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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
“Good work, the bait has been set. Now we wait for the Hokage and the other Kages to gather,” said Tetsuo. (Blank tosses Nila on the ground near Tank and Sakuya.) "SO, we're back at the old look out ehh," said Oita. "For the meantime, we lay low here, either way, the ball's in our hands now. If they head to Mizugakure first they'll be intercepted beforing ruining our plans," said Tetsuo “Mind if I rough her up a little bit,” asked Tank. “You’re awful,” said Sakuya. “Be gentle,” said Tetsuo. “ALRIGHT. FEELZ MY FOOT BITCH,” yelled Tank. (He prepares to step on her however, Nila quickly activates her Byakugan looks up and evades the blow by sliding under his leg. She then activates wind chakra around her left palm. She then strikes upwards and slashes Tank’s face, giving him a deep scar on his left cheeck. He slides back and crashes into a wall while everyone is amazed.)
“I remember her, she was at the meteor’s project experimental ground,” said Ino Shika Cho.
“Wow, the little kitty cat has some claws,” said Michi (She licks her face). “That drug should have had her out for at least 2 hours. Could she have wielded herself to immediate recovery,” thought Blank. “I’d expect nothing less of you Nila, daughter of the Hokage,” said Tetsuo. (Nila turns around and looks at Tetsuo’s face.)
“Oh my God. It’s, it’s you,” said Nila. “How’s Zig,” asked Tetsuo. “Where am I, and why are you doing this,” asked Nila. “That’s of no concern to you, take her out,” smiled Tetsuo.
“Shit, this must be their headquarters. Believe. It’s becoming clear,” thought Nila. “It can’t be,” thought Tetsuo. (Nila is now spinning rapidly while wind as well as natural chakra is surrounding her in spirals. Asura’ s eye gets a close up on Nila’s rotation.)
“That’s not the ordinary Hyuuga rotation. She has implemented the wind element into that as well. This could get deadly. Tetsuo, what do you recommend we do? If we take her lightly things could get serious,” said Asura. (Tank bursts out from the print in the wall.)
“BITCH, NOW YOU DIE,” yelled Tank. (He begins gathering chakra around him.) “No Tank, we can’t afford to kill her,” said Tetsuo. (The winds get stronger and starts to push everyone back a bit. Everyone then braces themselves and thinks of what to do. Tetsuo makes a handseal and then extends his arms, this disrupts the wind elemental rotation and stops Nila in her tracks. She can’t move at all. Her Byakugan cancels as well. Tetsuo still has his hands extended.)
“What the hell is happening to me? What did they do? My chakra, I can’t gather my chakra. I can’t even move. It feels as though my chakra flow has been completely disrupted,” thought Nila.
“Sakuya, prepare the genjutsu. But don’t overdo it,” said Tetsuo. (Sakuya jumps in front of Nila.) “A genjutsu? Crap, I don’t have my Byakugan active. What do I do? These guys? Their incredible,” thought Nila as she shivers in fear. (Sakuya makes a handseal.) "Asura, I will soon open a portal. Spring the Meteor near Mizugakure, the hosts' chakra has already been sucked out and sealed within these chakra absorbtion scrolls, I want you to assimulate the Bijuu's chakra into the meteor" said Tetsuo. (He hands over 4 scrolls to Asura.) "Wait, there's one more scroll, take it. It contains all the chakra Sakuya, Tank, and myself have managed to gather for three days. Use this to summon the completed meteor. Once it appears over Mizugakure, Misa the spy for Mizugakure who is now under our genjutsu spell, will contact Kai, and he will believe that she's still on good terms with him. This will ignite the allied forces to Mizugakure. Once the Hokage reaches there, I will telepathically relay a message from our hideout. He will offer up his life to Asura while we threaten to kill Nila. If he refuses to have his Bijuu restrained, we'll assisinate Nila from our hideout," said Tetsuo. (Tetsuo hands over the 5th and final scroll to Asura.)
"What if he doesn't believe we have her," asked Ino Shika Cho. "I'll manage a visual mental link up to our headquarters, he'll have no choice but to cooperate. We'll have him by the balls. And if they attempt to strike Asura or, overtake the meteor, which would be nearly impossible now due to it being matured and uncontrollable to those who lack the key behind it, we'll launch all the forces we have stationed at Mizugakure, this will also include the Mizugakure troops we ensared by genjutsu," said Tetsuo.
