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Old 06-11-2007, 06:33 PM   #38
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Re: Dark Plague

The only thing (in my opinion) wrong with that chapter is that you're kind of vastly overpowering the character you made. I mean, Gai's Morning Peacock attacking a clone and it survived until the end of the attack? It doesn't make much sense when you think about it.
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