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ShiverX 06-17-2010 07:52 AM

Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Lets write some endings!

ShiverX 06-17-2010 07:55 AM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
The Naruto shippudden Endings,
Peace at the end of a road.

The two characters was standing in front of the Bright pillar of energies brimming from the ground all the way up to the moon. The moon was shining brightly even if it was in the middle of the day. The moons eyes plan had ended many years ago but not until now was it entirely dispelled. In the light the two characters looked like shadows from afar.
The one to the left looked at the sun, his eyes somewhat closed because of all the bright energies around. He then turned his face towards the other shadow and spoke.

" What do you say, old friend?"

"Friend? Aren't we familiar today? Don't label me with your poisonous words! Grrr!"

"Ready to bite, as always."
Looking closer you could see that the smaller of the two had bright yellow hair and a white coat.
The other shape was much larger and appeared to have a number of tails.
The man with the yellow hair smiled.
"Anyway. Is it time? What do you say fox?"

The Kyuubi looked at the sun.
"Who knows Naruto.... I trust you too know better"
The Kyuubi turned away slightly and looked un-interested.

Naruto turned to look at the kyuubi's annoyed face, the fox avoided his gaze.
Naruto smiled in remembrance, the Kyuubi's own way of giving a compliment always made Naruto smile. It was so silly.

"I remember the time I acquired your strength. At that time I did it with force.."

The kyuubi looked back at Naruto visibly annoyed.
" You didn't beat me on your own! There you go again with your words! Grrr.."

Naruto laughed at the Kyuubi's reaction
"Hehe, Yeah yeah, whatever makes you happy"

"You had your mother helping you for god's sake!" The Kyuubi's voice was getting even more agitated, and a high pitch started to be heard in his voice, just a hint.
The Kyuubi stopped all of a sudden and looked at Naruto who was barely keeping it together from laughing. Their eyes met in silence.
"Your trying to make me angry aren't you?" The Kyuubi's face turned from grumpy to a smiling as both he and Naruto started to Laugh.
After a while they stopped laughing and Naruto turned to the Kyuubi again.

"Those were the times. We were both so Naive. But it was the start of it all. I owe you a lot Fox. I'm so grateful to have known you."

The kyuubi looked at Naruto in silence. Some time went and they just stood there.
"To think you have come such a long way.. I still remember the child who was crying to me for power...."

Another moment of silence.

"You know I'm grateful to you too Naruto. I've been trapped in this chain of hatred for so long. And going from host to host, not one of them really tried to understand me. Even if I'm a part of something bigger, I'm still a conscious being. And...."

Naruto looked up at Kyuubi.

"And?"

The Kyuubi hesitated.

"And .... for freeing me, I will never forget that selfless act back then...."

Naruto smiled again.

"Of course, your welcome. I always meant to free you. You are not a weapon, you are you. And now, your a friend right?"

The Kyuubi reacts to the word friend and gets visually annoyed again.

"There you go again with your words! Grr!"

The Kyuubi started to walk into the bright pillar in front. As he walked away from Naruto he faded away slightly more and more as he merged with the other energies. Before he disappeared fully he stopped, turned his head and looked at Naruto. Smiling he said.

"Thank you Naruto.....Friend..."

As the Kyuubi was engulfed into the rest of the energies and completing the Jutsu the ground around them started to shake. The bright pillar turned even more white as the energies amplified to enormous levels. Naruto shielded his eyes as the marks on the grounds activated and the surrounding area was bathed in light brighter than the sun. Sitting down Naruto focused the energies all around him and felt as they expanded more and more as each binding was released. The net woven on the Juubi was amazing. It had taken many years to prepare for this Jutsu but now it should finally end. When the final lock was released Naruto poured his last stored Chakra into the core. Combined with Natural energies that was pouring in from all over, the energies in the Juubi once again resonated with and bound themselves to the nature around. There was an implosion that Naruto could feel from the core and afterwards followed stillness. The world went silence, all animals stopped moving, all energies stopped flowing. Then in an explosion that shock the whole world in the chakra flow a pulse wave was sent to all living things as the Juubi returned to it's original state in nature.