"GOT IT ALL PLANNED HUH," yelled Tank. (He wipes the blood off his face.)
"Alright, just tell me when you are going to warp me," said Asura.
“Ends of earth,” said Sakuya. (Nila sweats as the scene switches over to Konoha’s troops. Everyone is now gathered at the spot in which the portal previously opened up and sucked their last hopes of finding Nila. The Scene is at the center where Toad Sage, Hope, Hiro, Kai, Shun, Aito, and Daisuke stand.)
“The Security squad just sent me detailed results over radio that a portal opened up here and soon they just vanished into thin air! How did we let this happen,” yelled Toad Sage.
“It’s a trap Sensei, they’re trying to lure us in,” said Hiro. “DON’T YOU THINK I KNOW THAT!? I just can’t let them do this my little girl. I can’t believe I let the one person closest to me get captured. I knew I shouldn’t have had her on the front lines. DAMMIT I KNEW IT!. HINATA WOULD NEVER LOOK AT ME IF SOMETHINGBAD HAPPENS,” said Toad Sage.
“Wrong, you put her up there because you had faith in her ability. Don’t look down on yourself for that. This couldn’t have been seen through easily. It seems the SNA have tracking and scouting abilities that far surpasses our own. If they were able to open up a portal to save their men, it must mean our movements have been watched to some degree,” said Hiro.
“We should be more concerned with our mission however, Nila is an important aspect of his unit, I agree we can’t just abandon her, but,” said Shun. “JUST CHILL HOKAGE DUDE. WORRYING NEVER BRINGS HAPPINESS,” yelled Aito. (Naruto makes seven shadow clones.)
“I’ll do this then. If I come across the areas of interest and or, the enemy and my shadow clones disperses, I should be able to pin point their location. It might take a while, but I’ll never give up on my daughter. The day I give up on her, is the day I give up on my life. That’s my way,” said Toad Sage.
(Hope shakes his head. Zig rushes into the center.) “Is it true Hope,” asked Zig. “Yeah, but it wasn’t your fault, no one could have seen it coming,” said Hope. “Let me go with the shadow clones general, I made a promise to her,” said Zig. “A promise you say? (Toad Sage has a flash back to when he promised to bring Sasuke back. Scene switches back to the present.) I hope you’re promise is stronger than mine,” smiled Toad Sage. (Zig pauses. Then he nods his head.) “Sir, a single string of hair won’t be out of place,” said Zig. (The shadow clones gathers around Zig.) “Remember you are only to determine their location, use your Jounin skills to help my shadow clones pin point her location. Don’t do anything reckless on your own,” said Toad Sage.
“Zig was it, take Max,” said Daisuke. “Max,” questioned Zig. (Daisuke makes some handseals and summons Max. It walks over to Zig.) “He has insane hearing and smelling senses and is strong to boot, he should come in handy,” said Daisuke. “I leave my sister’s whereabouts in your capable hands Zig,” said Hope. “Right,” said Zig. (Daisuke, ZIg, and the seven shadow clones rush off.)
“Do well Zig,” thought Hiro.
“I feel content, the will of fire in the next generation is sure reassuring. Hinata, don’t you worry,” thought Toad Sage. (Daisuke whispers in the Toad Sage’s ear.) “Toad Sage, I meant to tell you earlier that Kyo’s corpse had no body armor. It seems it was stripped from him. Perhaps that could lead to a clue to our other target’s location,” whispered Daisuke. “I see, we’ll worry about that once we reach the Sand,” said Toad Sage.
(The Scene switches over to Amegakure. In the basement, Sasuke is lying on a hospital bed. Dream is tampering with his eyes using all kinds of instruments and tools while Sasuke lays unconscious [due to a drug].)
“Yes, yes. It seems there’s a hidden membrane that awakens in the eyes of the Uchiha once the Mangekyou is released and it grows like a tumor upon repeated use. If I remove that genetic membrane that inhabits blindness, perhaps I can reverse the damage done to his eyes. Though, it’ll resurface again in the future. But at the very least he would be able to use the Mangekyou again with fresh eyes. ANYWAY, with his help I’m just be one more step closer to remaking a world that only clones are the inhabitants. This is something even Reika does not know of. I’ll continue my research in secret,” thought Dream.
Next Time: Over the course of another day Konoha draws to Sunagakure while Tetsuo thruts his plans into action.
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