. . .
“Its Naruto Uzumaki.” I said more loudly, but I knew my voice was quavering.
“Absolutely not!” my father said sternly. His fist came down on the table, declaring his judgement like a gavel. “I forbid it.”
. . .
Other than this, it sounds like an interesting read. However, I probably won't read it. I simply don't like fanfics due to how almost all of them take liberties in assumptions about the series, for example, I'm an anal-retentive asshole, so I'd hate reading about Sakura's father, or, say, Hinata's, Ino's, or Neji's mother, simply because we've never seen anything of them, so their personalities and descriptions would be totally made up.