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shadowclonexpert 01-31-2007 08:43 PM

Return of Uzumaki
I got this from a site a friend wrote this

Chapter 1
A yellow haired man was walking over a path surrounded by forest. Walking in front of him was a middle aged man with white hair that went all the way down to his heels. "Are we there yet?" The yellow haired man whined. "For the ninth time, no, Naruto!" The elder snapped at the man known as Naruto. "Sorry Jiraiya, it's just that it's been so long, I wonder if Sakura gave up on Sasuke yet?" Naruto said as he looked up at the sky. 'That boy is still after Sakura? Heh, he's still as persistent as ever." The man known as Jiraiya thought. "Say, Naruto. What's the first thing your going to do when you get back?" Jiraiya asked as he came to a halt. Naruto walked past Jiraiya as he pondered his question. "Please don't say ramen..." "Eat ramen!" Naruto yelled as he stopped and turned towards Jiraiya, who sighed under his breath.

"I'm sorry sir, but you'll have to identify yourself." A guard standing in front of the gate into Konoka asked Jiraiya, who became mildly annoyed by the man. For the last fifteen minutes, Jiraiya was trying to explain to the man who he was. Naruto was leaning against the gate wearing his childish grin as his mentor was driving himself crazy. "I told you before, I am one of the three sannin of Konoka, Jiraiya!" Naruto's mentor yelled at the guard. "With all due respect sir, you don't look like a ninja, let alone a sannin. And your to old to be a ninja..." The guard said. At this point Naruto burst out laughing. "Alright, I've had it... Rasengan!" Jiraiya yelled as he cut a hole into the gate using his chakra. The guard's mouth fell open as both Naruto and Jiraiya walked through the gate. "That gate was unlocked, you know..." Naruto said while glaring at Jiraiya.

"You havn't been back for an hour and you already broke one of our gates!?" The Fifth Hokage yelled at the sannin. "blame your incompetent guard for not believing that I was a sannin, Tsunade." the man shot back. Naruto was standing in the back of the room with Shizune. Both were staring at how the sannins argued. "And what did you do?" Tsunade asked as she glared at Naruto. "Nothing worth mentioning... But I do have a request." The man said as he met Tsunade's glare. "A request? You being so polite is unusual, even if you would spend five years of learning manners." Tsunade said. "Well, could I participate in the next chuunin exams?" Naruto asked. Tsunade pondered it for a moment. "Considering all you have achieved, I suppose I can ask the other kage's what to do with you at the next meeting." Tsunade said, lighting a smile on Naruto's face. Shizune grinned from the other side of the room as Naruto hopped out of the room happily. "We both know you don't need the permission of the other kage's to promote Naruto to chuunin." Shizune said, slightly confused. "Who said anything about promoting him to chuunin?" Tsunade answered with an evil glint in her eyes. Shizune thought about it for a moment, then started laughing. A clueless Jiraiya slowly made his way to the door.

Naruto walked up to his old appartment and saw a letter hanging on the door. Naruto plucked the letter of the door and started reading it.

"Dear reader, the owner of this appartment has been moved to his own house in this street, house 7B. This was ordered by the fifth hokage."

Naruto taped the letter back on the door and made his way to said house. The house was not very big, but it was a great improvement from his appartment. Naruto found the door open and walked in. "Is anybody here?" Naruto said as he made his way towards the living room. "Oh, your finally back, Naruto?" a voice asked from behind him. "Yamato-sensei?" Naruto said as he turned towards the source of the voice. "What are you doing here, sensei?" Naruto asked. "I live here, Naruto..." Yamato said in a patient tone. "Whaaaaaaat? But I thought this was my house! Does that mean I have to live with you?" Naruto said as he cursed Tsunade in his mind. "Yes, I have to make sure Kyuubi doesn't try anything fishy..." Yamato said as he gave Naruto a blueprint of the house. "Now, some rules, be home by midnight, no bringing girls here, like you could get any, and most imporantly : keep training." Yamato said with an amused smirk on his face. "So, this is what it feels like to have a father... I'm eighteen and now Tsunade lets somebody take care of me?" Naruto thought as he went to eat.

