Originally Posted by AnticitizenOne
The only thing (in my opinion) wrong with that chapter is that you're kind of vastly overpowering the character you made. I mean, Gai's Morning Peacock attacking a clone and it survived until the end of the attack? It doesn't make much sense when you think about it.
It wasn't actually a clone at first. Maikeru took some of the first hits before he created the clone, which was a replacement also. I'm overpowering him because he comes from the country of Heaven, which makes the strongest of Konoha ninja's look like Chunnins. But that country is mostly peaceful. The monstrosity that is Maikeru, was a result of, someone else who was a main villain. Anyway, he's also made this powerful, and beats the snot out of Gai and Kakashi, to built up the final heated battle, and to show that Gai and Kakashi have been surpassed.