Yeah, I noticed a few errors but its all good. The story holds up great ^_^
Another story that is probably one of my favorites of all time is "Garden of Sanctuary" by nes mikel.
This is a NaruSaku fic as well, but i wouldn't care if it was NaruHina, SasuSaku, or whatever. This is probably one of the most bitter sweet fics i've ever read. Its also a oneshot, so check it out.