Originally Posted by d1v
I do not like the part in which he kills his own family. I will think about it..still not sure what to vote for.
They were weak, he wants strong people to fight a war. Wussies=dead people. Family people=expandable.
Originally Posted by Eighty6ed
Nice story. Like how you stuck to the "God of War" AL that described AK's original goals. I do like your choice of Anima as the superbaddie. That guy was the shit. Zetsu is still (in my mind) overrated. Naruto waging an entire war by himself using only SKs? Thats an absolutely unimaginable amount of chakra and how does Naruto have that kind of chakra supply without his Kyuubi? (or didnt Naruto get his Kyuubi stolen?)
Good enough for a rep far as Im concerned.
P.S. A-Bomb Pain is an unimaginative lameass. Thats why I voted for yours.
Of course, I did not think of this much, I just imagined as I wrote. There are dozens of illogical stuff, I am sure.
It's enough that it took me almost an hour to write all this, let alone spending my spare time thinking about someone else's character and what he should have been like.
I do care about Naruto as a manga, and that's why I posted this.