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The Special One · 08-11-2009, 06:06 PM

-Nila and Shun's Encounter with 10 unknown advasaries

(Nila and Shun land on the branches of a tree. Shun notices that Nila is scouting the area.)

"What's up? Are they nearing our location yet," asked Shun. "Yeah, but if we fight them in these quarters, they'd have us straggled due to all of the trees blocking our movements," said Nila. "Yeah, this is not a good place to take on a large amount of opponents," said Shun.

"Got it. There is an area just a short distance away. There is a wider open plain. Let's go there," said Nila. "Sounds good," said Shun. (Shun is going over something in his head.) "She's spot on. Though we give her a lot of stress about being distracted by the particular areas of interest, she definately has a knack for detail and planning," said Shun to himself.

(Nila and Shun land in a wide open area. Trees circle the area however, they are far enough away that gives the area a feel that it is a plain. With her Byakugan she constantly scouts the area. She immediately faces Shun and lets out a battle cry. She pulls off her jacket, revealing seals on the backside of her wrist and more seals secured on her fish net moving up to her shoulders.)

She pulls out mulitple shuriken and expertly parries various Kunai and Shuriken that prepared to strike the backside of Shun. Amazingly, Shun was not hit or touched by oppossing or supporting projectiles.
Shun turns around and pulls out his circular blades and rushes to take on the two advasaries. The two enemies flee.)

"So, they are trying to separate us. I'll be back Nila. It shouldn't take me long to finish these guys off," said Shun.

(Then she goes into a spin which slowly begins to erode the earth, tossing shuriken and kunai at rapid succession towards her back right, left, and up while they counter them with their own weapons. She continues to spin, tossing projectiles at her enemies using her Byakugan to effectively pin point her opponents' vitals.)

"Damn this girl, we can't get any closer," said Enemy # 1. "Just keep knocking them away. There are 8 of us, she'll run out of weapons soon enou-," said Enemy # 2 before catching a Shuriken to the throat. "No... Now I can't," said Enemy # 1 before catching a Kunai to the face.

"Good. That's two down. Shun, hurry up. The Kunai and Shuriken projectile seals will only last so long," said Nila.

(Switch Scene to Shun. The two enemies are being constricked by a large spiky vine that causes them to bleed. The two enemies are wearing gray trench cloaks that zip all the way up to their necks. Their head protector has a type of unity symbol.)

"These guys were stronger than the run of the mill seakers. I hope Nila is alright. NOW, Speak! Why are you attacking us," asked Shun. "Uprising! United we stand," yelled The both of them. (They countinue to chant strange words of bizzareness.) "They must be under some sealing jutsu. It is no use," said Shun before he discovers something strange mentioned by them, which causes him to stay his hand.)

"Face the wrath of the Reborn SNA. And then. And then Like always, the next generation will always pay for the sins of the previous one…..," said The two shinobi.

(Shun is immediately stunned.)

"Was that one of the special units The Hokage had under his command? I know there was a national SNA program that improved gifted shinobies' jutsu in order to prepare for war in various villages. Hiro was part of that branch; but these people are talking about the SNA unit that was dispanded... Could they be referring to the Globalized SNA?

"THE SNA. It can't be. The Global Specialized Ninja Association. But they've been disbanded years ago. Could they be responsible for the meteor? And that man I've locked eyes with. He must be with before I started to travel with Nila, must be with them. I need to send these guys to the Hokage for debriefing. Crap! Nila... I have to do this quickly," said Shun.

(Shun makes several hand seals and summons two large hawk like creatures. Shun uses his circular blades to carry the trapped shinobi unto the summoned birds.)

"Take them to the code breakers," said Shun. (Shun then places a scroll in each of the Bird's beaks.)

"That should cover it. Nila, I'm on my way," said Shun.

(Switch Scene to Nila. She is hiding amongst the bushes. She is covered in bruises and is panting horribly.)

"Just four more to go," said Nila. (Nila has her Byakugan activated. She listens in on a conversation.)

"I'll check this area. You go on ahead and check the west in a kilometer radius," said Enemy # 3. "Yes. We'll get her. She used up a lot of chakra on our comrades, she should be tired by now, make her pay," said Enemy # 4. (He leaves the area as Nila notices another one of the enemies getting closer.) "Just a little closer. Cmon," said Nila to herself. (The enemy continues to get closer as Nila heart beats faster. Soon enough, the enemy is electrocuted by a shock barrier.)

