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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

-Mission Extermination

"Dispose of all enemies in the quickest and most viable way. Leave no trackers behind. I'll go south, Hiro and Shun with go north, Rina, Dosa, and the lone Anbu with go west, and finally, Team Anbu will go east. Split," yelled the Hokage.

(They scatter as the Scene switches over to Hiro and Shun.)

"How much further," asked Hiro. "Not far now. It seems they've been waiting for a signal of some sort in order to ignite the attack," said Shun. "Then that means there is one more out there you guys missed," said Hiro. "Possibly. But the Hokage left a shadow clone back at the camp. He'll dispose of him before the attack comences. By the way, aren't you a little worried about Dosa and Rina," asked Shun.

"No. Although Dosa can be a hot headed jerk, he's pretty strong himself. Rina may not look like it, but she's the only one who can keep that guy in line. That hints at how strong a woman she must really be," said Hiro. "I sure hope so," said Shun.

(While Shun aids Hiro, more of the past unravales. Scene switches back to the camp. A mysterious man is hidden within the shadows.)

"So, it seems everyone is resting. Time to crack this bad boy open," said Undentified shinobi. (Before he can open the flare. A kunai comes rushing at blazing speeds into the guy's neck, effectively killing him.)

"So, this guy was the one to signal the attack. Mission failure for him," said the smiling Shadow clone.

(Switch Scene to Dosa, Rina, and Anbu op. They see 9 shinobies' backs.)

"Stand back, let me handle it," said Dosa. "The Hokage told us to work together," said Anbu op. "Right, listen to him, don't go doing anything rash," said Rina. "Ha. If you want in on the fun, you'll have to cut in before I get rid of all of them," said Dosa.

"Oh brother," mumbled the Anbu op. "Fool, though if he dies it will do us all a great favor," said Rina.

(He rushes in and pulls out his weapon. Dosa carries a scythe. He pulls it from his back and cleanly cuts off heads of 4 shinobi silently and swiftly. He pulls back and then jumps into the air, blood sprays everywhere, the shinobi get on guard and prepare to attack him from all angles.)

"What the hell just happened," asked Shinobi 1. "We didn't even reach the signal," said Shinobi 2. "Kill him," yelled Shinobi 3. "So, it seems the mission is a failure. You guys go on ahead back to the camp. I'll handle this one," said Commander of the squad.

(Dosa is falling to the earth at rapid speeds. He strikes, but the commander escapes with rapid reflexes. The Commander whips out a scroll and pulls a huge Fuuma Shuriken from it and attempts to strike with it while dashing at him with the enlarged tool. Dosa parries the weapon with his own scythe.)

"It seems this one may put up a battle," said Dosa. (The other four shinobi try to escape, but are cut off by Rina and the Anbu op.)

"End of the line," said Rina. (She makes a handseal, soon a wall of fire surronds the enemies in a spiral that tunnels high into the sky.)

"Damn it, we're trapped," said shinobi 1. "This girl, to produce such a powerful fire elemental ninjutsu at such an age," said shinobi 2. "We'll escape from above," said Shinobi 3. "Aahh," said shinobi 4 screams as they attempt to get out from the small exit at the top.

"You got it, or do I have to jump in," said Anbu. "No way. I'm fine. I'll show you why I'm called Konoha's Elementalist," said Rina. (She does a series of handseals as a gust of wind forms and prepares to collide with the spiraling flames. Switch Scene to Shun and Hiro, they are surronded.)

"This must be their tracker squad," said Hiro. "Yeah, they covered us almost immediately when we stepped within range," said Shun.

"What do we have here? Two lone Konoha hounds up to be put down. Although, we didn't get the signal, we'll gladly eliminate you," said Commander. "The chakra I'm feeling from these guys is pretty intense. I didn't want to say anything, but The Hokage knew to place us in this direction after I confirmed that the chakra from this location was more intense. We might actually have to get a little serious. We might even get a scratch or two. How about finally using those ridiculously wide short swords you have there. It is a better time if any. We've never seen you take them out," said Shun.

"Wait a second. Commander. Doesn't that guy fit the description," said Shinobi 1. (The Commander zeros in on his weapons.) "You're right, it is him," said Commander. "Nah, that's not the Hokage of Konoha. So there's nothing to be worried about, right," said Shinobi 2. "No. But he should not be underestimated, this man has done a great deal of damage to our allies. Take extreme caution," said Commander.

"They look strong. Hell, there might be one or two capable of putting up a fight. But, we can defeat all of them in one shot. That is all it takes. Even the stronger shinobi can fall if they drop their guard and underestimate his opponent. That is exactly what they are doing to us. That is one of the most precious lessons I've learned by studying under Uzumaki Sensei," said Hiro.

"No time for a for one of The Hokage's words of wisdom, what is your plan," asked Shun. "Are you familure with the Kage Bunshin Shuriken jutsu," asked Hiro. "Yeah, but such a technique lacks the kind of potency against opponents who can probably defend and avoid the shuriken. I'd just be wasting chakra," said Shun.

"I can control winds and shape them into blades that can move at subsonic speeds. But who is to say I shouldn't add wind chakra into weapons? I'm sure you know that Wind-weapons are levels sharper than regular weapons. My chakra control at the moment won't allow me to create two sets of Kage Shuriken, but with your help I should at least be able to have enough. And with hundreds of small projectilces moving at such high speeds, our opponents will be unable to defend and avoid. Even if they try to block them, the shuriken will pierce through their defeneses," said Hiro.

"Now I see why you're called Konoha's Aerial Hatchet. Nice plan," said Shun.

"Let's go, surrond them," yelled the Commander. (Shun and Hiro begin making handseals.) "Kage Bunshin Shuriken technique," yelled Hiro and Shun. "Alright, work your magic," said Shun. (Hiro stops the shuriken in the air created by both of them, with both hands, then he makes a shadow clone, which takes over for Shun's Shuriken that are suspended in the air. The enemies are shocked at the expertise of Hiro.)

"Fuuton: All Direction Shuriken," yelled the two Hiro. (Everywhere bodies are pierced by Shuriken. Bodies hit the ground as Shun is left in awe at Hiro's ability. The scene soon switches back to the present.)

"Over the years Hiro has developed his ninjutsu to frightening levels. His godly ability to manipulate the wind element has given him the ability to reduce cliffs into pepples and rock and stone into dust. The two large and wide short swords he carries, he calls them Mountain Cutters. To this day, I haven't seen him use those things. Perhaps no one was strong enough to bring him to the point in which he needed to rely on them," said Shun.

(Nila shakes as they continue to rush forward. She has her Byakugan active.)

"Ww, wow. Well, I'm glad he's on ourside. Wait... I see something. There's 10 of them. 2 in each direction and they're closing in fast," said Nila. "Yeah, I thought I sensed something on the way," said Shun.

"What could a tracker squad be doing at this time of day? It seems very suspecious that we are being targeted," said Nila. "Hmm. Rogue troops? I agree, something about this just doen'st make much sense. I didn't think I'd be fighting so soon, at least not until I've approached my target in the River Country," said Shun. "Well, looks like you'll get a little warm up. Can't wait to see the skills of a Hokage body guard," said Nila. "Right, but don't depend on me to watch your ass (Shun is smirks.) You know what to do. Brace yourself," said Shun.
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