When the light faded the area had turned into crystal from the exposure to the intense energies.
Left was Naruto sitting in his meditation. His hair was while and he looked a lot older.
Naruto opened his eyes and smiled again. He fell back down on is back laughing a little.
"It's over, he he. Finally there will be peace. The war between the two clans is ended."

As he slowly stood up he groaned at his limps that now ached. He stretched a little and started to walk towards Konoha again. It would take several days to get back to Konoha and like this he didn't know if it was still possible. But he knew the Konoha Ninjas would come to escort him back, just as they planned. Hinata, Sakura, Nila. Maybe even Sasuke..
He smiled at the thought of seeing his friends again. Somehow it felt like he had been away for a long time.
After all that had happened, kakashi, Jirayaa, his parents...

He was finally going home to a world in peace.

Thanks for reading.
/ShiverX

uchiha naruto 06-17-2010 08:58 AM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by ShiverX (Post 1822678)
The Naruto shippudden Endings,
Peace at the end of a road.

The two characters was standing in front of the Bright pillar of energies brimming from the ground all the way up to the moon. The moon was shining brightly even if it was in the middle of the day. The moons eyes plan had ended many years ago but not until now was it entirely dispelled. In the light the two characters looked like shadows from afar.
The one to the left looked at the sun, his eyes somewhat closed because of all the bright energies around. He then turned his face towards the other shadow and spoke.

" What do you say, old friend?"

"Friend? Aren't we familiar today? Don't label me with your poisonous words! Grrr!"

"Ready to bite, as always."
Looking closer you could see that the smaller of the two had bright yellow hair and a white coat.
The other shape was much larger and appeared to have a number of tails.
The man with the yellow hair smiled.
"Anyway. Is it time? What do you say fox?"

The Kyuubi looked at the sun.
"Who knows Naruto.... I trust you too know better"
The Kyuubi turned away slightly and looked un-interested.

Naruto turned to look at the kyuubi's annoyed face, the fox avoided his gaze.
Naruto smiled in remembrance, the Kyuubi's own way of giving a compliment always made Naruto smile. It was so silly.

"I remember the time I acquired your strength. At that time I did it with force.."

The kyuubi looked back at Naruto visibly annoyed.
" You didn't beat me on your own! There you go again with your words! Grrr.."

Naruto laughed at the Kyuubi's reaction
"Hehe, Yeah yeah, whatever makes you happy"

"You had your mother helping you for god's sake!" The Kyuubi's voice was getting even more agitated, and a high pitch started to be heard in his voice, just a hint.
The Kyuubi stopped all of a sudden and looked at Naruto who was barely keeping it together from laughing. Their eyes met in silence.
"Your trying to make me angry aren't you?" The Kyuubi's face turned from grumpy to a smiling as both he and Naruto started to Laugh.
After a while they stopped laughing and Naruto turned to the Kyuubi again.

"Those were the times. We were both so Naive. But it was the start of it all. I owe you a lot Fox. I'm so grateful to have known you."

The kyuubi looked at Naruto in silence. Some time went and they just stood there.
"To think you have come such a long way.. I still remember the child who was crying to me for power...."

Another moment of silence.

"You know I'm grateful to you too Naruto. I've been trapped in this chain of hatred for so long. And going from host to host, not one of them really tried to understand me. Even if I'm a part of something bigger, I'm still a conscious being. And...."

Naruto looked up at Kyuubi.

"And?"

The Kyuubi hesitated.

"And .... for freeing me, I will never forget that selfless act back then...."

Naruto smiled again.

"Of course, your welcome. I always meant to free you. You are not a weapon, you are you. And now, your a friend right?"

The Kyuubi reacts to the word friend and gets visually annoyed again.

"There you go again with your words! Grr!"

The Kyuubi started to walk into the bright pillar in front. As he walked away from Naruto he faded away slightly more and more as he merged with the other energies. Before he disappeared fully he stopped, turned his head and looked at Naruto. Smiling he said.

"Thank you Naruto.....Friend..."