Naruto was walking down a street, looking for some familiar faces. He had already bumped into Shikamaru and Chouji, and he could've sworn hearing Hinata a number of times. When Naruto passed the hospital he heard a familiar voice shouting. Naruto walked into the hospital to see Sakura ordering the doctors and nurses around. When she saw Naruto she almost fainted. "Naruto!!! You come back to Konoka and you didn't even give me call?" Sakura said as she walked towards Naruto looking threatening. Jumping back and holding his hands up in defence, Naruto started sweating heavily. "Hey, take it easy Sakura, I had a lot on my mind, can you forgive me?" Naruto pleaded, fearing Sakura's wrath. Sakura calmed down before dismissing Naruto with her hand. "Fine, fine, just don't let it happen again." She said getting back to work. Naruto sighed and ran home before somebody else tried to kill him.

Naruto was standing in Tsunade's office, still half asleep. A knock on the door brought him to attention as he saw the others from the rookie nine enter together with their teachers. "What's going on, Tsunade-sama?" Ino asked as she saw who was in the room. "Your all being sent to a newly made village called 'Root'. It is located on the other side of 'The Great Naruto Bridge' in the mist village that was under control of Gatou until 6 years ago. You will stay there until the village has gotten strong enough to take S missions. The leaders of the village will be the jounins Asuma, Kakashi and Kurenai." Tsunade said calmly, observing all of the ninja in the room carefully. "Why do we need to make a second village?" Sakura asked. "Because the village where you will be heading is the weakest place in the land, so we have to reinforce it, and in the event that sound attacks, we can evacuate the civilians to Root. And if Konoha would ever be destroyed, we can regroup there and prepare to rebuild Konoha. Any other questions?" "Will Yamato-sensei come with us?" Naruto asked, concerned that the Kyuubi might weaken the seal. Tsunade merely nodded once. "Jiraiya and Shizune will also join you. You will be assigned with jobs when you arrive in Root. You leave tomorrow at dawn, get a good nights rest. Dismissed!" Tsunade said as all the ninja dissapeared.

Naruto rushed into his house and into his room to start packing. "Hey Naruto, getting ready to leave tomorrow?" Yamato asked as he came into Naruto's room with a cup of tea. Naruto merely nodded and didn't notice the wide grin on Yamato's face. "He's just like his father." Yamato thought as he went back to his room.

The day of parting had come and a lot of people had gathered at the gate, most were coming along, like civilians, ninja's, academy students, and more. But some just came to wave them off. Naruto sat down on a stone and watched the people say goodbye to their relatives. After ten minutes both Shikamaru and Chouji joined Naruto. "This whole trip is going to be troublesome..." Shikamaru sighed. "For you, even sleeping is troublesome." Naruto mocked the lazy Nara genius. Chouji opened a bag of chips and grinned slightly at how his friends argued. "Really, all you guys do is argue..." Ino said as she and Sakura sat down with them. Naruto grinned at the comment and gave Shikamaru a gentle push towards Ino. Shino and Kiba jumped out of a nearby tree and sat down with the group, watching the gate. Soon all of the rookie nine were sitting on the grass next to eachother, quietly watching people say goodbye to their friends and family. "Havn't been back for two days and I get sent away again... Does Tsunade have something against me?" Naruto whined making everyone laugh. "Say Naruto, why did you need to know if Yamato was coming?" Chouji asked, making sweat appear on Sakura's, Sasuke's and Naruto's head. Naruto looked over to Sasuke who slowly nodded his head. "Well, you all know the Kyuubi right?" Naruto asked, and when he saw everyone nod he took a deep breath. "Eighteen years ago, on the night I was born, the Kyuubi was locked inside of me." Naruto said, making everyone's eyes widen, except for Sakura's and Sasuke's, who already knew about this. "Yamato's 'bloodline' as you may call it, allows him to keep the Kyuubi under control, in case he gets out." Naruto said, letting the information sink into his friends. There was a minute of silence. "That is sooooo cool!" Ino squeeled, making an end to the silence. Shikamaru patted Naruto on the shoulder once and they started talking about moving once more.

