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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
"Greetings, messenger from Konoha. You must be Uzumaki Naruto. Nice to meet you, I’m Uzumaki Zane,” said Zane. “Zane… I’ve heard great legends about you from the people of this village. It seems they have a lot of faith in you,” said Naruto. “Master Zane reclaimed this village from the war disputes with the surrounding countries. With his amazing ninjutsu and intellectual logistics, he managed to have done something the past leaders had not been able to do,” said Guard 1.
“That’s enough. You guys go along now. I have something to discuss with this young man,” said Zane. “Of course sir,” said Guard 1. (They both leave.) “Yes, actually I’ve heard about you from before. That is why I wanted to too see you and ensure that you keep up the good fight. There is another reason why I want this village to be safe, you see,” said Naruto.
(Zane smiles.) “I’ve done some research on you Naruto. How a man in Konoha carries the last name Uzumaki is indeed strange. But it appears my mother’s sister, met and fell in love with a splendid young shinobi, and they had a child together in Konoha. All traces were lost about my aunt, but I think that last trace may exist inside of you,” said Zane. “Really? Was your aunt’s name Kushina,” asked Naruto. “Yes, that must mean,” said Zane.
“She’s my mother,” said Naruto. “Oh… How wonderful, to think the amazing Naruto would be my cousin, it is such an honor. That is precisely why we need to stick together. Most of our clan lost their lives during grueling battles. It is nice to find someone such as you who has it all together and brimming with pure talent,” said Zane. (Small talk and jokes are over now.)
“Sure thing,” said Naruto. “But in all seriousness. Even though the village believes in me, I am unsure if we can continue the good fight. I’m powerful and feared on the battle, but that won’t stop smaller nations from invading. It is only a matter of time now. For months we fought long, harsh, and grueling battles, we’re tired. As the 5 great nations stabilized, many smaller countries surrounding our village, each had their own objectives.
Becoming a great nation; for that to happen, they had to gain territory, techniques, and admass men. We are caught in the middle. Our village is torn apart after each reconstruction. Money is short and famine is growing. All hope seems lost. An inevitable fate you’d save. It is like building a massive city on top of ground below sea level. Yet, the people smile with every victory that I lead, although the significance is short and the drawbacks are high. They chant my name and look toward the day in which we are liberated for this hell. I’ll never give up. Their safety is my direct concern. If I have to fight the world alone, I’d do it,” said Zane.
(Naruto has flashbacks of when he made claims about wanting to be the Hokage as a child and not giving up and what not. Then Naruto has a flash back towards when he fought Sasuke before they broke away for good. Back to Zane’s speech.)
“Fight the world. As long as there is breath is this body, I’ll continue to fight to preserve my people’s wishes, even if it is an inevitable fate. It is better to strive and die for the impossible with all year heart, then to give up and regret not trying,” said Zane.
(Naruto is moved.) “No. I’m not asking you the fight the world. Not by yourself anyway,” said Naruto. “Is there any other way,” asked Zane. “You’re speech has moved me. We really are alike. I spent the last few years strengthening ties with my village’s allies. Though I haven’t paid much attention to the smaller nations; you give me hope that inspires me to fight for the benefit of everyone’s satisfaction. What
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