As the Kyuubi was engulfed into the rest of the energies and completing the Jutsu the ground around them started to shake. The bright pillar turned even more white as the energies amplified to enormous levels. Naruto shielded his eyes as the marks on the grounds activated and the surrounding area was bathed in light brighter than the sun. Sitting down Naruto focused the energies all around him and felt as they expanded more and more as each binding was released. The net woven on the Juubi was amazing. It had taken many years to prepare for this Jutsu but now it should finally end. When the final lock was released Naruto poured his last stored Chakra into the core. Combined with Natural energies that was pouring in from all over, the energies in the Juubi once again resonated with and bound themselves to the nature around. There was an implosion that Naruto could feel from the core and afterwards followed stillness. The world went silence, all animals stopped moving, all energies stopped flowing. Then in an explosion that shock the whole world in the chakra flow a pulse wave was sent to all living things as the Juubi returned to it's original state in nature.

When the light faded the area had turned into crystal from the exposure to the intense energies.
Left was Naruto sitting in his meditation. His hair was while and he looked a lot older.
Naruto opened his eyes and smiled again. He fell back down on is back laughing a little.
"It's over, he he. Finally there will be peace. The war between the two clans is ended."

As he slowly stood up he groaned at his limps that now ached. He stretched a little and started to walk towards Konoha again. It would take several days to get back to Konoha and like this he didn't know if it was still possible. But he knew the Konoha Ninjas would come to escort him back, just as they planned. Hinata, Sakura, Nila. Maybe even Sasuke..
He smiled at the thought of seeing his friends again. Somehow it felt like he had been away for a long time.
After all that had happened, kakashi, Jirayaa, his parents...

He was finally going home to a world in peace.

Thanks for reading.
/ShiverX


One of the best ending i've ever read!! i have some ideas..too lazy to post it now..will do it later..thnx for sharin it dude !!:D:D

jaggid 06-17-2010 08:31 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Old Enemies, New Friends - Part 1

The fight has been intense between Naruto and Sasuke.
Naruto Lay Bleeding on the Floor, on all fours.

Naruto: *smirks at Sasuke* Your pretty great as usual Sasuke.
Naruto: You won...

*Naruto* Begins making one last hand sign as he grabs his stomach and releases the 9-Tails from his prison.

Naruto: I told you i wouldn't hurt you... Your obligation has ended, go and be free...

*Naruto* Collapses onto the floor blood trickling from his mouth.

*Sasuke* Drops to one knee and begins to laugh maniacally.

Sasuke: You were always weak

*Sasuke* As he lifts his head up we see one eye closed from the use of Izanagi. Sasuke is also missing a part of his left arm.

Sasuke: 8-Tails do your job and heal me quickly, we don't have much time before his life is completely gone.

8-Tails: Grrrr yyyes mmmaster...

*Naruto* Naruto's Body rises into the air as blood and chakra pour out from his stomach. a Voice appears from the distance near Naruto.

*Sasuke* Looks angry

Sasuke: What has he done!!!

9-Tails: i told you to not hurt this boy!

*9-Tails* Head is sticking out of Naruto's lifeless body, Sends out a shock-wave of pure energy.

*Sasuke* Summons the 8-tails fourth to take the brunt of the blast as most of his wounds have finished healing. Then re-merges with the badly hurt 8-tails to regain some chakra.

*9-Tails* Head starts to sink back into Naruto.

9-tails: Foolish boy, you could never do anything without my help.

*9-Tails* Performs a Jutsu of chakra transfer into Naruto and uses a replacement technique to hide Naruto.

9-Tails: Wake up Naruto, Wake up... Minato you were wrong this boy cant do it he doesnt have it...

Naruto: *Smirks* hehe 9-Tails i knew you loved me.

9-Tails: Grrr.. brat i thought you were done for. This is not over until my brother's are released from that Uchiha's hateful grasp.

Naruto: ya im sure thats why you saved me.

9-Tails: dont get smart with me brat your cage no longer binds me.

Naruto: I need to gather sage chakra to finish healing my wounds *Kage Bushin*

*Naruto* Summons 4 shadow clones to begin gathering Nature energy.

Naruto: You are going to have to fight Sasuke while i do this i will have 20 minutes of sage mode once i am finished. And we can end this once and for all.

9-Tails: Your father convinced me to trust him i felt like a fool all those years, but he was right you truly can bring peace to the ninja world. I will do this for you Naruto.

9-Tails: When we are done i will ask something of you, and you will comply.

Naruto: You are my friend now, not my enemy, and not my curse. I will do whatever you ask.

9-Tails: Good because i was promised a fight and i'm gonna get it.

