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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
TEAM HYUUGA WILL BE LEAD BY MY DAUGHTER NILA, WHO WILL BE STATIONED IN THE FRONT OF OUR ARMY! WITH THEIR BYAKUGAN THEY WILL NOTIFY US OF ANY POTENTIAL INCOMING THREATS! TEAM RECON WILL CONSIST OF SAI’S ROOT; THAT TEAM WILL SPIT INTO TWO PARTIES AND GATHER ANY INFORMATION ON THE LOCALE FROM 5 KILOMETERS EAST AND WEST OF OUR UNIT’S POSITION. THEY WILL KEEP US NOTIFIED WITH COMMUNICATION SCROLLS VIA ANIMAL SUMMONINGS IN 30 MINUTE INVERVALS! KAI AND MYSELF WILL BE IN THE CENTER, WHILE EVERYONE ELSE WILL SURROND US! SINCE WE ARE CAPABLE OF THE BIJUU, WE NEED TO STAY ALIVE, AS IF I DIE, THE GENERAL, KONOHA LOSES! DAISUKE OF THE LION WILL ALSO BE IN THE CENTRAL UNIT WITH ME. SHUN OF THE KEZUGAMA CLAN WILL GUARD THE LEFT FLANK WITH HAYASHI AITO’s HELP. SHIMIZU HIRO WITH GUARD THE RIGHT FLANK WITH NEJI’s HELP. LEE, KIBA, Sarutobi, AND CHOJI WILL GUARD THE REAR. HOPE WILL PATROL AHEAD OF THE STRIKE UNIT WITH IZO’s ASSISTENCE, JUST BEHIND THE HYUUGA TEAM! THOSE INDIVIDUAL SHINOBI THAT MENTIONED WILL PATROL SEVERAL METERS AWAY FROM THE MAIN UNIT! NOW, DAWN BREAK HAS COME, LET’S GET INTO FORMATION,” yelled Toad Sage.
“AHHHH OHHHH,” yelled the crowd. (The scene switches over to Nila.) “Ok, I’m ready for this,” said Nila. “Don’t worry, we’ll protect you miss,” said Hyuuga clan member. “No harm will come to the Hokage’s and former master Hinata’s blood,” said another. “We will lay down everything,” yelled a female member. “Guys, thanks; but I’ll make it an objective for everyone to return home alive,” said Nila. (They cheer as the Scene switches to back to on the stage, Toad Sage whispers in Shikamaru’s ear.)
“Shikamaru , have Sakura make Amaya’s medical staff be ready for deployment; their implement into the army will come as we go,” said Toad Sage. (The Scene switches to outside the outskirts of Konoha. The units’ positions are already in formation. Shun is standing next to Aito, a man of average height wearing battle field armor just like everyone else. He is of average build. He has a red Mohawk with green eyes. His face looks like the typical biker gang kind of face. He opens his mouth and begins to talk.) “Radical! I’m about to go hysterical as I go out styling on em,” yelled Aito. (Shun sighs.) “How long have we been body guards for the Hokage,” asked Shun. “WOAH, don’t say such complex things, but since you asked all kool like, I’d have to say maybe a decade,” said Aito. “Bout time you start acting like it then,” said Shun. “WOAH DUDE! Don’t put me down like that, you been like a bro, just like The Hokage, us three go way back in da day,” said Aito.
“Ahh man, I hate dealing with this guy,” mumbled Shun. (The Scene switches to Izo and Hope’s location. Izo is also wearing battle field armor. He is a tall man of 6 ft 4 inches. He is lean however, he is extremely physically fit. He has a mini-fro that is 3 inches in length. He has facial hair style that resembles Jak 3.He has a red bandana going across his forehead where his forehead protector should be. He is of black descent, having medium brown complexion. His facial structure is a mixture of George’s from Gantz and Tousen’ from Bleach. Izo has a deep and raspy voice.)
