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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
-Conclusion Part one of three
(Tetsuo and Blank are standing in the middle of Mizugakure, which is now in ruin. Amongst their feet they can see numerous of corpses, all in which use to be followers under their command. Tetsuo shakes his head then looks into the sky and notices that the meteor is no longer there.)
Tetsuo: This, we should’ve foreseen this… (The two high up UHE members continue to walk forward however, they stop and notices that there are those in opposition standing in front of them. It is Gage and Vato.)
Vato: If it isn’t Tetsuo… Finally got off your high horse and brought your sorry ass here huh? Well it’s not like it means anything now. We foiled your plans, ha, ha.
Gage: SAMEHADA FEED ME HIS CHAKRA!
Tetsuo: Deal with the wayward souls… (Blank nods his head. Vato and Gage rushes forward, instantly Blank begins making handeals.)
Blank: Suiton: Bubbles of Drowning! (With rapid speeds Blank shoots out two large bubbles of highly compressed water from his mouth that flies down the throats of Vato and Gage. Both of them drops their weapons and begins drowning on land.)
Gage: Gargle, gargle, gargle, gargle….. (He dies. Vato reaches his hand out towards his friend in agony, while he’s in pain as well. He soon starts to convulse.)
Vato: Gargle, gargle, gargle, gargle… (He then dies as well.)
Blank: The Deed is done…
Tetsuo: We should have come here sooner… Let’s sweep the area, this time, we’re taking it BACK! (The Scene switches over to a barren waste land, where it is occupied by Teru and Mikoto. Mikoto’s heat effect is still there. Teru, who is in platinum armor, is standing his ground.)
Mikoto: No matter how high I amp the heat, your body just won’t melt. That’s fine… (Mikoto cancels his field effect. Mikoto goes in thought.) If I can’t harm is outside, I must find away to make that into my advantage. End of Mikoto’s thought. Teru gets angry.)
Teru: I’M COMING! (Teru rushes forward however, he’s much slower.)
Mikoto: He’s slower… (Teru attempts to punch Mikoto however, Mikoto slips his head and then backs off. Soon Teru goes into a deep thought.)
Teru: Crap… He figured out my new mode’s flaw… But I can’t just cancel this form or, he’ll either freeze me, or cook me.(End of Teru’s thought. Mikoto smirks and then rushes off.) Bastard get your ass back here! (Teru surely, but slowly follows him. The picture drops on Mikoto.)
Mikoto mumbles to himself: Hmm, that’s right kiddo… Keep following. I’ve been out in the thick of things a lot longer than you. I know this locale like the back of my hand. In terms of actual skill only those in which were tested and used on the battlefield becomes an effective ability. Those just used in the training hall becomes a liability… (The Scene switches over to Reika’s headquarters. Reika avoids several wind induced Shuriken, by ducking, jumping, and side stepping. The Shuriken all crash into the wall in back.)
Reika: C’mon Aerial Hatchet, you’ll have to use more than academy tricks against someone as renowned as me… Please, ha, ha, ha… What a joke.
Hiro: Heh… (Hiro pulls out two small scrolls from his pockets. He unravels them and then smashes them on the ground. He picks up two Fuuma Shuirken [in which were summoned from the scrolls]. Reika then smirks and makes a sickening chuckle as she shakes her hand.)
Reika: Didn’t I tell you kid-boy to stop with the childish games. (Hiro tosses both of the Shuriken up at the ceiling, they are now mounted there.) Hmm, what he’s up to? (Hiro then pulls out a smoke bomb and tosses it. Reika covers up as she goes into a deep thought.) I’ll just wait to see what he’s planning. Just because he’s Konoha Aerial Hatchet, I should be cautious… But, I’m still a Sage… (Reika begins to hear the sound of the two Shuriken approaching her.)
Hmm, I’m smarter than that… (She slips to the side however, she now hears the sound of explosive tags, end of Reika’s thought as she gets shocked.) SHIT HE TRICKED ME! THAT KID MUST HAVE APPLIED TAGS TO THEM WHEN THE SMOKE WAS THICK! (She rushes forward out of the smoke however, she notices that Hiro has thrown one of his wind induced mountain cutters. With swift reflexes she avoids however, she has a slash on the side of her face. She rushes forward however, Hiro swings his other mountain cutter, this emits a wind wave that cuts horizontally, Reika begins making handseals.) Suiton: Wall, times two!
