Re: Dark Plague
I don't like your Sasuke. =(
And NaruSaku... to top it all off. *falls over*
Still, it's written well and I had fun reading it. ^^ I think you should have kept your original character around and developed him more, though. I was just getting used to him.
EDIT :: And I would have liked to see if you developed a relationship between him and Sasuke, since they have suffered in a similar way. I dunno, it was what I started hoping for as I was reading those last couple chapters.
I hope you share the next chapter soon. I'll definitely check back later for updates.
Last edited by UchihaTaijiya; 07-10-2007 at 11:52 PM.