*Naruto* Looks confused but just smiles at his new ally.

*Naruto* Begins gathering natural energy.

*9-Tails* Jumps off toward Sasuke

Sasuke: Cowards, now i can complete sealing the rest of the tailed beasts and once i do no one will stand in my way.

8-Tails: you cannot resurrect the Juubi within yourself it is suicide. You will fail.

*Sasuke* Squeezes the chains which bind the 8-tails.

8-Tails: Arrggghhhh i will kill you for what you have done to me.. and Bee...

*8-Tails thinks to himself* He only has 3 left including the 9-tails, god speed Naruto god speed.

9-tails: Now it is time to die Uchiha Brat.

*9-tails vs sasuke* The fight begins but for some reason Sasuke cannot control the 9-tails. so he has to fight him.

*Sasuke* Transforms into what appears to be a hybrid of 6 of the tailed beasts.

*9-Tails* Begins to charge Sasuke

*Sasuke* Begins to charge the 9-Tails


End Part 1

Next time - 9 Tails Vs 3,4,5,6,7,8 - Tails! - 33? =D

This is my first prediction thread ever. i hope you guys like it. It was fun to write it. i am going to do it in 4 parts. again i hope you guys like it!

ShiverX 06-21-2010 02:20 AM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Gief more parts! ;D

jaggid 06-21-2010 05:38 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
oh hehe i almost forgot i will work on it tonight and try to have it up tonight or tommorow sorry about that =D

balmung5000 06-21-2010 05:49 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
SASUKE WINS
THE END


cpas

jaggid 06-21-2010 06:26 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Part 2: 9-Tails Vs. The Demon Hawk

*Sasuke* Begins to grow larger to meet the size of the 9 tails

*9-Tails* Begins to whip his tails around violently, one strikes sasuke in the chest leaving a gaping wound, he then blasts off several energy blasts toward Sasuke knocking him back a few yards.

*Sasuke* Dodges the energy blasts and Uses his sword to cut 2 of the 9-tails whipping about.

*9-Tails* Suddenly detonates the two tails that have been lopped off.

*Sasuke* Is thrown back again but gains his balance and lands on his feet hunched over, when he raises his head up we see the wounds have healed, he must have blocked the attack.

9-Tails: You are pretty good Uchiha Brat, but your arrogance is no match for centuries of wisdom.

Sasuke: Save your breath you giant flea bag you will be mine soon enough and then the world will tremble at the name Uchiha once again.

*Sasuke* Begins making some hand seals an orb of light encompasses him, He motions his hands out and yells *Play*

*Sasuke* 6 Hawks shoot from Sasuke's chest each with a different number of tails. They begin sending energy blasts at the 9-tails.

*9-Tails* The 9-tails takes out the 3,4, and 5 tailed hawks in short order. He then grabs the 6 tails in his mouth, while the 7 and 8 continue bombarding him from over head.

*9-Tails* Charges energy into the 6-tails hawk and flings it at the 8-tails, the 8-tails dodges and hit hits the 7-tails. When the cloud of smoke is gone both have been disintegrated.

*8-Tails* Stops flying and screams as if it is fighting with itself, it manages to break free from Sasuke's grasp and charge back toward him, Sasuke releases the Hawk before it can reach him.

Sasuke: You will be with them soon enough, trapped like a bird in a cage.

*Scene Switches Temporarily*

We see what appears to be 9 cages that border one another in a circle pattern creating a larger cage in the middle.

*Scene Switches Back*

9-Tails: So thats it... but how did he... Madara.

*9-Tails* Creates energy with his remaining 7-tails and shoots a volley of red lazer like energy toward Sasuke.

*Sasuke* Again dodges the attacks with relative ease and manages to get close enough to strike the 9-tails in the eye with his Chidori Blade.

9-Tails: Grrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaa

*9-Tails* As Sasuke flys backwards with momentum the 9-Tails manages to put his claws through his chest in one last sweeping move as he falls to the ground lifeless.

Sasuke: That was dangerous hes almost dead i have to seal him now.

*9-Tails* The body of the 9-tails suddenly disappears in a cloud of smoke

Sasuke: What?!?! Where did he?!?!

*9-Tails* We see the 9-Tails inside Naruto, releasing his clone just as Naruto finishes gathering Nature energy.

