Originally Posted by DarkAztek
I'm going to be honest: It's an interesting read. You use a lot of the same adjectives over and over again (such as dark and black), so it would be nice if you had a little bit more of a variation. Since it's about NL, I'll probably keep reading it.
Good job. Keep it up.
yay! glad you like it *bows* thankies much ^^. Yeeeah English/grammar/spelling were never my best subjects -.-; (if you can't tell xD)
i do have a beta reader but she never has time because she's working on post secondary crap all the time @.@;;
maybe i should make a hiring thread >.>; in the spam zone of course.