005, 06:32 AM

thats was quite poetic gemakai......nice flow to it

moomunky

03-30-2005, 06:36 AM

very niceindeed *snaps fingers repeatedly in an applause type way*

Roy Mustang

03-31-2005, 12:05 AM

omg ITS THE SIGN OF THE APOCOLYPSE GEMAKAI MADE AN AWESOM POEM run!

nelsonkong

03-31-2005, 01:29 AM

Good poem..that's Gaara..Great one.

Dizzykilla

03-31-2005, 03:55 AM

yeah i agree with all here..................u made a great poem there..........u should do a nother one........about Rock lee...........he so dreamy...................out.

Mistress_sfc

04-01-2005, 01:58 AM

I agree with everyone. Very, very nice poem! I write poems myself, maybe I should do one about one of the characters of Naruto too.

Ok wait, thought about it, and it might not be such a good idea. I suck at writing poems. :D Lets stick with Gemakai as a poem writer. ;)

Dizzykilla

04-01-2005, 09:40 PM

Dam girl.............that pic is hott............j/p........look do one about rock lee plz..............out.

Gemakai

04-01-2005, 11:00 PM

LightDreamer

04-01-2005, 11:44 PM

I love it! Keep writing xD It's so great =]

Swtvi3tboi08

04-02-2005, 12:22 PM

i think its good. good job. i like the poem about gaara.

Dizzykilla

04-02-2005, 07:04 PM

yes sir............write anoter one soon ok .............for ur fans...........

NinjaPirate

04-10-2005, 08:56 PM

Whoa, that was wonderful...(haven't used that word in awhile). You have lots of talent Gemakai, please write another poem soon.

YoruWoNukeru

04-23-2005, 11:47 AM

Wow! Your really good! Keep writing! ^_^

Kiarae

05-16-2005, 02:19 AM

Wow, so I'm the official Naruto Poem Writer?

SUCCESS! I HAVE MADE A LEGACY FOR MYSELF!

Kora: Gem! You're making a retard of yourself!

I am? Oh.....uh.......um....HENTAI FOR ALL!

Kora: *slaps him* Baka!

Kiarae: *slaps Gem as well* You know better than that!! *slaps Kora* And you, I'm the ONLY one allowed to hurt Gem, you got it!?

Kora: *nods slowly* Yes Ma'am.

Kiarae: Good. *nods and then looks at Gem* Oh, and by the way, great poem.

Gemakai

05-16-2005, 07:09 PM

T.T Owie. Sorry, Kiarae-chan.

yami_youkai

05-16-2005, 08:18 PM

that poem was awesome... i have passion for poems too but that was way cool.. ^^