Re: Akatsuki Leader ~ Shrike Style
Shrike Shrike Shrike....my friend.......seriously......come on.
I dont even have to read it all to say that Kishimoto's is better. We know almost nothing about Pein and already you people dont like him. Well let me tell you, as a bad guy conosuire I can tell you right now that Pein or PAIN, is GOING to be one of the greatest naruto villains of all time. Just let this whole thing play out.
Yours is kinda like Pein anyway, with a bunch of random impossible things surrounding him lol.
On another note, your a great writer and I loved reading it. Good characterization and it flowed greatly. Do you RP?