-Once the person steps on the area that is marked by a special rite, anyone caught in the blast field is shocked to death.

"Got em... Wait a second. The remaining enemies are converging on my location. Damn! He must have been wired by radio... I don't have enough chakra to finish them off. Shun, where is your lazy ass when I need you. Shit... I guess this is where it ends," said Nila. (She closes her eyes for a stagnant pause, then opens them and activates Byakugan and scans the area.)

"They should have had me by now. What, they are not approaching me. It is like someone has taken them out," said Nila. (She slowly gets up. Limping to see what's going on. She notices the two enemies are dead.)

"Shun is strong but these enemies were no joke. It would have take him a hot minute to do this. And where is the third target? And what if it is not Shun who has done this? What if another enemy is out there that wants these guys dead as well? I could be in trouble. Damn it, I just had to go see what it was," said Nila all scared like.

(Nila activates the Byakugan again.)

"Someone behind me," said Nila. (The last enemy instead rushes past Nila as if he was being chased.) "What the hell is he running for? AND WHAt the hell is this chakra I'm feeling from behind? It must be the killer," said Nila. (Nila then hears a familiar voice.)

"What are you running from, it's one on one," said Mysterous figure. "That, voice," said Nila. (Immediately an extremely built shinobi with two extremely wide short-swords on each of his hips races in front of Nila.)

"Hiro Sensei," said Nila. "You've done well. Let me handle the rest," said Hiro. (The Shinobi tries to escape but is immediately stopped by Hiro as with amazing speeds he manages to get in front of him.)

"You will be punished for this if you don't stay away from me you monster," yelled Last Enemy. "May I see you again, as I torment your pathetic soul in hell for hurting my comrades. Now parish," said Hiro. (With a single sweep of his Kunai, Hiro amazingly slices the head off his opponent with relative ease. The air blast from the impact even shakes Nila's body. She falls to her knees.)

"With one swing of a Kunai? He didn't even channel wind chakra into the blade, yet he was able to sever his head. What strength," said Nila. (Hiro rushes over to Nila's aide and catches her before she falls.)

"You did good. You've taken out 5 of them. I'm impressed. These shinobi weren't your average either. Shun is probably sending data to your father. It appear as though something big is going down. And it may be connected to that meteor in the Sky," said Hiro.

"Are you here to help us," asked Nila. "You're hurt right now. We are taking you back to Konoha. Let the bigwigs handle this, I've already requested for immediate aide from your father once I saw the figure in the sky. You've done enough," said Hiro. "But, I, the meteor is soon to," said Nila before passing out.

"Hmm. She's asleep. I'm very proud of you Nila. Just wait until your father hears of your bravery. Though I'd think he'd be slightly annoyed at you for leaving at this hour and a lone at that, but deep down, he probably know that he'd have done the same thing if he was in your situation," said Hiro.

(Flashback to before Hiro rescued Nila. The scene is somewhere at the end of their converstation.)

"So Nila is involved as well. And you said you've already notified Code breakers as well? In Nila's case, I'll handle it. On another note I've already recieved word from Uzumaki Sensei that he had sent in immediate word to the surronding countries in regards to this thing here in the sky. You go find that missing-nin of yours. He may play an imporant key to all of this," said Hiro. "Yeah, I still have a mission after all. Be sure to tell Nila that her business with me is done for now. I don't want her dragged too far into this investigation," said Shun.

"You just worry about yourself at the moment. Watch yourself out there," said Hiro.

"A kid telling me to take care. Heh, heh... I'll be fine," said Shun.

(Shun smiles which causes Hiro to smirk and then Hiro leaves towards Nila's location.)

"I'm on my own again. Feels wierd, but she was never technically apart of the mission to begin with," said Shun.

(Scene is back to the present. Hiro is carrying Nila in his arms. Shun catches up with him, while he proceedes in the opposite direction. He gives Hiro the thumbs up and goes on his way to the River Country, alone.)

Next Time: Shun proceeds with his mission alone in the dark while Nila is rushed to Konoha. How will The Hokage respond to the current situation?

