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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The Scene switches to the outskirts of one of Mizugakure’s camps. Shisio is escorted in from his battle with Hiro by his Devil’s army. They are worried about his condition. He is placed into a tent, while they leave, Shisio gets a visit from his second lieutenant.)
“Commander, you need to rest for a bit. You can’t keep battling with Hiro. Though you guys are evenly match, point for point. But give it up, it is over, and you are an important aspect to this village. Once being a member of the Sevenmist swordsmen however, your desire to follow your own path, resulted in you creating your own specialized unit that perhaps even surpasses the seven mist swordsmen due to your amassed troops,” said Aito.
“As long as Hiro is on the battlefield, I will go. Mizukage stated I was the only one that could take him. And it is true. No one stands a chance,” said Shisio. “Thankfully Konoha has finally pulled out. You don’t have to worry about that anymore. We’ve lost. But we still have our pride. The Hokage has led the allied nations to win the war,” said Aito.
“I gave Hiro a wound he won’t forget. Yes, he got my left eye, but, I don’t expect him to roam the battles for a while. If he still poses as a threat, I’ll take him out. Right now, it is a stalemate, he wouldn’t dare approach me in his current status. Now that it is settled, I’m satisfied with at least injuring him that much,” said Shisio. “Please don’t do anything rash. With the SNA still at large, it is dangerous even for us to step out in the cold. We’ll await further orders from Mizukage,” said Aito.
(Amy, a familure name enters the tent. She is Shisio’s first lieutenant.)
“Mizukage issued us, our army to defend against the last of the enemy’s raid. Since we are the most active and abled on the field, we have to be there,” said Amy. (Shisio tries to get up. While Amy places her hand on his chest to keep him down.)
“No. Not you. The village needs you at a time like this; and in your condition, you might be unable fight to your best. Rest. Please. I’m… Not just saying this because you’re my commander. I’m saying this because you’re really important me, no strings attached,” said Amy. “Amy… Fine. You’re the boss right now. Lead them as I would. Watch your asses out there,” said Shisio.
(He grabs Amy’s hand and holds unto it tightly before slowly letting go. The scene is switched to a barren waste land. Six SNA troops are exchanging information with seven mist swordsmen. The sevenmist swordsmen take off.)
“I guess it was a good idea I didn’t shatter their faces after all,” said Tank “Win through compromise I always say,” sighed Sakuya. “About the Mizukage’s morale, why would she betray her troops like this,” asked Ino Shika Cho. “Yes, the tip was unexpected. Definitely,” said Oita. “OH well, we still have to pay Mizukage a visit since, Konoha, Kumo, and Suna are paying us so well,” said. Michi. (She licks her face.)
(Tetsuo looks through a crystal ball.) “Faced with undefeatable odds, even the most grizzled war veterans must bend the rules to survive,” said Tetsuo. (All of a sudden about 100 troops, the Devil’s Army begin to raid however, they notice it is only six shinobi.)
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