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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

“You betray me, Yuki. I should expect that, since Kakashi is your father.” Says Sasuke. Yuki looks at Sasuke and the rest of his team. She turns her back on them and put Dosa corpse on her shoulder and makes a hand seal. “Lightning Element: Lightning Speed.” And she runs through the lake to the direction of the Sand Village. “You lost her.” Sneers Shisio. Sasuke activate his Sharingan and look at his team. “I’ll make sure Reika defeat Kyo. The rest of you, make sure the trackers never leave this lake alive.” Says Sasuke and he jump towards the sages battle. “You heard the boss.” Says Shisio and he unsheathe his sword.

At the UHE tower.

Tetsuo is meditating when he suddenly open his eyes. “Mizukage has gained a new ally.” Says Tetsuo. The rest of UHE is looking at him. “Uchiha Sasuke.” Says Tetsuo. “What is your plan?” ask Oita. “We wait. Wait until they meet the kages in the battle field, then we unleashed the meteor on them.” Says Tetsuo. The other nods. “Now Blank, go and fetch Nila for us, Oita, Michi. You guys will accompany Blank. Your mission is to draw the 8 tail from Konoha.” Ordered Tetsuo. Blank, Michi and Oita nods.

At Konoha.

Hope meets the team that returns from Rock Village. “It seems it went quite well.” Says Hope. Sarutobi nods. “Yeah, but I can’t shake this feeling something bad gonna happen.” Says Sarutobi. “Big bro, you must what I did on that mission!!!” says Nila happily. Hope give Nila a warm smile and then looks at Zig. “Thanks, for looking after her.” Says Hope and he offer a handshake. Zig shakes Hope hand.

Near the border of Wind Country.

Yuki puts Dosa body down and she put her ear on Dosa chest. “No heartbeat. But his body still warm.” Says Yuki and lightning cracks from her palm and she put both of her palm on Dosa chest and lightning went through his body. “C’mon Dosa, you aren’t the man that give up easily. C’MON!!!!” yelled Yuki. Suddenly she heard a heartbeat. “HAAAAAA!!!!” gasped Dosa. “DOSA!!!!!!!!” scream Yuki and she hugged him. “OWWW!!!! That hurts!!!” scream Dosa. Yuki release the hug and took out a scroll and a medic kit puff out of it. “Yuki?” ask Dosa. Yuki didn’t answer him. She took out iodine with some cotton and bandages. “Why you betray me?” ask Dosa. Yuki stop moving and she looks downward. “I’m sorry.” Whisper Yuki. “C’mon Yuki, tell me.” Says Dosa. “I’m tired. Tired of war, killing, spying. I lost so much because of the way of the ninja.” Says Yuki. “And then you tip the Mizukage about our forces?” ask Dosa. “The Hokage said that’s the only way I can left.” Says Yuki and she looks at Dosa. “You think I’m lying do you?” ask Yuki. Dosa shakes his head. “Nah, I believe you. You’re the worst liar back then, and you are even worst now. I’m just glad I see you again,Yuki.” Says Dosa. Yuki smiles and she patch some of Dosa’s wound.

“So when are we going for a date again?” ask Dosa.

“WHAT? You almost die and you ask me out?”

“Well, this seems the best time…” says Dosa.

“Well, you never change do you?” ask Yuki.

“What? I almost die and you’re patching me. It’s not a date, ARRRGHHH!!! My chest…..” scream Dosa. “You’re not fully healed yet. Konoha is too far away. Only the Sand is close enough.” Says Yuki and she carried Dosa to Sand Village. “So will you.. Say yes?” ask Dosa. “This is not a good time, Dosa.” Says Yuki as she carried Dosa on her back. “I’m dying here….” Says Dosa. “Ok, yes I will.” Sighs Yuki. “Cool. Those mother fuckers going to be so jealous. So will you come back to Konoha?” ask Dosa. “Ok, that’s too much.” Says Yuki.

At the battle site.

Sasuke watches as Reika is putting on Kyo’s armor. He then looks at Shisio. “The trackers?” “Sleeping with the fishes.” Says Shisio. Suddenly the lake water becomes lower and soon the lake is gone. Sasuke looks at the three corpses near Ryu. “We must get Yuki before she reach Sand Village.” Says Sasuke. “That’s your problem.” Says Shisio and he put his sword on Reika’s neck. “Tell me, who kill Amy.” Reika grins. “The SNA. Why? Serving this Uchiha makes you stupid?” ask Reika. “I serve no one!!!” yells Shisio. Reika looks at Sasuke. “It seems we are fated to join forces, eh Uchiha Sasuke?” smiles Reika. Sasuke look at her with his Sharingan. “Orca, Shark, Dolphin. Assist Mr.Sasuke on finding this Yuki.” “I never ask for your help.” Says Sasuke. “Well you need. If Yuki arrives at Sand Village, your plan is jeopardized.” Says Reika. “Well I’m leaving. Nice working with you Sasuke.” Says Shisio and he turn back heading to Konoha. “You’re not leaving. If you still insist, I will kill you here and now.” Says Sasuke. Shisio looks at Sasuke. “You just got a freaking sage and her three mermaids. Why you still need good old me?” ask Shisio. “You know too much. And your skill may needed, so stay.” Says Sasuke. Shisio glares at Sasuke. “You just enter my top five list, Sasuke.” Says Shisio. Sasuke signals his teammates and all of them leave the area heading towards Sand Village and Dream and Reika headed towards the Rain Village, where she will be posing as Kyo.

One hour later.

A man riding a lion is heading towards Rain Village when he spotted 4 bodies lying on the ground. He walks towards the bodies and examine them. “Konoha trackers.” Says Daisuke. The he heard a soft moan. He looks at Mai and saw her finger is twitching. “We have one survivor. Summoning Technique.” Says Daisuke and a lioness wearing a nurse hat appear before him. “Heal her.” Says Daisuke and the lioness put her front palm on Mai and began to heal her. Slowly her wounds heal and she began regaining consciousness. “Where…..Tabito, Kou?” ask Mai and she began shaking her comrades body. “I’m sorry. They are dead.” Says Daisuke. “NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!” scream Mai. “I will kill them!!!” yelled Mai. “Stay calm and tell me what happened here.” Ask Daisuke. Mai look at him and the lioness. “Great more sages.” Says Mai and she tell Daisuke about the Jigen Reika, her Marine squad and Sasuke intervention. “I see. So that man is Kyo.” Says Daisuke. “Will you help me, avenge my friend?” ask Mai. Daisuke looks at her with pity. “First lets bury them.” Says Daisuke. Mai nods. “Then we go to Konoha.” Says Daisuke. “But……” says Mai. “ Those people must be stopped, and you need a rest.” Says Daisuke. “Revenge will blacken the soul. Uchiha Sasuke is the living proof. What will yor friends say if you follow his foot steps?” ask Daisuke. Mai looks down. “Let’s bury them, and then we report this to the Hokage.” Says Daisuke. “Earth Element: Soil Splitter.” Says Daisuke and the earth opens before him. Then he and Mai place Tabito Kou and Kyo’s corpses inside the earth and Daisuke make another hand seal and the earth closes back. Mai places a wood on top of their graves. Daisuke open a sake bottle and pours the sake on their graves.

“Let’s get going, Miss?” ask Daisuke.

“Mai.”
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