(She fires a second wall of water that dual layers the first. As the colliding attacks bursts, Reika and Hiro both rushes towards each other, Hiro downward slashes with his last mountain cutter however, Reika slips to the side and swipes [she now develops claws from her connection with crocks] at Hiro. Hiro disperse [apparently it was a shadow clone].) He got me. (Immediately from behind Hiro is thrusting both of his mountain cutters at the rear of Reika.) EEEK! (Reika is stabbed from behind however, immediately Hiro’s grin turns into frightening look.)
Hiro: As I expected, Reika of the Croc. (Close up on Hiro’s torso shows that a crock tail is piercing through the left side of his chest. Blood starts to pour out of his mouth. Reika has two blades logged into her back however, due to her skin now taking on a crock’s texture, the blades didn’t piece her vitals however, she’s definitely injured.)
Reika: Sorry, about that… But, I can’t afford to lose my life now. You were a remarkable young man… Naruto would be proud. (He enters cardiact arrest, Hiro then has flashbacks. He sees himself training with Naruto and his teammates, Rina and Dosa. He sees flash backs of himself and the gang drinking together and playing cards. He has a flash back of Dosa. Then he has a flash back of his Team, Nila, Zig, and Laya. Switches back to the present, Hiro gets a sudden burst of will power and wills himself back to life and stabs hard into Reika.) AHHHHHHHHH! (Reika then extends her tail and effectively pierces all the way through Hiro’s heart, killing him as blood pours out of his mouth. Reika also falls down.) Blood, I’m losing too much blood… (Reika faints. Time goes by as she awakens on a recovery lab in Dream’s lab. She is in bandages.) I’m alive… (Dream walks through the door.)
Dream: Miss Reika that was definitely a close call. Any closer and I wouldn’t have been able to save you. You survived, Hiro is dead. It must have been an amazing struggle if you were up against one of Konoha’s bests. But you are no longer in the condition to fight. You must recover for the meantime, the tissue damage to your body won’t recover easily, if it wasn’t for Sage Mode, you definitely would have died. But I have something I need your consent to.
Reika: You saved my life, what is it that you desire.
Dream: Let me rule over Amegakure in your absence.
Reika:…. (A little time goes by as Dream is now sitting in the throne room of Amegakure. The room is to hell, but he doesn’t care.)
Dream: Now that Reika is out of the way, I can exact the first phase of the clone project. But, I must stay discrete. Such a plan will take decades to construct. (Soon Kakuya and Kimiko come crashing in.)
Kakuya: WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED DOWN HERE!
Kimiko: Oh my God, all of this blood…
Dream: Hiro and Reika had an amazing battle of wits. Hiro is dead and Reika is critically injured.
Kakuya: I See, well I’m go finish Reika off.
Dream: No… We need her alive. But now that she is no longer of use in this war… Our stake in this war is over for now. We all cling onto her power however, without it we no longer stand a chance in this war. It would be best to avoid the allied forces as much as possible. The clones of the Uchiha clan were just the beginning. We need years of dedication and secrecy from the allied forces. Let’s let them believe they dealt a blow to us… We already got the data of the sharingan from Sasuke. Let’s have the allied forces deal with him as well. We go underground from here.
Kimiko: Why do you want to produce clones having genetic ties to hidden bloodlines? We serve you so why are you doing these things?
Kakuya: Yess, we want to know the cause for what we work…
Dream: It’s all for the sake of science. I want to determine which bloodline is the overall best. That’s all. I will make armies of shinobi. Each squadron with have a specific bloodline, when I have gathered all of the bloodlines and combined them with acceptable hosts, I will put them into the corresponding squadron. The bloodline that prevails will-(The scene switches over to on the outskirts of Amegakure. Michi is tired.)
Michi: They’re incredible. (Two shinobi clad in Raiton armor immediately appears in front of her. It’s Yoshiyuki and Raikage. Immediately Yoshiyuki and Raikage are palming Michi’s face as she screams in pain.) EKKKKKKKK!
Raikage and Yoshiyuki: Face Palm SPEACIAL! (Michi then falls over and dies from the brutal attack. Raikage and Yoshiyuki faces each other and shakes each other’s hands.)
Yoshiyuki: Like old times huh Asao?
Raikage: Heh, don’t act like this changes things punk… (She smiles a little. Oita, short distances away is standing in front of Kazekage and Tsuchikage.)
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Last edited by The Special One; 12-28-2009 at 05:44 PM.