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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
At Sa-mosutatto village.
“Lord Mikoto!!!” scream a Sa-mosutatto guard. Mikoto and Sasuke look at the guard. “You must see this.” Says the guard as he give a telescope to Mikoto. He looks through the scope and see the battle between Reika, Kyo and Dosa. “I see a battle. Three ninjas. They summon a croc, a turtle and a frog. Not ninjas but sages.” Sasuke look at Mikoto. “A toad?” ask Sasuke. “Don’t worry. I confirmed Reika and Kyo, but whoever summon that toad isn’t Naruto.” Says Mikoto. He looks at Sasuke with a grin. “Let’s take a closer look, shall we?” ask Mikoto. “If Reika’s there, then I’m going. Her story about Amy’s death. When I dig around, there are some inconsistency.” Says Shisio. “Guess my opinion don’t count then?” sighs Ryu. Yuki just seem lost in thought.
Dream is standing at lake's edge with two beautiful woman, one with a long black hair, wearing a sexy blue ninja gi with fishnet and she have the sharingan and another woman with short black hair and wearing a white medical outfit with the byakugan.
"So what do you think of the Bird Country eh, Kakuya, Kimiko? The two girls look at around with awe.
"It looks nice." says Kimiko, the girl with Byakugan. "That fight is more interesting." says Kakuya, the girl with the Sharingan while pointing to the fight location between Reika, Kyo and team Konoha.
"Both of you see that guy with the scythe?" ask Dream. Both of the girls nod. "Kill him." says Dream. The girls nods and run through the lake towards Dosa. "This should get me on Reika good side." mumbles Dream as he picks a large crossbow and aim at Gamabunta.
On top of Gamabunta.
"Ok, let’s get the Mizukage!!!!" yelled Dosa. Before they can mounted any attack Dosa spotted a large fireball refelction from the lake and look behind him where he saw the fire ball is getting closer. "Evasive manuever!!!" yelled Dosa and he and the Konoha trackers evade the fireball. While Dosa on the mid-air, Kimiko emerged infront of him. "Gentle Fist!!" yelled Kimiko but Dosa parried her blow with his scythe. Dosa landed beside Gamabunta, while the Konoha trackers land a few feet away from Dosa. "Who the...." says Mai but before she can finish the Marine squad have surrounded them. “THIS.......IS......NOT......PART..... .O F......THE.......PLAN." says Tabito. "Now we are on the lake, this is our turf. You won’t walk out alive." says Orca.
Dosa look at the two girls who is charging at him. "Fuck you bitches." says Dosa. Kakuya makes a few hand seals and shoot a large fireball from her mouth. "Great Fireball Technique." says Kakuya. Dosa charges forward and cut the fireball in half with his scythe, but as the fireball disperse, another figure appear through the fireball remains and hit Dosa at his left shoulder. "What the....." says Dosa as he dodges back. Suddenly he can't felt the chakra from his left shoulder. He looks at his attacker, and it was Kimiko. “What do you think of our team work, SNA member?” ask Kakuya. “We are the anti-SNA ninjas created to counter any ninjas with SNA training. Do you think you can surpass the Sharingan and Byakugan combination?” ask Kimiko. “Fuck you bitches!!!!” scream Dosa as he jumps upwards and make a handseal. “Fire element: Fire Dragon Technique!!!” says Dosa as he shoots flames that resemble dragon at the sisters. Kimiko gets into a Hyuuga stance and use Eight Trigrams Empty Palm, concentrated force of chakra out of her hand, to violently push the flame away. Dosa was stunned that his attack was nullified and then realize that Kakuya isnt with Kimiko. Then he senses something behind him and as he looks back he notice Kakuya is inches behind him, with a short sword ready to slash his back. Quickly he uses his scythe to parry her blow and use his strength to knock her back and Kakuya lands beside Kimiko. Then they notice a large shadow, and they look up and see Gamabunta is swinging his word at them. Quickly they dodge the attack.
