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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
(Naruto rushes off into the vast unknown, looking to save his mother’s homeland, in order to prevent a new Pain. Night soon passes as Naruto traverses great distances. He climbed through trees, hiked through mountains, and crossed over great waters. Naruto soon sets up camp under a weeping willow type tree. He soon has a dream, which is actually a flash back to the past several years ago when he was just a mid-teenager at the age of 16; the locale is at a battlefield littered with battle scars. Naruto’s clothing is ripped however, he is sturdy while another figure, Sasuke, has collapsed on the ground. Naruto soon kneels down and converses with his former comrade.)
“Why don’t you finish me off,” asked Sasuke. “I can’t. If I do that, I’d be no better than a remorseful killer who is his haunted by the fact that he ended his best friend’s life and gave up on changing him,” said Naruto. “Fool. How could you still consider us friends? I tried to destroy the village. I will never change, as long as I still live, I will hold contempt for the people who enjoy their happily filled lives while the Uchiha were bound to suffer under the rule of the Senju. That contempt, I also, hold for you, Naruto. I… How you can live your live so cheery while I must endure the life of an avenger; I hate that about you,” said Sasuke. “I had no idea you thought that way,” said Naruto. “That is why we can never be friends. You say you understand, well I say in your entire life time you can never understand. How I live my life is completely different from yours,” said Sasuke.
“That may be true. But, if that’s your way, if that’s what it means to be a shinobi to you, then I’ll have to leave it at that. I chose not to kill you because I don’t want to live my life as a resentful, dark, and tormented soul. I fight for those I protect, and as long as there are those who stand in way of the happiness of those people, I will strike them down. If you try that again, I will no longer hold regret for ending your life, as you will be in the way of my people’s happiness. With that, I will out weigh the sacrifices. I leave you with that thought, Sasuke. Let it soak in so you never cause anymore atrocities that torment your soul,” said Naruto.
(Switch back to the current situation. Naruto wakes up immediately.)
“Will I continue to be reminded of him? Perhaps it is my punishment for being unable to save him… I have to get going nonetheless,” thought Naruto. (Naruto reaches the gates of the Whirlpool Country. He soon notices that reconstruction is underway.)
“It seems construction is going along nicely,” said Naruto.
(Soon two guards approach him.) “Who are you, and why are you in our village,” said Guard 1. “Which means, length of stay, purpose, and name,” said Guard 2. “I’m Uzumaki Naruto. I’m a messenger from Konoha. I would like to have word with this village’s leader,” said Naruto. “So, you’re Naruto. The up and coming talk of the shinobi nations,” said Guard 1. “Our leader is right on ahead. We’ll guide you to him, Fellow clansmen,” said Guard 2.
(Naruto smiles. As the two guards walk Naruto to the village’s leader, many people are in praise of the name Uzumaki Naruto, being proud that he carries the name Uzumaki and chanting the work he done what with the strengthened reunion of Konoha’s two allies. Some of the girls are quite taken with him however, many question whether he is worthy to stand in the light of Zane, the apparent village leader. Naruto reaches the top of a mountain like cliff. A young man, about Naruto’s age, has long spiky blond hair, and a facial structure similar to Naruto’s however, is mixed with a Genma facial tone as well. He turns around to face Naruto.)
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Last edited by The Special One; 09-07-2009 at 04:15 AM.