Fire Shadow of Konoha 01-31-2007 09:21 PM

Re: Return of Uzumaki
Hey thats pretty cool i like how you made them acceptable of it

YondaimeUzumaki 02-01-2007 04:41 AM

Re: Return of Uzumaki
End kinda came from nowhere but it's alright, I like so far the new village thing could be interesting.

shadowclonexpert 02-01-2007 07:39 AM

Re: Return of Uzumaki
xD thx anyways here da next chapter

Chapter 2
Naruto sighed. He didn't want to leave Konoha again. Nor did he want to tell his friends about Kyuubi. "At least they took it well, unlike most adults in the village." Naruto thought as he let himself fall back into the grass. "Alright people, we're moving out!" Asuma shouted from the front of the caravan. Naruto cursed under his breath and ran towards it.

The trip itself was without problems, even though Shikamaru was calling it "Troublesome" the entire time. When they had arrived in the mist village their mouths fell open. Everything was named after Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke & Kakashi. "Alright, we're staying here for an hour and then we'll make our way over the bridge." Asuma yelled as everyone made their way into town. Naruto ran off into a ramen shop named after himself, shortly followed by Yamato. "Ohayo sir, what'll it be?" The cook asked. "Miso ramen, please, and what do you want Yamato-sensei?" Naruto asked as he sat down at one of the bar seats. "I'll have the same, please." Yamato said as he sat down next to Naruto. "We don't get a lot of strangers around here, let alone konoha ninja, mind if I ask why your here?" the cook asked as he sat the bowls of ramen down in front of them. "There you are, blondy." A voice called from behind Naruto. "Hey Sai, I'm suprised your not dead yet, with your selection of names..." Naruto said as he turned to face the slightly older man. "Naruto... Can't you and Sai ever get along?" Yamato mumbled as he gulped down some of his noodles. He was also the only one to notice that the cook's mouth fell open after Yamato said that sentence. "Bandits!" A voice boomed from the street. Naruto, Yamato & Sai took this as their cue to run out of the shop.

"Weak, your all weak!" The leader of a small group of bandits said. "Well, they arn't ninja's.." Naruto said from the other side of the street. "Oh look, these guys have imitation headbands!" one of the bandits snorted. "Why don't you see if I'm a match for you guys or not?" they had already attracted some viewers on the rooftops. "Arn't we going to help him, Kakashi-sensei?" Sakura mumbled from next to her teacher. "We both know he can take them on easily, and I'm sure everyone here wants to see Naruto in action." Kakashi said as he focused both his eyes on Naruto. The bandits all drew their katanas and rushed at Naruto head on. Naruto simply cut through the katanas with his bare hands as a hot knife cut through butter. "Interesting, he's using his chakra to turn his hands into lethal weapons, but the layer is so thin that it cannot be seen..." Kakashi said as he hid his sharingan eye. The bandits fell to the ground soon enough and Naruto places his foot on the leader's chest. "W-what are you?" The leader muttered as he looked at the ruined katanas. "I am Uzumaki Naruto, and if I ever see you here again, I'll be cutting you into pieces." Naruto said as he tried to tune out the various cheers coming from all directions. "Alright, listen up, we're leaving in five minutes! Meet at the bridge." Asuma's voice boomed through Naruto's headphone.

Naruto was chatting with the rest of the konoha nine when Root came into view. "Alright everyone, your jounin instructors will escort you to your appartments, bad news is that you'll have a roommate, worst news is that one out of 3 will be stuck with his jounin instructor." Kurenai said, resulting in a lot of groans in the group. Five minutes later Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura & Kakashi were standing in a hallway. "Me & Sasuke will occupy appartment 7. Naruto & Sakura will occupy appartment 6. Wipe that smile off your face Naruto, your in seperate bedrooms." Kakashi said resulting from laughs from the team.

"With all due respect Kakashi-sensei, but why did you put Naruto & Sakura together?" Sasuke asked. "Two reasons. One, he is starting to look like me, meaning that he's always late. Hopefully Sakura can change that. Two : I don't wanna be stuck with Naruto 24/7 for months on end, I'm sure you think the same way." Kakashi said before heading towards the kitchen. "Oh, and there's another, small, reason. There won't be any ramen in town for the next two weeks..." "Poor Sakura..."

