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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
-Judgement Part 3
(At the battle field Teru watches as the emmense battle between shinobies take place. He also notices that the Seven mist swordsmen aren't doing anything.)
"It seems they're just sitting there, best not to worry about it now... I hope that earth shinobi and that Cloud ninja get their acts together. This wall should last until The Hokage and his aide figure out how to seal that Meteor. In the Meantime, Earth Style: Human imprisoment," said Teru. (He places his hands on the ground and earth type prisons individually restrain some of the SNA troops. There are still many of them left however.)
"This is the best I can do for now. This should be able to buy time," mumbled Teru.
"ARRGH. Fools got nothing on me," smiled Dosa. (He continues to effortlessly hack and slash through SNA troops. Flash back to the immediate past. The Scene is at Konoha. A conversation between Hiro and Hope breaks out as Hope escorts Hiro to the edge of the village.)
"I guess it is just one of those things you have to do," said Hope. "Something big is going down. I can't just let it without dirtying up my hands at least. But do me one favor, make sure Nila stays out of it. I think it is one of those days again," said Hiro.
"Yeah. I understand. I'll go inform the Father that you're leaving," said Hope. "I, perhaps it really is time I use these bad boys," said Hiro as he rubs his sheaths. "The Mountain Cutters. I've heared you've never used them, wait, I heard a story about you using them against some legendary mist shinobi," said Hope.
"That was a long time ago...," said Hiro as he vanishes. "Dosa. I wonder what you're up to. I can't sit back and allow you to have all the fun," said Hiro.
(As Hope turns around, a young man, who is fairly tall touches Hope's head with both palms, causing him to pass out.)
"Nila. I hope you are proud about what you've done," said The Young Man curtly. "Heh, you did it," said Nila. (Who is covered in bandages, yet still has her gear on.)
"Uuhh if only you didn't have that dirt on me. Next time be more lenient, we are part of the same squad afterall. And to think I'd get pulled into one of your games. You know the village's top shinobi should be above blackmail," sighed Young man.
"Oh calm down, Zig, we all know you would have done it anyway. You act all big in tough because you think you're the village's top cheese, competiting equally with Hope in terms of popularity at least, but we all know you have a big soft spot for Nila," said Laya.
"That, was. FUCK You," yelled Zig. (Nila cuddles under Zig.) "Oh Ziggy, only you can use a genjutsu strong enough to knock out my big brother," fake blushed Nila.
(Zig is angry yet blushes at the same time.)
"God damn it. The luck of being teamed up with two crazy ass females. Who'd put their own mother to sleep," sighed Zig. "Oh Ziggy, you did that to," smiled Nila. "That, that was. Fuck you," yelled Zig. (Laya and Nila give each other high fives.)
"Now, Nila, you want us to follow Hiro's trail right," said Laya. "Yeah. I can use my Byakugan however, he's too far out of range," said Nila. "Don't worry, a guy like him carries a baggage of chakra. It is still in the air, I'll find him," said Laya.
"Shit, just think about all the trouble we are going to be in when Hiro Sensei catches us," mumbled Zig. "Whinning again aren't we," asked Laya. "If you weren't a girl I'd ring pretty little your neck," said Zig.
"Oh you cocky ass fuck, I'm done with your bastard ass attitude," yelled Laya. "Oh, what are you going to do about it, humm, bitch and moan like usual? You're just jelous that the village overlooked you and chose me as the BISS NASS, you ASS," laughed Zig.
"Enough of your bull shit," said Laya. (Laya and Zig lock eyes.) "OK AFTER HIRO WE GO," yelled Nila. (Both Laya and Zig fall over from the excited Nila, whom just nonchantly over looked the vicious display of conduct between her two teammates.)
"How can she be so optimistic when she returned home just hours ago needing immediate medidcal attention," mumbled Zig. "What was that Ziggy," asked Nila as she gets close in his face. "Ahh nothing. So Laya, use that wonderful nose of yours before the Hokage finds us and has our asses," sighed Zig.
Zig: Part of Team Hiro and is a teammate to Laya and Nila. He is an extremely styled and proficient shinobi for his age. He is Jounin and is currently the talk of the town being the most talented and specialized shinobi in his age group. Though he is not as developed a shinobi as Hope, as Hope is five years older and has had time to hone his skills. He and Hope are bitter rivals as Zig looks up to him and trains hard to compete with him in sparring however, they are particularly close friends. Many of Zig's abilities and talents have yet to be revealed however, he has demonstrated that he can use complex based genjutsu by placing his palms on the heads of his victims, rendering them in a state of sleep. Despite his prowess as a young and upstanding shinobi he is constantly pestered by his fellow female teammates Nila whom he has a huge crush on and is too arrogant to admit it and she knows it, which causes him to do things he wouldn't normally do. He has a huge dislike for Laya as he uses the common words that she's as useful as a house mutt, due to her heritage. He wears the typical Jounin-Chunnin attire. His hair sticks straight up and spikes at the end. His face resembles Ryu from Street Fighter although, he is not as buff as the video game character. He is tall, around 6 ft in height. He is the only student in his class to have made it to Jounin.
Laya: The other member of Team Hiro and Nila's counterpart in crime and in life... She and Nila love to gang up on their prestigous teammate using their women like charms to annoy him to no end as well as to entice him into doing things that he normally wouldn't. She is related the Inuzaka Clan and carries the traits that allows her to be an excellent tracker. With her enhanced hearing and smelling characteristics and Nila's eye sight the two couldn't be a more perfect pair, as they can dig up clues and dirt on anything, especially on Zig. She has pink really short hair (styled into a female like hair cut of course) with markings on her face. She wears the typical Jounin-Chuunin attire for females. She considers Zig as a waste of flesh despite of the fact that he beat her handfully in a type of organized battle watched by spectators to prove a point, which led to Zig getting recognized as the next best thing as he continued on to defeat other combatants. Despite Zig comparing equally to Hope in terms of popularity, Laya seems to have instinctively removed the thought of losing to him from her mind. Her face is a mixture of Sakura's and Ino's. Like Nila's, her rank is Chuunin.
Next Time: The Scene switchs back to the battlefield.
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 09-09-2009 at 05:20 PM.