Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
(In a forested area just outside the battlefield, Nila’s team scouts the area.)
“Oh my God! What a battle,” said Nila. “What’s going on? Tell me,” said Zig. “Everyone’s fighting. I see many dead men and several shinobi I’ve never seen before. Oh, and Hiro sensei is locked in battle against another dangerous opponent using amazing chakras. I also see… Teru? He looks a little different,” said Nila.
“Teru? That’s the sand’s prodigy kid you’ve beaten two years ago. Why is he in a place like that,” asked Zig. “I have no idea, I guess he’s important people,” sighed Nila.
“Oh yeah, despite beating him, he is probably tasked with more important missions than you,” Zig said all cold like. (Nila looks down. Laya then slaps Zig in the face.) “What the hell was that for? What did I do,” yelled Zig.
“You think about that next time you open your dumb ass mouth,” yelled Laya. (Nila notices something.)
“What is it Nila,” asked Laya. “What exactly is going on now,” asked Zig.
“I was right. Behind that huge wall of earth that even stretches to this side, something is sucking the energy out of that meteor,” said Nila. “What do you think it could mean,” asked Laya. “Hmm, perhaps someone is sealing it away,” said Zig. “Maybe. OH,” yelled Nila.
(She shocks her comrades.) “What the hell was that for,” asked Zig. “Girl I know you get excited easily, but don’t give me a heart attack,” said Laya.
“Shun. Mr. Shun I forgot… He helped me out a lot back when I secretly went out. I wonder if he’s ok,” mumbled Nila. “Ah, he’s one of the Hokage’s body guards, had no idea he was caught up in this too. But I know a little about what goes on in the shinobi world and since I’ve been on more missions than anyone in our class. Looking at the situation, I say we get out of here. This is way in over our heads,” said Zig.
“Though I hate to admit it. He might actually be right for a change. Nila are you listening to us,” asked Laya.
(Close up on Nila’s eyes shows a young worried woman. The Scene switches to the battlefield. Hiro sheathes his blades then uses his hands to manipulate two huge duel tornadoes that collides with a Large Falcon like figure made up of the various chakra nature manipulations. Chakra arks from Shisio’s blade and continuously flows a path of chakra into mid-air to give the form of a devastating bird that collides with the huge spiraling winds. The huge enormous waves of chakra creates a huge explosive like discharge that blows both of them away. They get up and face each other once more.)
“It’s time we finish this, Hiro. My last attack, a technique I’ve worked on for years. Now, you’ll be the first to witness its purest form,” said Shisio.
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 09-02-2009 at 02:52 AM.