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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
“It wasn’t,” said Yuki. “WHAT,” yelled Ryu. “I set it up underground sometime earlier, it is a similar scroll I used to summon the tracking fang squad however, I set it up so that if chakra passes over it that does not match have a match to mine, the summoned dogs would appear and latch on to your body within a split second. My goal was just leading you over the trap, and it seems you fell right for it! AWW, is little baby Ryu all mad because he lost to a bad bitch like me! Tss, tss, tss. That’s why kids shouldn’t meddle in grown up affairs,” smiled Yuki.
(She walks closer to him and gets in his face.) “Why you,” yelled Ryu. “If you promise me to be a good boy and leave my sight and return to your village, I’ll make sure my doggies don’t rip ever inch, and I every inch of you into shreds,” grinned Yuki. (The dogs growl as Ryu gulps. She gets even closer as he sweats. She then kisses him on the cheek, which causes him to blush.) “Promise to leave these goons alone and I’ll spare your life, just say promise now,” smiled Yuki. (Ryu is still frozen up.) “My dogs will treat you like chewing bones,” smiled Yuki. (Ryu then snaps back to reality.) “FINE I PROMISE,” yelled Ryu.
“Good, you made the right decision,” said Yuki. (She makes a handseal as the dogs disperse; Ryu then looks over at Yuki blushes and remembers to when she kissed him. Yuki looks back.) “Better get going,” said Yuki. “Umm,” mumbled Ryu. “What boy,” asked Yuki. “Can you… Be my… Will you go out with me,” asked Ryu. (Yuki smiles as Ryu blushes.) “Kid,” said Yuki in a voluptuous voice. “Yes,” said Ryu in an attempt to make his voice sound deeper, yet in a passionate tune. “GET LOST OR I’LL KILL YOU,” yelled Yuki.
“AHHHHHHHHH,” yelled Ryu. (He activates Body flicker as he is rushing for his life.) “DAT BITCH’S CRAZY,” yelled RYu. (The scene switches back to Yuki.) “At least there’s one problem down. Good luck kid, and I hope you never get caught up in your father’s games again. I should send a scroll to the cloud to let them know what’s up. Raikage knows about me through the Hokage, so it should be fine. But that’ll have to wait, I need to assess the situation,” thought Yuki.
(She rushes over to where Shisio and Sazx were fighting. She notices that Sazx has passed out and that his arm was severed from his shoulder, she also notices that Shisio is sleeping sitting down from his injuries and exhaustion from the battle.)
“Gosh, what a battle this must have been. Looks like Shisio won, but he’s not moving in that condition. But Sazx, and that arm; the air spells like malice, I bet Shisio burnt it to discourage him from recovering. I’ll have to check Sazx’s his condition and make sure if he’s alive; at the very least, I can stop the bleeding if he’s still breathing,” thought Yuki. (She walks over, knees and feels for a pulse.) “He’s alive,” said Yuki. (She pulls out some bandages from her bag and carefully wraps Sazx’s shoulder; several minutes go by as she finishes wrapping his shoulder.) “He’s a big guy, I can’t. I’ll have to summon bull,” said Yuki. (She makes some handseals and summons one of the larger dogs from earlier.) “Here, take him to safety,” said Yuki. (Bull uses his head to lift Sazx’s body onto his back, and the hound rushes to the village, the scene switches over to Mikoto, his eyes are closed as he sits down with his legs folded as he has the dragon handseal in effect. Soon, Sasuke flickers behind him and replies with a curt response which breaks Mikoto’s concentration.)
“It’s time to go, everything has changed,” said Sasuke. (Mikoto opens his eyes.) “30 more minutes and the village will be beyond savable,” said Mikoto. “My eyes I didn’t expect them to be going out this fast… I used up all the antidote which was sealed away in a special container that kept it from drying out over the years. It was discovered under the Uchiha shrine, but now there’s none left. If I had to guess, my vision is 20/80 in both eyes right now, and it is decreasing as we speak. So, we need to see a highly expert geneticist, I believe the marine squad has connections to one of the great scientific minds left over from the Global SNA’s experimental lab. He studies genetic compounds within many specimens. We need to go to the Rain village and seek him out, as our attack on Konoha will not work while I’m in this condition,” said Sasuke.
“What a waste, and after all that time I wasted in preparing the technique; you’re a piece of work Uchiha,” said Mikoto. “We have to hurry, the Kazekage is on his way,” said Sasuke. “You couldn’t kill him,” asked Mikoto. “I was close, but he caught on to my weakness, we need to hurry and gather up Shisio, and the Marine Squad, Yuki will meet our wrath at a later date,” said Sasuke. (The Scene switches over to Marine Squad vs. Take’s Shot Gun puppet contraption. Shark is holding the collapsed Dolphin on his shoulder short distances away.
Orca is inside a huge Killer Whale mold made of chakra. He sits inside the brain of the beast. As the Killer Whale is sliding in, Take makes his puppet pull out long twin samurai swords with jagged edges. Right before they clash, Susanoo appears in the middle and blocks both attacks from both angles pushing them back with its hands. Susanoo vanishes as Sasuke, Mikoto (with Shisio wrapping his arm around Mikoto’s neck while Shisio has his left foot suspend in the air to keep from touching the ground) are standing in the middle of the commotion.
“Orca and Shark, it is time we report back to Reika,” said Sasuke. (Shisio groans.) “I won’t let you escape with your lives,” yelled Take. (As Sasuke begins to say something, Mikoto interrupts.) “I’m sure you’re aware that I killed the old man, and the other two sand jounin are near death, if you have the time to face us, you certainly have the time to rescue them,” said Mikoto. “Fuck you,” said Take. (Take releases his technique, as he pulls back his 10 puppets into his scroll which he slides onto his back. He rushes off to save his comrades.)
“I’m shocked you aren’t throwing a fit. I would have given you a turn,” said Orca. (Shark looks to his right shoulder as a tear comes down his face.) “Our baby sister is hurt, we need to seek Dream,” said Shark. “It seems he’s a ferocious beast in battle, but he cares dearly for us, not too peculiar I guess,” thought Orca. “We need to go, something drastic has happened, our attack on Konoha will have to wait,” said Sasuke. “I see,” said Orca. “This of course will make us an enemy to the sand, are you sure we should just run away,” asked Mikoto.
“It is for the best, and once my eyes are better, we’ll join Reika’s forces. I fear the SNA are after blood as well,” said Sasuke. “It seems that you forgot about Yuki… Oh well, can’t worry over spilled milk. But that Ryu kid is gone too,” said Shisio. “And you just let him go,” asked Sasuke. “I was dealing with Sazx, I didn’t have time to baby sit, he’s your boy and if you wanted to do something about it, you should have, so don’t get all cocky and self righteous on me Uchiha,” said Shisio. “Psssft… Whatever, just know I asked Mikoto to save your ass, I will not have any qualms about leaving you behind cripple,” said Sasuke.
(Shisio smiles.) “Heh, and I thought you needed me. Besides, I know your eyes are weakening. That last Susanoo probably is the last time you’ll use Mangekyou, or even the sharingan again until you receive aide. You have no right to threaten me. One foot and all, I’ll still kick your emo presence and dump your semi blind ass into a nearby river,” said Shisio. (Mikoto, Shark, and Orca chuckles from Shisio’s ballsy statement.)
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