original characters, and well its the frst time i tried to put two of characters in the same page O.o...yeh, i might work on it more later, but i;ll just post this now, seeing as that most of the time i try to make things better i make things worse O.o

i kno i ain't that good, but im tryin..to try O.o. ^^;;
well here it is
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v280/kirus555/IMG.jpg

its good, you should make the hands a bit bigger that's about it!:D keep it up:D
9/10:D

hey, it's nice
but i think u should color it
anyway, nice job! 8.5/10

cool pic, all that needs to be done is the hands could b a tiny bit bigger and if ya dont wanna colour it some shading would make it look nice ^^, 9/10