Well ive made a few more new characters for my manga Zanzou Rider to do with ninjas and a similar life of naruto...but not exactly....Te two new charries ive made is this girl called Kaede Knight with her summoned monster and one of the many legendary shinobi (and the weakest and youngest of all the legendary shinobi) Yukasho. Hope ya like em coz theres plenty more, but there will come to a time wen i stop posting them so as not to give out every character b4 the manga :p


http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-KaedeKnight.bmp.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-LegendaryShinobi.bmp.jpg

loving the charries!!!! the first one of the girl, she reminds me of one of my charries i havent put up (for the same reason as you, i dont want to give away everything XD) her weapon is a paintbrush, but has 2 sizes... one similar to the pencil one your knight is holding, and the other is a huge one that is about the size of her leg. two of her attacks (just cause i thought i'd share them) are invisible paint, where she draws a symbol in the air with the big brush and thrusts her arm through it, making the jutsu work (im not telling what it does XD). the other takes a bit longer and she draws a picture, and when she signs it, the signiture glows and the picture comes to life, the paper then burns up. but it takes a long time to prepare, so isnt usuful unless she's protected.

i just had to mention that, cause thats what your knight reminded me of. and the other guy looks awesome!!!!! very cool indeed. i like the outfit

y thanks moo....u kinda scared me wen ya said the "she draws a symbol in the air with the big brush" part....man i must be reading to many minds XD....i just cant wait to see yours soon :D

hehehe by that i take it you had a similar idea then XD hehehe it wouldnt be the first time we did this XD i cant wait to see what you do with your knight too.. i would love to see it

yup....we think the same too much XD.....yea same with your charries too...my scanners working now so ill do plenty loads.....especially with Coach randell...:D lol.....me is going to go now..laterz

^^I PMed you my character. plzz,plzzz, draw it.

yes kites ma man i willz ok... XD

Well i made yet another character and well her name is Kaede Knight..here ive made a short but two page comic as how she does some of her special moves....its rough and quickly done but just take a lookie..^^

Page 1: http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kaedeknigtcomic1.bmp.jpg

Page2: http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kaedeknigtcomic2.bmp.jpg


and here is one of the characters requested by ma pal kites for me to draw:

http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kites.bmp.jpg



All the others are gonna b drawn so no worries

I am loving the drawings cant wait for more.

thanks 6N6^^

The symbol the girl painted; I just took it entirely the wrong way. I'm sorry, but it seriously looks like something else. ROFL

The drawing of the shinobi: he's fat.

Those are my only comments, for now...

lol please tell me what did ya think it looked like? ^^ i need to know to make improvements :P

*hold a sec are you hinting something silly or rude* :p

i take it you meant to draw the symbol of fire, right? in japanesse right? if so, you could look on a sight for the symbol... but you can still tell what its meant to be

http://www.dviouzcollections.com/images/designz/thumbs/fire.jpg

like this if it is meant to be fire

yup thats right ^^

yup thats right ^^
like i said thoug.. it might be a little off, but you can see what it is obviously meant to be

Well i made yet another character and well her name is Kaede Knight..here ive made a short but two page comic as how she does some of her special moves....its rough and quickly done but just take a lookie..^^

Page 1: http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kaedeknigtcomic1.bmp.jpg

Page2: http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kaedeknigtcomic2.bmp.jpg


and here is one of the characters requested by ma pal kites for me to draw:

http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kites.bmp.jpg



All the others are gonna b drawn so no worries
will you marry me? 10/10

Clearly, what it is meant to be and what it looks like, to me, are different.

Yes, I was insinuating something extremely perverted... ;)

will you marry me? 10/10


I guess wat you were implying is that you liked it...well thats good then :D

yea i know the symbol kinda went wrong...i was supposed to check it but i guess i did it out of memory :o ...but later i'll fix it to look better :D

@Satone...lol i thought soo... :rolleyes:

Cool characters OffThe Chain2. I hope Zanzou Rider gets a lot of cool characters. I hope you have fun with it! ^_^

Well i made yet another character and well her name is Kaede Knight..here ive made a short but two page comic as how she does some of her special moves....its rough and quickly done but just take a lookie..^^

Page 1: http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kaedeknigtcomic1.bmp.jpg

Page2: http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kaedeknigtcomic2.bmp.jpg


and here is one of the characters requested by ma pal kites for me to draw:

http://usera.imagecave.com/OffTheChain2/a-kites.bmp.jpg



All the others are gonna b drawn so no worries

Nice comic. I would like to see what you could do if you took your time. Let's see...I guess I'll critique it. Behind Akaede in the first page there are clouds near her, and unless she's in the air, which it doesn't seem like until the next page, that looks very awkward. In another part, it seems that her brush is casting a shadow on the cloud, which led to a "WTF?!" moment. Very nice comic, though. When you get done with any more of it, be sure to post it here.

Nice comic. I would like to see what you could do if you took your time. Let's see...I guess I'll critique it. Behind Akaede in the first page there are clouds near her, and unless she's in the air, which it doesn't seem like until the next page, that looks very awkward. In another part, it seems that her brush is casting a shadow on the cloud, which led to a "WTF?!" moment. Very nice comic, though. When you get done with any more of it, be sure to post it here.
^^ no comment on the kites picture?!!!

and yes, please post MORREEE!!!!!!!!

EDIT you got zanzou rider from a phrase they used in a naruto season opening right?

@Meteorain27: thanks 4 da comic...yea it isnt the best ive done..like i said it was just a quick 15min sketch of what Kaede's powers were like since everyone wanted to see wat it was like...and yup if i had lots more time, i'd definately do much better than what ive done..

@Kites: yup you ogt it. i got the name Zanzou Rider from the song Go in naruto...the 4th opening song? Seeing as in the series it had a kinda big change from Zanzou Rider to dangan liner it just went belistic...and the word kinda has a ring to it so i thought i might as well use that name ^_^

Nice work OTC...anymore??

Nice work OTC...anymore??
^^yes! mooree plz!

pretty cool. not the best ive seen tho.

thanks...yup i learn from other sources..like my cousin who rocks...and my friends. Yea of course it wouldnt be the best ^ ^ there are hell of alot of people who can do ten times better than i could, like moomunky and people even better than that.... but im glad you all liked it.

Later i'll post more so hold on

Cant wait for the other pictures.

Yeah...will the charactor that I have created be up??

yea it will NK just give me time ^__^

Heres a picture of Tsunaka Misashi's split personality...rough but it will do
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v655/LenTL/Fanart/TsunakaMisashi1.jpg

lol. cool pic otc.

yea its cool...keep at it

Nice one....OTC. Just a little suggestion...why don't you make one of them bear the ying logo and the other the yang logo....i mean on the shoulder?

thanks...lol...yea NK i was gonna do that but then i realised i accidently made the yang patch on Light TK bigger than the yin and vise versa for evil TK

Really good! 10/10!

Keep making those cool characters! ^_^