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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
(Sun starts to set, as Zig, Max, and the five remaining shadow clones fend off the four remaining gargoyles. The gargoyles and Zig’s group are separated by several meters from each other.)
Zig: Whew, just four more.
Max: Let’s put all our energies into this.
Shadow Clone: We’ve been facing off against hundreds of gargoyles these past three and a half days… I know the allied forces and our enemies are probably near ready to clash.
Max: We need to hurry!
Zig: Let’s fine Nila! (The two forces prepare to clash as the scene switches to the near future. There is only one shadow clone left, as Zig, and Max stands near the rubble of the defeated gargoyles.)
Shadow Clone: Looks like I’ve managed to hang on and live another day. (The shadow clone smiles.)
Max: Now, time to check out that tower.
Zig: I’m ready! (The Scene switches to the control room of the communication’s tower. The man who runs the tower is wired by many tubes and electrical devices.)
Strange Man: They defeated the stone beings… Given who they are I shouldn’t be shocked. I’ll send this data to BOSS TETSUO! Too bad their efforts were all for nothing. COMPUTER! RESEAL! (The Scene switches to the outside. They notice that the tower is glowing as well as the ground underneath it.)
Shadow Clone: It’s trying to.
Zig: WE GOTTA GO IN, NO MATTER WHERE IT TAKES US! (The three of them rush closer however; they are in awe as the tower submerges into the ground almost seemingly. They fail to make it inside. All that is left is a small crater in which the tower once remained.)
The Shadow Clone: We’ve failed (A tear falls down his face.)
Max: My sympathies Hokage.
Zig: Sorry we couldn’t find where you were, Nila… NILAAAAAAAA (The shadow clone walks over to Zig and places his hand on his shoulder.)
Shadow Clone: We should return, our forces need you two…
Zig: She’s your daughter! We can’t just. (Max interrupts as he moves closer.)
Max: Don’t speak like that! Obviously he hasn’t forgotten that, but if we spend too much of our time following dead ends, we can potentially dampen our own military prowess.
Zig: I understand… Hokage, I apologize.
Shadow Clone: I don’t need an apology. I understand how you feel kid. I’ll meet you two back at Sunagakure’s barracks. (The shadow clone disperses.)
Max: We should head back, follow me. (Max rushes off. Zig goes into deep thought before following.)
Zig: Nila… I said I would lay down my life for you… I mean that. (End of Zig’s thought.)
Next Time: The 5th Shinobi War!
- The Harsh realities of War
[Over the course of four years, the shinobi world has been locked into a total state of chaos. Some agricultural villages with a heavy reliance on crops, no longer can survive due to the lands being involved in battlefields. Due to the scale of destruction wrought by the allied forces and the UHE, roughly the entire charted shinobi world as we know it has been changed for the worst.
The shinobi world is a cursed and horrifying place to live in at this point. The casualties from the past four wars can’t even amount to half of the carnage that this war has wrought.]
(The Scene switches over to a dark, beautiful, almost enchanted looking forest like from the Disney films. We soon see a woman dressed in torn up short-shorts, torn up tank top, no shoes running through the night; location unknown. This woman has long auburn hair that stretches to her knees. Her face has slightly matured. Her body has now developed into a fuller figure, with her feminine physical features now pushing the extent of her now aged clothing.)
Mysterious Woman: Huff, huff, huff. (She continues to rush through the dark night in the woods. She soon gets tired and arrives to a lake. She stops at the edge of the lake and falls to her knees out of breath. She looks into the lake and is shocked at her physical appearance reflecting from the water.)
Mysterious Woman: My face, and my body, heh, heh. (She giggles as she checks out her boobs and her behind. She then notices at how small her clothing has become.) Just how long did they keep me imprisoned? (She sniffs her armpits and her clothes and is shocked.) I don’t smell? Did those jerks wash me when I was in an illusion? Yuck, those scumbags could’ve had their way with me… (She shivers but soon comes to a realization.)
No… If that was so, then how did I eat and maintain by gorgeous body if I was comatose? Could I have had control of my own bodily functions when I was in the genjutsu? Well, I guess since I’ve shattered it, those guys are probably still after me, so, if I don’t want be a damsel, I better do this! (She makes a handseal, which activates her Byakugan. However, a change has occurred in her eyes. The iris of the Byakugan has now taken a deep crimson color. She is shocked as she glances over the area.)
Wow, my vision, it’s way more intense. I can see like the molecular structures of everything. I wonder what would happen if I increase my magnification. HAAAA! (She makes a handseal and glances over at a tree, in the matter of seconds the three bursts into saw dust.)
LIKE OH MY GOD! WHERE DID THIS POWER COME FROM? Just wait until I tell father, Laya, Zig, Hope, and… And… Just what happened to them? Why didn’t they save me? Are they all right? I remember father issuing a war, then all of a sudden I was ambushed… (Soon she notices some disturbances from behind.)
Trackers, it looks like they haven’t had enough. (Soon two shinobi dressed in white cloaks with UHE letters branded upon their forehead protectors appear as she turns around to greet them.)
Shinobi 1: Uzumaki Nila [looks like the jigs out.lol], you will return to your chambers in the castle immediately before Tetsuo returns!
Shinobi 2: If you do not resist, you will pay dearly for escaping and harming a dozen of our unit’s personal guards.
(Nila smirks. Before the shinobi can react, she rushes over to them. She channels chakra into her palms. She quickly hits one in the throat, causing him to vomit blood and pass out. She then quickly spins and hits the other in the stomach, causing him to kneel over in pain.)
Shinobi 2: AHHHH, THE PAIN! PLEASE DON’T KILL ME! (Nila smirks then squats down and begins to make her plea as the guy falls over on his stomach.)
Nila: Firstly, how long have I’ve been cooped up here? (The guy starts to fade out.) ANSWER ME NOW! (The guy wakes up.)
Shinobi 2: 4 years, but when you were in the genjutsu, you were one of us!
Nila: Impossible! 4 years! Anything could have happened to the shinobi world. (The man bursts out in laughter.) Gone insane from the whopping I’ve gave you?
Shinobi 2: The shinobi world is a barren waste land… It’s not even inhabitable anymore due to the conflicts between the allied forces and our leader, Tetsuo.
Nila: Tetsuo! Damn it! But to me this place looks fine, trees all nice and freshly grown. Way more gorgeous then the woods back home. What BS are you on?
Shinobi 2: This isn’t your world, it’s the other….side…. and there’s no escaping the barrier…. (He passes out.)
Nila: The other side? What the hell is he talking about? (She glances around the area.) Something’s wrong, this soil, the air, the entire landscape. It’s different from what I’m use to; almost like a story ripped out from the fantasy books. Could I really be trapped here? What if everyone’s? No, I won’t think that. I just have to find a way out of this place. Think girl, you never give up. Wait a second? (She remembers the guy saying something about a barrier before passing out.)
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 11-22-2009 at 08:29 PM.