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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
(Night covers the sky as the scene is now switched to a camp out held by Team Uzumaki. Dosa carried Zig and tossed him unto a mat. Hiro carries Nila and gently lays her down. Inokichi is used as a pillow for Laya. They look at the exhausted students.)
“Ahh, man, I hope we didn’t over do it,” said Rina. “Nahh. I know my guys; they’ll be up in moving in no time. They’re troopers for sure. Why do you think they’re so scrappy? I whip them into shape. I don’t want to speak for the other Jounin squad leaders, but I feel as though they aren’t learning anything, until they give it everything they’ve got,” said Hiro.
(Shows a flash back to Hiro teaching the younger versions of Nila, Laya, and Zig how to walk on walls and on water. Zig gets both tricks first, while the others pick up. Then shows them learning how to throw shuriken and wield Kunai. The flash backs shows Zig bragging while having it easy, while Nila keeps on trying and encouraging Laya to keep going.
The scene cuts to them controlling chakra, using the ram handseal until they pass out, while Hiro watches them. Nila is the last one standing; she soon fades as Hiro carries all of them on his back. The scene switches to a more recent event when they were around 12-13 years old. The three attacks him however, the scene fades out and switches to after the battle, which shows that they are all lay knocked out cold by Hiro. Now, the scene is back to the present.)
“I guess you’ve shed your softness as you grew up and raised fine upstanding young shinobi. Just like Uzumaki Sensei,” said Dosa. “Dosa,” mumbled Hiro. “You guys,” said Rina. (She gets in between and hugs them both. Dosa makes a strange face. The trio all pictures themselves as young shinobi in each of Nila, Laya, and Zig. A flash back to a group image shows a younger Hokage standing behind and smiling joyfully behind his three child versions of his pupils. In the image Dosa and Hiro are at each other’s necks while Rina was trying to pull them apart. The Scene switches to Hinata’s room. She is glaring at a picture that has a younger Hope, Nila, Hinata, and The Hokage in it.)
“Why can’t we have a normal family? I just hate that all I can do for them is to pray for their success. Though, I’m probably being selfish. I knew I had to face this when I decided to marry Naruto, and I wouldn’t change a thing. (She smiles.) Nila, our little daughter, I hope the best for her, in whatever she decides to do. It is just when she came home all injured; I had to cradle her in my arms, even though she would probably throw a fit if I told her, she’s so rough. I just don’t want her to be seriously hurt,” thought Hinata.
(Hope appears behind her and places his hand on her shoulder.)
“Hope,” said Hinata. “Don’t worry mom, she’ll be fine. She has something special about her. Something in her that isn’t present among many,” smiled Hope. “I know. I believe in her ability to keep going. Despite being in such a poor condition and going out like that, I would normally be angry, but her sheer will and determination to over look the pain makes me a little envious. I wish I was more like that when I was younger,” smiled Hinata
“I guess I see why Zig did what he did. He couldn’t stop her. Not with that determination to go learn truths and see sights to broaden her horizon. Zig, I’m sorry. Perhaps in that sense, you were a wiser man that I,” thought Hope.
(Now, switch Scene to the Hokage’s office. He is analyzing the Forbidden scroll he secured when Shun was unable to seal up all of the meteor’s chakra. He then takes a break and looks at a picture of his family before kicking back and taking a nap.)
“Nila, be strong for daddy,” said The Hokage.
Next Time: Team Hiro's training comes to a close
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol