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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
That’s right, a barrier… But he said it couldn’t be bypassed? But if it’s a chakra barrier, I should be able to see it. HAAA (She focuses her chakra and then pictures the barrier.) So, this is the barrier. (She touches it and notices that it repels her hand.) Could I really be trapped here? (She then remembers to when she used her eyes to reduce the tree into dust.)
Maybe if I… HAAA (She focuses her chakra and creates a distortion in the barrier, big enough for her to fit.) Well, ain’t I the best Kunoichi? It’s time I bid this place farewell. Paradise or, not, I’m done serving as a slave. Guys, I’m on my way. (She walks through the barrier and immediately appears on the other side, her world. She is completely shocked by the degree of destruction and turmoil she sees. All around her, corpses of fallen leaf, rock, and cloud shinobies lie.) Oh my god. (The sky is a grayish, whitish color that eclipses any sight of a clear day. She falls to her knees as tears flow out of her eyes.) Is this the reality of what he spoke?
(The scene switches to a nearby location. Amongst the hundreds or, potentially thousands of corpses, Kimiko and Kakuya are sitting down on one big corpse that has a forehead protector from the rock village strapped around the head.)
Kakuya: Some surprise raid, what a laugh. This war fell in to our favor a long time ago, to think I doubted that conniving Reika a few years back. Ha, she couldn’t have called things better. We get to kill and not be feared of being killed.
Kimiko: But sometimes don’t you think we over do it? (They both look around the surrounding area and notices corpses that extend far into the distances.)
Kakuya: Yeah, maybe just a little… Some of them were actually quite handsome… (Kimiko tears up.) Why are you crying? OH… Yeah, that hunk I offed; face it, he was kind of strong. If I hadn’t of cut his eyes out, he might have done the same to you. I’m sorry sis, the next hunk that comes up I’ll just let you deal with. But if he kills you, that’s on you… Men, if only they’d be more charming or, actually hit on us, if that were the case, I’d go a little easier on them, and make them suffer none before they die…
Kimiko: Maybe they think we’re too strong. I’ve read that most guys don’t like being dominated.
Kakuya: That’s not our fault, blame Dream for making us this strong. And if they can’t hang with us chicks, then they should crumble like bridle bricks. (Kimiko smiles, she soon notices something as she activates her Byakugan.) What is it?
Kimiko: There’s someone coming. A woman, she’ll be here at any minute.
Kakuya: Probably another wasteful Kunoichi. I don’t like to kill my own kind, but if she presents problems we’ll have no choice. (Kakuya lies down on the huge corpse.)
Kimiko: But sis!
Kakuya: We’ll stay here until she arrives. (The scene switches over to Nila’s location. As she rushes down the paths, the number of corpses in her wake increases in magnitude, much to her dismay.)
Nila: There’s two chakras up ahead. I’ll need to go investigate and see if they know something about the horrible things that transpired here. (She soon stops.) I don’t have any shinobi gear, and this ridiculously long hair could become a problem if a threat is up ahead. I’ll spend this time to take some weapons left behind. I’ll also have to cut my hair. (She starts picking up gear from the deceased.) Sorry, may you each rest in peace.
(She then grabs a Kunai and cuts her hair to where her hair now meets where her neck reaches her collar bone.) A little shorter than I would have liked, but oh well… (She speeds off towards the location of the two chakra sources up ahead. Little time goes by as Nila immediately lands in front of the duo sisters; only several meters separate the forces.)
(Kakuya wakes up.)
Kakuya: Girl, you seriously gotta take better care of yourself. All scraggly looking; so not it.
Nila: Did you two do this?
Kakuya: And if we did?
Nila: You won’t be forgiven. (She activates Byakugan as Kakuya and Kimiko gets on their guard and jumps closer to her.)
Kakuya: A Byakugan… So, you’re a Hyuuga from Konoha. I’ve killed my fair share of Konoha Hyuuga, don’t disappoint me since you’re woman like us.
(Nila grunts as she remembers her promise she made to her Hyuuga companions. She then looks over at Kimiko, who also has the Byakugan.)
Nila: A Hyuuga? Why are you aiding the SNA?
Kimiko: Umm, your eyes, they’re different from mine. Answer my question and I’ll tell you about how we came to exist.
