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Old 05-27-2007, 10:50 AM   #27
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Re: Dark Plague

Looking back, really the only bad thing I could find about your story is the fact that they talk as if they were twenty first century American instead of whatever-the-crap century Japan. Not sure that makes much difference but it does seem kind of strange to me. Also, it's kind of stupid to think Lee could hit Sasuke after all of Orochimaru's training, especially since he's far more powerful than Lee as of now.
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