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Old 09-25-2009, 07:01 AM   #5
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
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Originally Posted by Shrike View Post
Nice, Numi.
Sasuke talked a bit too much. When you write, you should mostly write his thoughts, at least in battle. He is usually silent while fighting. All he talked vs Deidara was "Where is Itachi?" and he didn't talk at all vs KB.
Edited to reflect your advice. Hope you like it better
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