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UchihaTaijiya · 07-10-2007, 10:20 PM

I don't like your Sasuke. =(
And NaruSaku... to top it all off. *falls over*

Still, it's written well and I had fun reading it. ^^ I think you should have kept your original character around and developed him more, though. I was just getting used to him.

EDIT :: And I would have liked to see if you developed a relationship between him and Sasuke, since they have suffered in a similar way. I dunno, it was what I started hoping for as I was reading those last couple chapters.

I hope you share the next chapter soon. I'll definitely check back later for updates.

07-10-2007, 10:20 PM	#64
UchihaTaijiya sublimis ab unda Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2,777 Thanks: 7,387 Thanked 3,312 Times in 1,249 Posts	Re: Dark Plague I don't like your Sasuke. =( And NaruSaku... to top it all off. falls over Still, it's written well and I had fun reading it. ^^ I think you should have kept your original character around and developed him more, though. I was just getting used to him. EDIT :: And I would have liked to see if you developed a relationship between him and Sasuke, since they have suffered in a similar way. I dunno, it was what I started hoping for as I was reading those last couple chapters. I hope you share the next chapter soon. I'll definitely check back later for updates. __________________ If the elephants have past lives yet are destined to always remember It's no wonder how they scream Like you and I they must have some temper And I am dreaming of them on the plains Dirtying up their beds Watching for some sign of rain to cool their hot heads And how dare that you send me that card when I'm doing all that I can do You are forcing me to remember when all I want is to just forget you If the tiger shall protect her young then tell me how did you slip by All my instincts have failed me for once I must have somehow slept the whole night And I am dreaming of them with their kill Tearing it all apart Blood dripping from their lips and teeth sinking into heart And how dare that you say you'll call When you know I need some peace of mind If you have to take sides with the animals Won't you do it with one who is kind And if the hawks in the trees need the dead If you're living you don't stand a chance For a time though you share the same bed There are only two ends to this dance You can flee with your wounds just in time or lie there as he feeds Watching yourself ripped to shreds and laughing as you bleed So for those of you falling in love keep it kind Keep it good Keep it right Throw yourself in the midst of danger but keep one eye open at night Last edited by UchihaTaijiya; 07-10-2007 at 10:52 PM.