Nila: And you over there have a sharingan, no? You know what? I don’t even care anymore. Your treachery ends here! (Nila rushes towards them both and pulls out two Kunai, one in each hand. She goes into a thought.) Their chakras are strong, and they both have the venerable eyes. But I have a new power. (End of Nila’s thought as the scene switches over to another barren wasteland however, there aren’t any corpses around here. The scene zooms in on Daisuke, who is praying over a grave that has a headstone placed near it. Daisuke has apparent forehead lines from aging.)
Daisuke: Max… (He pours sake over the grave of Max.) It seems I’ve made it ritualism to commit to this every time I go off to battle. Next time, I’m not sure I’ll be able to continue this. This world has become hell, shocking even a Sage can fear the depths of the cruelty of humanity. If I don’t return to this grave, I’ll surely be where you are at… (Scene switches over to another barren waste land. Raitie and her unit of 5 stand over the corpses of fallen Cloud Shinobi.)
Shinobi 1: GOOD WORK COMMANDER! (They all cheer; soon Yoshiyuki appears out of nowhere and lands in front of the unit.)
Shinobi 2: ANOTHER CLOUD SHINOBI!
Shinobi 3: GET EM!
Shinobi 4: YOU CLOUD NINJA SUCK!
Shinobi 5: STRONGEST VILLAGE YEAH RIGHT! PRAISE TETSUO, AND ACCEPT DEFEAT! (The five shinobi are rushing at him.)
Yoshiyuki: Why don’t you guys just speed up this world destruction; bring this turmoil to an end. (He notices that they continue to get closer. Yoshiyuki makes several handseals.) Raiton: Rapid Lightning Bolts. (Using his chakra, he creates lightning bolts in his hands. He continuously produces them as he tosses a lightning bolt through the chests of each of the five Shinobi, effectively killing them.)
Reitie: Yoshiyuki, you claim that you want this brutal mess to end, yet you resist by killing my men. It’s either that you’re a hypocrite, or you somehow harbor some warped logic that applies to you thinking the allied forces still has a chance after four years of being pinned against the wall with the threat of total eradication looming ever so closely.
Yoshiyuki: UHE member codename Lightning Succubus. You use to be shinobi of our village, I guess their organization turned you.
Reitie: Not at all, the world couldn’t accept us, so they tried to kill us; the world at large hate and despise those who are different. We might be the ones doing what’s just. But answer my previous question.
Yoshiyuki: I don’t believe in cheap kills; and I’m trying to say if you guys don't get rid of the last remaining cockroaches, then you’ll regret it that’s all… (He makes a handseal, then Lightning Aura surrounds him. Reitie then makes several handseals, then lightning from the skies strikes Reitei as she also forms a lightning aura around her body.)
Reitie: Shall we?
Yoshiyuki: Counting us two, only three shinobi in the entire world can use Raiton Armor. This of course includes Asao. It’s a shame, the moment you came into my sights, was the moment your lightning will never strike the ground again.
Reitie: Don’t get cocky; the shinobi world is gone. Here I come. (She gets cut off as Yoshiyuki is automatically chocking the life out of her with both of his hands around her neck.) AHHAHAAHGGKGKGKGK.
Yoshiyuki: No, don’t you get cocky. You must have forgotten that I’m the strongest man of Kumogakure, as if that counts for anything anymore. (Soon Yoshiyuki hears a yell from a man.)
Mysterious Man: NOOO! She’s mine. (Immediately Izo [yup, that’s the mysterious man] appears next to Yoshiyuki, Yoshiyuki drops Reitie as she backs off to defend herself.)
Reitie: I must have been insane if I thought I could face him… Whoever that idiot is, he sure saved my life.
Yoshiyuki: You stop me, why leaf shinobi?
Izo: As I said, she’s my kill. I lived through so many battlefields. Cheated death so many times, and faced torment that even the gods wouldn’t subjugate their people to. My life is only worth this much, and that’s taking Reitie’s life for taking the lives of my friends, the only ones I’ve ever risked my life for. Braig, Rise, and Bruce… Her death is my reason for existence. The world is likely to end soon, but I won’t let it, not without me taking her to hell with me! (He rushes off to face Reitie as Yoshiyuki goes into deep thought.)
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
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