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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
“Hmm, the Kazekage is a generous man,” thought Yuki. “Are you sure about this Kazekage; without the proper proceedings,” said man who is cloaked. “Listen to the Kazekage for once,” said Kankuro. “Now, from the beginning, tell me what happened you two. Were you tracking Mizukage,” asked Kazekage.
(The Scene switches to Konoha. Mai is walking now, as she is escorting Daisuke and Max to the Hokage’s office. People around them take notice, soon Neji approaches Mai.)
“A Sage,” thought Neji.
“Welcome home. Where’s the others and why is Daisuke of the Lion here,” asked Neji. “They’re… I’m sorry it was tough ride, we were defeated; and I was the only one left. Daisuke saved me and put me back on my feet,” said Mai. “Impossible, what the hell did you guys face? And where is Dosa? I can’t help but think something like this would be avoided with his help,” said Neji.
“He was nowhere to be found, besides, his chakra faded before I was knocked out,” said Mai. “Nooo… The Hokage will be disheartened to discover that,” said Neji. “No time! I need to speak with The Hokage immediately! Serious matters are to be taken into consideration. I’m talking about the SNA,” said Daisuke.
“I see, a Sage contacting a Sage, must be urgent. Right, just this way, I’ll lead you. Mai, please contact Sai and let him know you survived. And Mai,” said Neji. (Mai looks saddened.) “Please, it’s alright, I need to tell The Hokage about what we were up against,” said Mai. “I see, then I won’t stop you,” said Neji.
“Shall we be moving,” asked Daisuke. “Yes, follow me,” said Neji. (They rush off to the Hokage’s office, as the scene switches over to inside the main temple of the Hyuuga clan’s establishment. Nila is dressed in a white robe with a yellow wrap going around her waist to hold the robe steady. She has no shoes on as well. Her hair is pinned up into a bun. She is soon surrounded by many Hyuuga clan members, 5 on each side. There is a chair in the middle of the room. She sits down.)
“Nila, welcome to the family,” said Elder Hiashi. “Thank you sir,” said Nila. (Nila looks over to Inabi, as Inabi smiles. Nila soon has a flash back to last night; moments after Inabi left her room. Hinata opens the door much to Nila’s shock.) “M, Mother,” mumbled Nila. (Hinata walks over to Nila.) “I heard, you know I’m not a light sleeper. So, what will you do,” asked Hinata. “Mom, if you are strongly against it I swear I wouldn’t,” said Nila. (Hinata quickly embraces Nila and draws her closer.)
“Mom,” mumbled Nila. “If this is what you want, then I won’t stop you. You’re becoming an adult with her own dreams and motivations. Every time I look at you, slowly remind me of your father. The motivation to make change and branch out from the usual way of thinking, I’m just afraid you’d break away too soon, and I might not see you as often. But now, I came to the conclusion that it is time to let go,” cried Hinata as she lets her go.
“Mom,” mumbled Nila. “So, what is it that you desire,” asked Hinata. (Nila smiles.) “I want to do things on my own for a change. I want to be known for my own talents, not just known because I'm the Hokage's daughter. That is my mission, and if I have to be the head of the Hyuuga clan to realize that, then so be it,” said Nila.
“Good,” smiled Hinata. (The Scene switches back to the present. Inside a hospital room, Shun wakes up as he sits up. He is wrapped in bandages and his dawning a blue hospital coat. Shun unwraps his bandages on his face revealing his face free from scars. He then proceeds to unwrap his hands, afterwards, he rips out the IV tubes that are connected to him. He then notices flowers, balloons and get better cards from his fellow villagers and friends. He picks up one among many that are left near an end table near his left.)
-Dear Mr. Shun, I just want to thank you for all of the help, especially when I decided to let you tag along. (Shun stops reading there and tosses the note to the side and sighs.)
“What? She was the one who meddled; just plain insanity! I’ll at least look at that crazy Hokage’s note,” said Shun. (He picks up the Hokage’s after shuffling through the others and begins to read it.)
-Hey Big guy! I appreciate you taking good care of my baby girl. How about after you get all patched up you, and our gang go for a drink and poker, just like the old days. (Shun stops right there and sighs.)
“Like I should have expected something more from that goon of a Kage… Heh, if Lee, Kiba, or Choji are there at our supposed hang out, they can count me out of the loop,” thought Shun. “Wow! How long have I been out resting,” asked Shun. (Shun looks at a calendar that is on the right side of his bed, which sits on an end table.)