“You’re that Rinnegan kid who was picked up by The Hokage… Heard some good things about you boy, but let me have it! Who was it that Hiro said killed my comrades? I’m going to enjoy smashing the person’s brains in,” said Izo. “So, the rumors of you recovering were true… Anyway, Hiro told me it was an SNA elementalist known as Reitie of the Lightning Succubus,” said Hope. (Izo pulls some fly ass shades from his pockets and puts them on.)
“I don’t give a damn how powerful she thinks she is… I’m going to beat the bricks for this slut. In fact, I’ll probably take her scull home as a souvenir. The skull will serve as a cup in which I drink satisfying 1800 from. I’m not going to let her die easily though… The more she begs for her life, the more pain I’ll inflict on her body. I’ll break her fingers first, then her hands, legs, and eventually her spine. Hey kid! How about I rip her arm off and beat her with it,” said the malicious Izo.
(Hope gets startled from the response.) “I heard word about my father’s strongest Anbu-agent being a sadistic and ruthless assassin, but I never knew he was so cruel, at least not to this degree,” thought Hope. “I ‘d actually prefer I gouge out her eye balls and force them down her throat,” said Izo. (Hope turns his head.) “The moment she killed my comrades, was the day she sealed her fate with devil. Braig, Rise, and Bruce, I do this for you,” thought Izo. (The Scene switches over to a group of white cloaked shinobi, they are the medical unit Shikamaru sent for earlier, one of them is particularly short; that short one flips the hood up. They rush over to join up with the unit and become assimilated. Amaya is the first one to lift up her hood, which reveals a cute young innocent face. Her face resembles Kepachi’s lieutenant’s face [the little girl with the pink hair].)
“I’ll gladly lend my services,” said Amaya. (The scene switches over to a wasteland, Temari is seen rushing towards the direction of Konoha.)
“One more day, and I’ll reach Konoha,” thought Temari. (From a distance, Michi, Oita, and Blank spots Temari.)
“Who’s that,” asked Michi. (They all put on their binoculars. The image shows a close up on Temari’s person. They manage to catch the forehead protector around her head.) “A Kunoichi Jounin from the sand,” said Blank. “Not a bad looker for a middle aged women,” said Oita. “Do we killer her,” asked Micihi. “Let’s follow her,” said Blank.
“By the way, Michi, weren’t you and the boss from Konoha prior to being shipped off to the SNA lab of experiments,” asked Oita. “Hah,” smiled Michi.
Next Time: Oita, Michi, and Blank close in on Temari. One more day until Temari reaches Konoha however, the same logic applies to them. Over the next two days, Konoha’s armed forces will travel to Sungakure in hopes of gathering more forces and restructuring.
Izo: He is the most feared as well as the most gifted Anbu of all Konoha. He once led a team of 3 other Anbu who were recognized as the best Anbu-ops in Konoha. Izo is a very scary man. He’s brutal, cruel, sadistic, and expert in torture. He is sadist as he enjoys the punishment of his opponents as he cracks their bones and laughs while they endure pain. Surprisingly, he is a patriot to his village and will never betray his homeland despite his horrific nature. He highly respects the Hokage as well as other prestigious persons from Konoha. A formidable opponent in battle, he was assigned to track down the SNA on a private mission however, he got seriously wounded when he was ganged up on by a hundred of their men, he defeated them all, at the expense of being injured and out of commission for the first half of the series. His special ability is to create a vortex like vacuum that sucks the oxygen from his opponent’s body causing them to pass out, or suffer brain damage due to the lack of oxygen to their brains .
Aito: He is the second body guard to The Hokage, so that means he is Shun’s teammate/cooperator. He is a hard time partier who likes the crazy and wild things in life. He has an explosive attitude and is always worried about what is hip! Though, he is an extremely gifted shinobi . He and Shun go way back, and were trained by the same teacher, thus they have very similar abilities. No one tends to look up to him though, maybe because his personality is so radical that it tires people out when they try to understand him.
Amaya: She is the head of the medical squadron. She is only 13 years old, yet displays such talent in the arts of medical ninjutsu. She is not a fighter by any means, but she is recognized as Sakura’s prize student. She can virtually heal even the nastiest of injuries.
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 10-22-2009 at 04:42 PM.