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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Yoshiyuki: That man’s soul is cursed; perhaps he’ll find respite in death… The fate of that man is out of my hands… Filled with darkness to the core, probably no light at the end of the tunnel for him, so he took this last chance before Reitie became untouchable. I don’t interfere with personal squabbles. This man might have seen better days, if he just hung on a little longer, but even that is a big if considering how long we’ve been in this bloody war; our dying hope has turned into bitter despair…
(End of Yoshiyuki’s thought, as he rushes to another destination as the scene switches over a battle field. Countless UHE shinobi are surrounding one man who has his shirt ripped off, facial stubble, and torn up pants, and huge scar across his chest [made from Shisio years ago]. He now also has nicks all over his body. He soon pulls out his two Mountain Cutters as the UHE shinobi backs back a little.)
Hiro: Huff, huff, huff. IF YOU’RE COMING THEN COME ON! (Hiro quickly crisscrosses his blades. As some of the shinobi gets scared.)
Shinobi 1: He’s only one man, don’t get discouraged!
Shinobi 2: Yeah, he’s injured, look at that stance! (The two shinobi launches at Hiro, Hiro swings his left short-sword horizontally, which emits wind chakra waves that slices the two shinobi in two. Hiro then tires… The other shinobi are angry and then 10 other shinobi surrounds him immediately. They all pulls out two kunai and channels wind element into them in order to counter Hiro. Hiro smirks as he extends his arms out like how a plane’s wings are positioned. He channels wind element into his huge short-swords.)
Shinobi 3: He can’t take all of us!
Shinobi 4: NOW DIE. (They rush at him preparing to strike.)
Hiro: Cheap imitations. (Much to the 10 shinobi’s surprise, Hiro begins spinning like a spin top, with his swords slashing, and ripping his opponents into bits. Hiro is now soaked in the blood of his fallen adversaries. Hiro then slightly passes out, as he slouches. Soon Hiro wakes up upon getting three shuriken logged into his back from behind. Hiro turns around and spots several smirking shinobi.)
Hiro: Sons of bitches… (Soon a shinobi approaches Hiro from behind however, Hiro quickly spin heel kicks the guy in the face, knocking him senseless. Hiro then faces the one’s that threw shuriken in him. Soon Hiro hears everyone around him chanting a horrific chant.)
Shinobi: Katon: Great Fireball (Hundreds of shinobi launches the B rank Katon at Hiro from all angles. Hiro lets out a blood curdling yell.)
Hiro: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (Hiro drops his weapons and begins making handseals.) Fuuton: Hurricane Barricade! (Hiro extends his hands out as huge massive amounts of wind forms a large hurricane that extends to the shinobi. However, the hurricane turns into a huge inferno as the shinobi continue on with the jutsu. The commander smirks.)
Commander: Keep it up guys, he’s probably toasting in there, just don’t get to close. (Inside the spiraling fires Hiro sets up his second attack.)
Hiro: Fuuton: Dilating repel! (Immediately the Hurricane of flames pushes back from all angles as waves, as everyone surrounding Hiro is now engulfed in flames. Everyone is shocked.)
Shinobi 4: He used the fire to strengthen his attack? AHHHH (He gets incinerated.)
Commander: AHHHH! Impossible, he turned the fire on us by turning his defensive jutsu into an offensive pressure push AHHH! (He turns into ashes as everyone surrounding Hiro is burnt into crisp. Hiro passes out. (Dosa [who now has long hair] however, lands in the middle of the battlefield and picks out the shuriken in Hiro's back and lifts up Hiro as they escape from the fire graves. As Dosa carries Hiro over his shoulder and runs with him, Dosa begins to utter something to himself.)
Dosa: Man you’re heavy. (As soon as Dosa gets far enough, he notices that he’s surrounded. Dosa drops Hiro on the ground.) Alright you pussies, bring it on! (Soon Dosa is also surrounded, but not by as many Shinobi, Hiro was previously. Dosa pulls out a scroll and hits it on the ground, this summons his Scythe. Dosa picks it up and swings it around.)
Ready to become headless? Come right on up, no admission required! (Scene switches over to Iron Muto, in which he is standing on the outskirts of Amegakure, which is now a prosperous nation with even further developed technologies. One of the only few shinobi countries that’s still intact after the wars. It seems Reika has grown fat with power due to her allying with the UHE. )
Muto: I’d have to be a fool to waltz in there… (Muto here’s a voice.)
Mysterious man: Then don’t. (Soon it is revealed that Daisuke is the mystery man in this case.)
Muto: Venerable Lion Sage.
Daisuke: I worked with your master years before he was killed, allow another Sage to help avenge a deceased Sage… But this is a death wish, we should put off revenge for later, and instead, determine how powerful Reika’s forces have become. (The scene switches over to the meteor in the sky which fills up a lot of the area of Mizugakure. Soon, the seven tails is manifested out of it and lands near Kai. Kai gets enraged and completely goes into his Bijuu. The Hachibi gathers chakra, and prepares to fire off a ball of energy at the seven tails.
The Scene switches over to a battlefield that wasn’t too far away from where Hiro fought. Zig and Hope are back to back facing off against hundreds of Shinobi. Zig has grown in height [three inches], his face has also matured, and he now has mid-length side burns. Hope now has long hair that stops at his shoulders however; it is in a high-top pony tail.)
Zig: Man, they just keep on coming… This’ll never end.
Hope: Kill one and 10 more shows up. (Hope extends his hand out.) Bansho Tenin (Much to the UHE shinobi’s shock, those in the front row, are drawn in. As they get closer, Hope extends his other hand.) Shinra Tensei. (Hope hits them with the waves and effectively kills them. On Zig’s end, he makes several handseals.)
Zig: Katon: Machine Gun Great Fire Balls! (Large balls of fire continuously shoot out of Zig’s mouth at rapid speeds and instantly torch the approaching shinobi. Zig keeps this up until the UHE members retreat. The ones on Hope’s end retreats as well as they become shocked at their powers.)
Hope: It seems they’ve had enough.
Zig: I hope Hiro Sensei is ok. His last transmission over the walkie talkie, brought up that he was up against one 1000 of them.
Hope: Don’t worry about Hiro, he’ll be fine, he’s the least one to worry about. We should probably set return to our camp before sun set … It’s dangerous to be walking around late at night what with the UHE running every potential check point.
Zig: Honestly, Hope, do you think we stand a chance?
Hope: To tell you the truth, this world has gotten to me. Every day we live on borrowed time. Many of our allies have been killed and the citizens of this world who weren’t shinobi have been taken to the other side. Tetsuo really means to end the shinobi world and create a new existence. These past few years have taken a toll on us all. Even father now has a large gray streak down his hair. It is only a matter of time…
Zig: Don’t talk like that, what about our counter strike?
Hope: Oh, that… If we can survive long enough that is… Raikage is trying to gather as much chakra as possible from the remaining shinobi however, with our numbers dropping so quickly from the meteor enhanced UHE troops and the inference of the UHE hire ups, such a thing becomes taxing and risky. Father, and Kai needs all the chakra of their Bijuu to fend off Reika and the UHE’s forces, especially now that they’ve lost the other Bijuu to thanks to Sasuke’s influence as well. There hasn’t been enough time for father and Kai to channel enough chakra into the counter strike. We simply need more time, but every day, Tetsuo sends in these super natural powers from the other side to pick us off, one by one. Every time we get a beat on his location, he slips into the other side. Since he can attack from both sides, our tactical planning is compromised each and everytime. If only we had the power, and the ability to reach him...
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 11-22-2009 at 08:07 PM.