“WHAT! I’ve been out for roughly 2 weeks! Man, anything could have happened when I’ve been away in this coma,” said Shun. (He gets out of bed, yet his bones in his feet are bothering him, causing him to sit back down on his bed.) “Dang! It seems I haven’t completely recovered from the red’s pill adverse effects. I'll probably need a day or so before I fully recover though, Choji did warn me that since I wasn’t part of his clan, the effects would be worse on my body, especially so if my body was weakened prior. (Shun rubs his head.) I still have quite the headache from the pill lessening the brain's response to pain receptors.
Though, I can’t just sit here, I have to know if everything is alright, I can’t just sit here complacently,” said Shun. (He gets up and starts walking out of the door. The Scene switches to the Hokage’s office. After Daisuke and Mai told them everything that had transpired, The Hokage uses Rasengan to destroy his desk in anger.)
“DAMN! How Could I let something like this happen?! Damn it, damn it, damn it! What kind of a Kage am I? Sai’s best unit, Dosa! He was my student, just like family! He, fuck it all,” yelled The Hokage. (Tears start to run down his cheeks from both eyes, Shikamaru puts his arm around him in order to comfort him.)
“Ahh man Naruto, but destroying the table is making you out to be irrational in front of a fellow Sage,” said Shikamaru. “Mai, go inform Sai of what just happened and tell him to report to me ASAP,” yelled The Hokage. “Yes sir,” said Mai. (A tear rushes down her face as she rushes off. She has a flash back of Kou, Tabito, and then finally Dosa. She gets to the hall and falls to her knees, and then she starts to emotionally break. The Scene switches back to the office.)
“I’m sorry, Hokage, but there are more pressing concerns, such as the SNA,” said Daisuke. “I know, you contacted me for that, unfortunately Kyo was killed in battle, and Mizukage has allied herself with her old squad, and met up with Sasuke and his new dangerous group of characters. Is that right so far based off Mai's intepretation of the facts,” asked The Hokage. “Yes, though the SNA is the most dangerous at the moment,” said Daisuke. “I concur, that is why I have the 8 tails with me, who has three of the Bijuu sealed within scrolls. We can put up quite the defense with you on our side,” said The Hokage.
“It seems the Hokage has taken the appropriate steps,” said Max. “Shikamaru, signal the siren,” said The Hokage. “You don’t know mean,” questioned Shikamaru. “Yeah, call in all of the Jounin, Special Jounin, and Chunnin commanders to the Barracks! I will talk with them soon, and while you are at it, arrange for the transcript for the Kages, let them know that we are attacking first! It is time we put an end to this strife. From this day forward until otherwise, mark this as the 5TH SHINOBI WAR! The allied Nations, Mizukage’s forces which now includes Sasuke’s gang, and SNA are all competing for the culture and politics that govern this world,” yelled The Hokage. “A three way battle it appears,” said Daisuke. (The scene switches to the office of Amegakure. Reika posing as the leader receives a special greeting from Dream, as he is escorted by Kimiko and Kakuya.)
“My lord, the 100 Kakashi clone project is ready for deployment,” said Dream. “Good, now I will command control over this village from the curtains,” said Reika. “Are you joining this strife,” asked Dream. “I aide with the strongest in the meantime, so whatever side falls, I will be against; remember I will be poising as the leader of this village, it would be wise for me to lay low unless we are attacked,” said Reika.
“One problem, I forgot the corpse of Kyo,” said the sighing Dream. “YOU WHAT,” yelled Reika. “I actually forgot it myself,” thought Kimiko. “FOOLZ! If they discover his corpse and try to contact this village of the news, my identity would be blown. The only reason why I agreed for you to come, Dream, was because I told you to use the corpse sealing method to erase all traces of his body,” yelled Reika. “Heh, heh,” mumbled the frightened Dream.
(The Scene switches to the outskirts of the Sand Village. Sasuke’s team approaches the Sand village as the sun glares intensely; apparently, it’s the afternoon. The Marine Squad is already ahead of everyone else.)
“Marine Squad, fall back, let’s approach this from a different angle,” yelled Sasuke. “Acting like he’s the boss,” said Shark. “Reika put him in charge Shark, so we have to obey,” said Orca. “Hmm,” groaned Shark. (They rush back to the group.)
“So, you’re not just attacking the Sand because of Yuki hmm,” said Mikoto. “Correct, the Sand is the strongest ally to Konoha; it almost slipped my mind, so taking them out first would be suffice; also, Yuki may have the Kazekage informing The Hokage of our arrival; we have to make sure she is stopped,” said Sasuke.
“Suppose we do once we finally attack he village? Will we attack from various angles via radio communications,” asked Shisio. “An attack on the village with our low numbers wouldn’t be easy,” said Ryu. “Mikoto, how’s the temperature feeling,” asked Sasuke. (Sasuke smirks.) “So, that’s his game,” said Shisio.
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^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 10-14-2009 at 05:37 PM.