08-11-2009, 06:06 PM	#15
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,056 Thanks: 888 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Nila and Shun's Encounter with 10 unknown advasaries (Nila and Shun land on the branches of a tree. Shun notices that Nila is scouting the area.) "What's up? Are they nearing our location yet," asked Shun. "Yeah, but if we fight them in these quarters, they'd have us straggled due to all of the trees blocking our movements," said Nila. "Yeah, this is not a good place to take on a large amount of opponents," said Shun. "Got it. There is an area just a short distance away. There is a wider open plain. Let's go there," said Nila. "Sounds good," said Shun. (Shun is going over something in his head.) "She's spot on. Though we give her a lot of stress about being distracted by the particular areas of interest, she definately has a knack for detail and planning," said Shun to himself. (Nila and Shun land in a wide open area. Trees circle the area however, they are far enough away that gives the area a feel that it is a plain. With her Byakugan she constantly scouts the area. She immediately faces Shun and lets out a battle cry. She pulls off her jacket, revealing seals on the backside of her wrist and more seals secured on her fish net moving up to her shoulders.) She pulls out mulitple shuriken and expertly parries various Kunai and Shuriken that prepared to strike the backside of Shun. Amazingly, Shun was not hit or touched by oppossing or supporting projectiles. Shun turns around and pulls out his circular blades and rushes to take on the two advasaries. The two enemies flee.) "So, they are trying to separate us. I'll be back Nila. It shouldn't take me long to finish these guys off," said Shun. (Then she goes into a spin which slowly begins to erode the earth, tossing shuriken and kunai at rapid succession towards her back right, left, and up while they counter them with their own weapons. She continues to spin, tossing projectiles at her enemies using her Byakugan to effectively pin point her opponents' vitals.) "Damn this girl, we can't get any closer," said Enemy # 1. "Just keep knocking them away. There are 8 of us, she'll run out of weapons soon enou-," said Enemy # 2 before catching a Shuriken to the throat. "No... Now I can't," said Enemy # 1 before catching a Kunai to the face. "Good. That's two down. Shun, hurry up. The Kunai and Shuriken projectile seals will only last so long," said Nila. (Switch Scene to Shun. The two enemies are being constricked by a large spiky vine that causes them to bleed. The two enemies are wearing gray trench cloaks that zip all the way up to their necks. Their head protector has a type of unity symbol.) "These guys were stronger than the run of the mill seakers. I hope Nila is alright. NOW, Speak! Why are you attacking us," asked Shun. "Uprising! United we stand," yelled The both of them. (They countinue to chant strange words of bizzareness.) "They must be under some sealing jutsu. It is no use," said Shun before he discovers something strange mentioned by them, which causes him to stay his hand.) "Face the wrath of the Reborn SNA. And then. And then Like always, the next generation will always pay for the sins of the previous one…..," said The two shinobi. (Shun is immediately stunned.) "Was that one of the special units The Hokage had under his command? I know there was a national SNA program that improved gifted shinobies' jutsu in order to prepare for war in various villages. Hiro was part of that branch; but these people are talking about the SNA unit that was dispanded... Could they be referring to the Globalized SNA? "THE SNA. It can't be. The Global Specialized Ninja Association. But they've been disbanded years ago. Could they be responsible for the meteor? And that man I've locked eyes with. He must be with before I started to travel with Nila, must be with them. I need to send these guys to the Hokage for debriefing. Crap! Nila... I have to do this quickly," said Shun. (Shun makes several hand seals and summons two large hawk like creatures. Shun uses his circular blades to carry the trapped shinobi unto the summoned birds.) "Take them to the code breakers," said Shun. (Shun then places a scroll in each of the Bird's beaks.) "That should cover it. Nila, I'm on my way," said Shun. (Switch Scene to Nila. She is hiding amongst the bushes. She is covered in bruises and is panting horribly.) "Just four more to go," said Nila. (Nila has her Byakugan activated. She listens in on a conversation.) "I'll check this area. You go on ahead and check the west in a kilometer radius," said Enemy # 3. "Yes. We'll get her. She used up a lot of chakra on our comrades, she should be tired by now, make her pay," said Enemy # 4. (He leaves the area as Nila notices another one of the enemies getting