At lakes edge, Dream shoots his crossbow and the bolt flies quickly across the lake and hit Gamabunta’s front leg causing him to scream in agony. He looks at the bolt and notice there is a tag attached to it. “SHIT!!!! IS THAT, THE UNSUMMON TAG???” says Gamabunta before he disappeared into a puff of smoke. “Now that makes it even.” Says Kimiko. Kakuya sneers and she charged forward towards Dosa. “I’m so gonna teach your place bitches!!!” yelled Dosa as he charged forward also. Suddenly Kakuya takes out a few kunai from her backpocket and throw directly at Dosa. “Frontal attack? Do you think I’m that dense??” yelled Dosa. Then he realise that the kunais are rigged with explosive tag. Before he can evade, the kunai explode in front of him and he take cover behind a rock. When he looks up, his vision was blurred by the smoke and mist from the lake. He moves from the rock when suddenly Kimiko emerged and attack him from behind with Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms and Dosa scream and he falls down on his knees. “Mother fucking bitches. Attack like cowards.” Says Dosa as he tries to stand up. Suddenly Kakuya runs toward him and kick the scythe from his hand and punch Dosa in the guts and he falls down to his knees. Kimiko looks as Dosa’s scythe sinks into the water. Kakuya grabs Dosa’s head and thruts her right knee to Dosa’s face, breaking nose and blood gushing out from his nose and mouth. “Fuck. I never was beaten like this before. I can’t mold any chakra and my head is getting numb.” Mumbles Dosa as Kimiko grabs both of his shoulder and dislocated it. Dosa bite his lips to endure the pain. “Now there will be no surprises.” Says Kimiko.
At the other part of the lake the Konoha trackers are busily fighting the Marine squad. “Water element: One hundred Flying Water Dolphins of Death.” Says Dolphin and hundreds water release dolphin jumps from the lake towards Mai. She quickly makes a few hand seals and crystals emerged around her and protect Mai from Dolphin’s attack. “Crystal Technique: Crystal Wall.” “What? Crystal element?” ask Dolphin. “Long story short, my parents once serve the wrong master and now they make amends by serving Naruto-sama. And I inherit this kekkei genkai so that I will use this for my hokage.” Says Mai.
A few metres away from Mai and Dolphin.
Shark and Tabito is charging at each other and Tabito use his axe on Shark but Shark blocks it with his hand and effortlessly push Tabito away from him. He then makes a hand seal. “Water release: Double Shark Missle.” Said Shark and Tabito sees two fins racing through the lake towards him and he evades them by jumping upwards and the two sharks explode beneath him. “You look kinda familiar.” Says Shark. “……..” says Tabito. “I remember!!!!!! You’re that stupid ninja from 2 years ago that leaves Ada Village to answer a distress call from some fellow konoha ninjas.” Laughs Shark. Tabito look shock at the mention of that village name. “You left that village and only to return seeing it in rubbles. But that villagers from that village is your friends too right? If I so remember, very tasty too. HAHAHA!!!!” “YOU…….” Says Tabito. “What, losing some friends makes you talk like a retard? It’s your entire fault!!!!!!!!” Yelled Shark as he makes another hand seal. “Water Release: Shark Teeth Bullets.” Says Shark and countless fast projectiles flies straight towards Tabito and multiple projectiles hit him, and he fall down into the lake. Shark sneers. “That was easy.” He said and he turns his back when a voice stops him. “WAIT……MURDERER…” says Tabito as he gets back up. Shark grins and he use the lake’s water to form a sword. “Water Release: Water Sword. Now Konoha ninja,entertain me.” Says Shark.
In the other side of the lake
Kou is charging towards Orca. He pulls out a scroll and a giant shuriken puff out of it. Kou throws that shuriken and makes a hand seal. “Ninja Art: Giant Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique.” Says Kou and the giant shuriken multiply and spinning towards Orca. Orca quickly makes some handseal, “Water Release: Sperm Whale Slam, and a humongous whale, the size of a small island, comes out of the lake and slam into the multiple shuriken and Kou. Kou quickly dodge to avoid the whale and jumps towards Orca with his kunai. Orca pulls his own kunai and they parried each other with their kunai and they jumps back, away from each other. “Your ninjutsu and taijutsu is very excellent.” Says Kou. Orca sneers and he makes another handseal. “Water Release: Black Mist.” Says Orca and blows a black mist from his mouth towards Kou and it soon enveloped Kou. “What a strange mist. It’s so dark, I can’t see anything.” Says Kou. Suddenly hundreds black arms comes from under him and beginning to pull him in. “What the…..this whole mist is a genjutsu.” Says Kou as he struggle to get himself free. He bites his lips to free himself from the jutsu and quickly jumps upwards until he is out of the mist. Orca just look at him jumps away from the mist and landed behind him. “So you escape my genjutsu, this fight gonna be a long one.” Sighs Orca.
In the middle of the lake a crocodile and a turtlr is fighting each other as their summoners use both nijutsu and taijutsu to defeat their opponent and in the distance Sasuke, Shisio, Yuki, Ryu and Mikoto is heading towards the battle side.
“Dosa…..” whisper Yuki.
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