Re: 437 Predictions
My Naruto 437 prediction:
"Naruto and Pain at the battlefield"
"close up on Pains face"
God realm: - I can see peace.
"Naruto looks sad and up towards Pains face"
Naruto says in a low voice: - What can you see....
"Jirayaas Face flashes in Narutos memory, Kakashi is there and Sai, Sakura Hinata, Kiba and others... and last Sasuke.
Narutos expression is that he is lost in thought looking blankly."
Naruto half to pain half to himself: - It's frustrating to feel powerless, to not be able to reach people...
"Pain looks down on Naruto in interest"
Naruto more to himself: - People are not stupid.....this is wrong...
"Naruto gets a serious look and looks up at Pain"
Naruto: - You who have suffered like this, why do you not see what you have done? What do you see?
Pain: - I see peace.
Naruto: - Peace? This is not peace.. Making war is not peace!
"In the mountains:
The search team gathers, there is Hinata and Shikamaru and others. They splits up into different directions."
Konan: - There is shinobi approaching us, we can't stay!
Nagato: - I know but it is soon done.
Back att battlefield:
"Zoom in on narutos face"
Naruto: - You are not creating peace! But fear! You won't have times of peace but of Paralyzing fear.
Pain: - What is your answer then?
Naruto: - I don't know....but I will find a better way! You don't see peace, you see pain and war! If there is pain, I will change that my way, I never go back on my world!
"Naruto exclames this in a gutsy way"
"zoom in on Pains face he is a little chocked, his expression becomes harder again"
Pain: - I'm sorry Kyuubi, you cannot change the world, you are a reason for it's current state..
Naruto: I'm Not Kyuubi! I'm Naruto! and I'm the next Hokage!
Pain: - You are not that, we are out of time. I'm sorry but I'm taking the Kyuubi, rest assured it's for the peace you and Jirayaa wanted.
"Naruto struggles to get free and he feels the rinnegans influence again"
Pain: - It's useless Kyuubi your chakra control won't work with my blades.
Naruto: - Dammit....
Naruto thinks to himself: - If I could only control my chakra I could use that....Right now I can barely hold it...
Back at the search team:
Unnamed ninja: - It's useless.
Shikamaru: - Use Byakugan!
Unnamed ninja: - I did, I can't find them!
Hinata: - Let me try!
"Close up on hinatas face. She thinks: this is all I can do for you Naruto!"
Hinatas: - Byakugan!
"Hinata searches the whole area"
"Unnamed ninja sweats"
Unnamed Ninja: - What amazing control....
"hinata see chakra all over the place, she concentrates harder and detects a stable point. It's a woman!
Zoomed in Hinatas face open eyes"
Hinata: - I found someone!
Back at battlefield:
Naruto thinks: - I must escape this blade..
"Naruto looks at pain ( all seems to be very slow) and then at Pa on the ground. Ma is at his side crying.
Zoom in on Narutos face again, his eyes are wide open and he looks to be panicking."
Naruto thinks: The Kyuubi....Maby it's chakra can still be used outside this cursed blade?
Pain: - We must leave now Kyuubi, look one last time upon Konoha.
"Pain takes some steps towards Naruto. and bends down again"
The search team:
Hinata: we are getting close!
"Hinatas vision is suddenly filled with a massive Chakra so strong she is knowcked back and closes her eyes."
Hinata: - What is this?
"Zoom out: on one side is search team and on other is Nagato and Konan.
Zoom in on teams faces They are surprised, zoom in on Nagato and Konans faces, they are also little surprised."
Back at Naruto:
"The kyuubi....Naruto starts to get ready for Kyuubi but all of a sudden he feels a disturbance in the blades control"
Naruto thinks: What?!
"He looks at pain and he is looking towards the mountains"
Pain: - Konan, take care of these intruders.
Naruto thinks: - this is my chance!
"Naruto closes his eyes and focuses" "you see an image of Naruto shaped chakra."
"Naruto open his eyes and smile"
Naruto: I'm sorry....
"Pain looks down on Naruto"
Pain: - What?
At search team:
"Konan makes a paper shield in front of Her and nagato"
Ko: - Stop them now!
Back at battlefield:
"You see a hand pushing down on the summoning scroll, a Naruto Sage clone appeares over at the scroll and besides it you see that Narutos other hidden clone is the one that did the summon.
Then the sage clone disapeares, pain looks at that clone and then down to Naruto"
"Naruto looks back up in sage mode"
Naruto: - I'm sorry, but I can't let you have your way! Aaaa!
"Naruto shatters the blade and throws himself towards God realm grasping his legs.
"God realm is Shocked"
Naruto at Pains feet: - I'll bring your peace, I'll find a way, rest assured. It will be a lasting peace, like jirayya wanted.
"Naruto smiles kindly"
"Naruto closes his eyes and makes the kage bunshin sign with his hands still around Pains legs"
Naruto: - kage Bunshin!
"Alot of clones form around Pain and Naruto all rushing in, some with rasengans.
Pain tries to move but is held down by Naruto at his legs.
Pain makes his hand movement."
Pain: - Shinra tensei!
"All Naruto clones are send flying.
Behind them towards the Hidden clone(which is now in sage mode just like Naruto by pains feet) you see That sage clone cast a Rasen shuriken)"
"Pain is shocked and his eyes wide open"
"Naruto holds tighter onto Pains legs"
Naruto: - You can't use your technique for another few seconds. This is the end!
"Pain looks shocked down at Naruto, then he looks at the Rasen Shuriken, his expression shanges from shock to a smiles."
Pain: - Maby you CAN make a change......Naruto.
"The Rasen shuriken slices Pain and the force sends him some yards away from Naruto, Naruto letting go of his feet as the shuriken hits!"
"The shuriken explodes in a big bang taking out Pain and Sending Naruto Flying, he hits the ground hard some ways away."
"Naruto looks at pain as he is defeated in the attack, Pain falls sliced to the ground, Naruto closes his eyes exhausted and faints with the words on his lips"
Naruto: - Jirayaa....
Back at search team:
The team members try to break Konans shield but are so far unsuccessful.
"Nagato has his eyes wide open"
Nagato: - yahiko...Yahhiko...
"Nagato faints from exhaustion. "
Konan:- That's enough!
"Konan envelopes them both in paper and a burst of paper attacks Search team!. They back of defending and the paper shatters.
Nagato and Konan is gone.
Shikamaru: - Are we to late?
Back at the battlefield:
Naruto Lies unconscious on the battlefield.
Tsunades summon snail tells Her that Naruto is hurt.
She closes her eys and concentrate. Opens them in shock and yells to Sakura"
Tsunade: - Sakura, go to Naruto immediately!"
"Sakura looks towards Naruto in concern"
Next chapter, Epic battle ends, What is the toll of narutos conviction?
Last edited by ShiverX; 02-20-2009 at 05:11 AM.