9-Tails: I know his plan now Naruto

Naruto: I can't believe Sasuke fell for a shadow clone.

9-Tails: Foolish boy it was no ordinary clone i gave it some of my power, for all intents and purposes it was me... a weaker version of me.

Naruto: Ooooo can you teach me that technique?!?!?!

9-Tails: Ughhh we are in the middle of a battle Naruto!

Naruto: how about after?

9-Tails: The sound of your voice agitates me boy. Ok after the battle, if you survive.

Naruto: So what is Sasuke doing?

9-Tails: He has designed a seal probably with the help of Madara which seals all of the Tailed Beasts within a single host, then focuses the energy to create a temporary awakening.

Naruto: An awakening of what?

9-Tails: You are really this dense aren't you? I thought some of it was an act, but you a really are this dense!

Naruto: Ooo is that a new technique...

*9-Tails* Looks very agitated.

9-Tails: Never mind, he will create a temporary awakening of the 10 tailed beast. It was a seal Madara was working on but it was believed to be impossible to complete. It appears that this boy has finished the seal.

Naruto: What happens when he awakens the 10-Tails

9-Tails: Basically it is a way to access all of the power of the 10-tailed beast without the 10-Tails taking over. This gives him access to his special eye techniques even the Rinnegan without the setbacks that you mortals have to deal with. Sasuke would be an unstoppable immortal.

9-Tails: It is up to us Naruto to stop him or all will be lost. Enough talks lets go boy before it's too late.

*Naruto* Has a serious look on his face, he knows its time to kill Sasuke.

Naruto: Understood, lets move.

*Naruto* Races off to fight Sasuke, while his shadow clones remain behind.

End

Next Time:
Naruto Vs. Sasuke
Demon Hawk Vs. 9-Tailed Sage

Well this is part 2 i hope you guys enjoy this one too. I will try to have the last two parts by the end of the week. Enjoy =D

Mal 06-21-2010 06:39 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Is this thread meant to imply that there will be a nonfictional ending to Naruto?

liondemon 06-21-2010 07:02 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Sasuke gets rid of the evil in Sharingan by reproducing with Hyuuga. Sasukes offspring and family line are born with red eyes, and have all the abilities of Sharingan. No tomoe, no MS, but some have jutsu techniques and chakra to mimic some of the MS techniques, and they are still naturally strong in genjutsu and fire. The Hyuuga Main family and ways are ended by the joining of Naruto and Hinata and Hinabi and Sasuke. Sasuke changes the Uchiha name in his children, but keeps it for himself. We get pages to show how generations down the line turn out in Konoha, and who still resembles who. Yellow haired, light blue eyed ninjas. Red eyed, long, dark haired ninjas. Naruto decides to keep his last name, but give his children a new last name as well, never having a family at all but always wanting a big one to grow up in like Sasuke once had, and even his last name wasnt chosen traditionally, and gives no recognition of his father.

It's kinda like 1st Sage, his sons to Senju and Uchiha, but now the genes are brought back as 1 family. Naruto and Sasuke decide to have their children raised as real brothers and sisters and share a last name. Hyuuga already call cousins their brother and sister anyway so their mother's encourage it more with their children and their cousins. Naruto and Hinata, and Hinabi and Sasuke begin a whole new clan having the Hyuuga Main Family being lost with their mothers, and Naruto and Sasuke wanting their children to grow up as family. Of course this is all after naruto saves his brother sasuke

stubborn_d0nkey 06-21-2010 08:00 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Mal (Post 1824335)
Is this thread meant to imply that there will be a nonfictional ending to Naruto?

No.
I believe (/hope) you know this, but still:
Fan fiction is not a synonym of fiction, but a sub group. Something can be fiction and not be fan fiction, however all fan fiction is fiction.

Mal 06-22-2010 09:35 AM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
So fan fiction is always fiction, but sometimes fiction isn't fiction?

01purple 06-23-2010 05:14 PM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
What??? This is confusing.

01purple 06-24-2010 12:17 AM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
You just sound retarded. No offense or anything.

ninjalostboy95 06-24-2010 12:35 AM

Re: Naruto fan fictional Endings
 
I deleted the message it didnt come out how I wanted it too.


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