closer.) "Just a little closer. Cmon," said Nila to herself. (The enemy continues to get closer as Nila heart beats faster. Soon enough, the enemy is electrocuted by a shock barrier.) -Once the person steps on the area that is marked by a special rite, anyone caught in the blast field is shocked to death. "Got em... Wait a second. The remaining enemies are converging on my location. Damn! He must have been wired by radio... I don't have enough chakra to finish them off. Shun, where is your lazy ass when I need you. Shit... I guess this is where it ends," said Nila. (She closes her eyes for a stagnant pause, then opens them and activates Byakugan and scans the area.) "They should have had me by now. What, they are not approaching me. It is like someone has taken them out," said Nila. (She slowly gets up. Limping to see what's going on. She notices the two enemies are dead.) "Shun is strong but these enemies were no joke. It would have take him a hot minute to do this. And where is the third target? And what if it is not Shun who has done this? What if another enemy is out there that wants these guys dead as well? I could be in trouble. Damn it, I just had to go see what it was," said Nila all scared like. (Nila activates the Byakugan again.) "Someone behind me," said Nila. (The last enemy instead rushes past Nila as if he was being chased.) "What the hell is he running for? AND WHAt the hell is this chakra I'm feeling from behind? It must be the killer," said Nila. (Nila then hears a familiar voice.) "What are you running from, it's one on one," said Mysterous figure. "That, voice," said Nila. (Immediately an extremely built shinobi with two extremely wide short-swords on each of his hips races in front of Nila.) "Hiro Sensei," said Nila. "You've done well. Let me handle the rest," said Hiro. (The Shinobi tries to escape but is immediately stopped by Hiro as with amazing speeds he manages to get in front of him.) "You will be punished for this if you don't stay away from me you monster," yelled Last Enemy. "May I see you again, as I torment your pathetic soul in hell for hurting my comrades. Now parish," said Hiro. (With a single sweep of his Kunai, Hiro amazingly slices the head off his opponent with relative ease. The air blast from the impact even shakes Nila's body. She falls to her knees.) "With one swing of a Kunai? He didn't even channel wind chakra into the blade, yet he was able to sever his head. What strength," said Nila. (Hiro rushes over to Nila's aide and catches her before she falls.) "You did good. You've taken out 5 of them. I'm impressed. These shinobi weren't your average either. Shun is probably sending data to your father. It appear as though something big is going down. And it may be connected to that meteor in the Sky," said Hiro. "Are you here to help us," asked Nila. "You're hurt right now. We are taking you back to Konoha. Let the bigwigs handle this, I've already requested for immediate aide from your father once I saw the figure in the sky. You've done enough," said Hiro. "But, I, the meteor is soon to," said Nila before passing out. "Hmm. She's asleep. I'm very proud of you Nila. Just wait until your father hears of your bravery. Though I'd think he'd be slightly annoyed at you for leaving at this hour and a lone at that, but deep down, he probably know that he'd have done the same thing if he was in your situation," said Hiro. (Flashback to before Hiro rescued Nila. The scene is somewhere at the end of their converstation.) "So Nila is involved as well. And you said you've already notified Code breakers as well? In Nila's case, I'll handle it. On another note I've already recieved word from Uzumaki Sensei that he had sent in immediate word to the surronding countries in regards to this thing here in the sky. You go find that missing-nin of yours. He may play an imporant key to all of this," said Hiro. "Yeah, I still have a mission after all. Be sure to tell Nila that her business with me is done for now. I don't want her dragged too far into this investigation," said Shun. "You just worry about yourself at the moment. Watch yourself out there," said Hiro. "A kid telling me to take care. Heh, heh... I'll be fine," said Shun. (Shun smiles which causes Hiro to smirk and then Hiro leaves towards Nila's location.) "I'm on my own again. Feels wierd, but she was never technically apart of the mission to begin with," said Shun. (Scene is back to the present. Hiro is carrying Nila in his arms. Shun catches up with him, while he proceedes in the opposite direction. He gives Hiro the thumbs up and goes on his way to the River Country, alone.) Next Time: Shun proceeds with his mission alone in the dark while Nila is rushed to Konoha. How will The Hokage respond to the current situation? __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 10-12-2009 at 03:00 PM.