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Old 05-30-2007, 03:03 PM   #29
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Re: Dark Plague

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Originally Posted by AnticitizenOne View Post
Looking back, really the only bad thing I could find about your story is the fact that they talk as if they were twenty first century American instead of whatever-the-crap century Japan. Not sure that makes much difference but it does seem kind of strange to me. Also, it's kind of stupid to think Lee could hit Sasuke after all of Orochimaru's training, especially since he's far more powerful than Lee as of now.
Lee was pissed and had motivation to punch Sasuke. Sasuke was too pissy to pay him any mind (and too full of himself). It was basically a cheap shot. =\

Anyway, the next chapter should be posted in a few days.
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