"I'm telling you Sakura I won't peek on you while your asleep!" Naruto said. "That's what they all say..." Sakura shot back. "Oh come on, we've been on how many missions? And how many times were we forced to sleep outside together?" Naruto said trying to cleanse his name. Sakura thought about it for a moment before waving him off. "Fine, fine, but your cooking tonight!" Sakura said, leaving no room for discussion as she closed the door to her room.

Naruto awoke the next morning to a pair of eyes looking straight at him.. He shot up, headbutting the stranger, who fell to the ground. "What is your head made off? Metal?" The stranger yelled at him. Naruto turned around to see that Sakura was the stranger. "What the hell were you doing?" Naruto asked as he rubbed his forehead. I came to wake you up lazy bum, we have to meet at the main office in an hour, they're distributing tasks." Sakura said as she saw Naruto run out of the room, grabbing his clothes along the way.

"Sakura & Shizune will lead the hospital. Chouji, Kiba & Shikamaru will become teachers at the academy. Sasuke & Jiraiya will be in charge of defence. Naruto will become my assistant and all the others will have to get ready to take missions and students." Kakashi said. Everyone left to get ready for work until the only one left standing across Kakashi was Naruto. "Why pick me as your assistant? Shizune has more experience at it and Sakura can manage the hospital without her." "You want to know the real reason? Fine. If one of the Akatsuki or Orochimaru were to attack Root, you would be the best chance we have to fight them off. Which is why I gave you a position as close to town as possible. That and it'll help you see how hard it is to be a hokage." Kakashi said with a serious look in his eyes. Naruto pondered about it for a moment. "Fine, but I wanna do the mission requests!" Naruto said as he snatched one of the piles of papers from Kakashi's desk. "Damn that fast guy, he got the fun part!" Kakashi mumbled.

"Kakashi-sensei, can I have a word with you? In private?" Sakura asked as she dismissed the nurses. Kakashi nodded and followed Sakura to her office. "I've been wanting to ask you this since we arrived. Why are there no records of the Uzumaki clan in Konoha's records?" Sakura asked. She noticed Kakashi's visible eye widen. "I suppose we can't keep it hidden forever. The Uzumaki clan was the strongest clan in konoha for a long time. They had nearly unlimited stamina and could muster huge amounts of chakra, therefore they could master any jutsu in a short amount of time. However they were stubborn, most of the time. Twenty-five or so years ago, a small war was waged against the now destroyed 'village of the flames'. They acted in the name of the fire country, bringing shame to konoha and the entire fire country. So the Uzumaki clan was sent to destroy them. It was a trap. Using a kinjutsu, the leader of the village blew himself and the entire village up, killing everyone in it. Including the Uzumaki's." Kakashi paused as Sakura digested the information. "Only one of them returned. Uzumaki Arashi, who died on the night Kyuubi attacked." Sakura's eyes widened. "Not THE Arashi?" Sakura said as she got up and took a book out of her shelf. Kakashi nodded. "He made me promise never to tell Naruto who his parents were. Until this day I have yet to find out why, but I respect his wish." Kakashi said as he slowly made his way out of the office.

Naruto entered the appartment exhausted to see Ino and Sakura their, chatting. "You ladies don't mind if I go lay down and die somewhere, do you?" Naruto said as he slumped into a chair. "Of course not! As long as you stay out the way and don't stink the place up!" Sakura giggled. "Anyway, Naruto, why did YOU out of all people get to be the second most important man in the village?" Ino asked. "Well, Apparently I'm the strongest person in the village, and the only one who can stand up to akatsuki. So Kakashi wants me close in case of an attack. Now I'm going to bed. Have a good night." Naruto said as he got up and walked into his bedroom, leaving both girls staring into his direction with open mouths. "Heh, looks like little Naruto is growing up" Ino said while grinning at Sakura, who merely nodded.

"Kakashi-sama! There are problems in the mist village, a band of rounins and missing-nin are preparing to plunder the town!" Ino said as she ran into the office. Kakashi looked at Naruto who nodded and ran out of the room. "Arn't we going to help him?" Ino asked when Naruto had left the office. "He doesn't need our help, we'd just be in the way." Ino stared at Kakashi. "Just how strong is he?" Ino thought as she left the room.

Fire Shadow of Konoha 02-01-2007 10:14 PM

Re: Return of Uzumaki
Hey good job and you should read mine it is called Hogi's Story but it isn't this good

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