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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Kai (in thought): Impossible!
Asura: Heh, heh… With my knowledge of jutsu and shape manipulation, I was able to take the chakra repelling forces and shape its base into an object that suits whatever need necessary. Since your body is in partially its Bijuu form, I’m able to counter it a little… (The Racket starts to crack a little.) Then again, this is the Hachibi’s chakra, I’m not shocked that you’d soon overpower it… HAAAAA! (Kai is trying to use his head to fully break the Racket… Raitei notices that the grip on her is lessoned because Kai is focusing all his might to break the Racket… Raitei breaks free and rolls to the side… Kai is angered and uses his might to break the Racket… It shatters and Asura is thrown flying…)
Asura (in thought): I wasn’t prepared for that one. (Asura hits the ground as Kai is narrowing in on his location.)
Heh, I can always faze my body, he won’t even touch me…
(Raitei appears next to Asura, urging him to get out of the way.)
Asura: You must’ve forgotten my jutsu… He can’t hurt me!
Raitei: You idiot we gotta think of a plan…
Asura: That’s right! (They both toss smoke bombs and rush off. Kai stops in his tracks…)
Kai (in thought): I’ll just hunt them down! (The smoke clears, and Kai spots Sakuya… She has a handseal forming.) LIKE I’D STAND BY AND LET THAT HAPPEN!
(Kai rushes forward and prepares to slash his way through Sakuya… He does so however, it just fazes through.)
Kai (in thought): That’s not possible! How’s she doing that? (He repeatedly slashes through with no avail, immediately, another Sakuya is behind the seemingly invincible version…) What the hell? (The first Sakuya leans out of the way, and falls to the ground while the second one completes the genjutsu.)
Sakuya: Purgatory! (Another white flash blinds Kai’s face… Kai falls to the ground… In Kai’s new reality… He is not in Bijuu form… He is floating through an endless sky of whiteness… He is in a zone of nothingness… He just floats seemingly.)
Kai: How did I lose? What happened… I can’t feel my body… So numb… My chakra, I can’t gather it… Hachibi… Are you there? I can’t feel you… So numb…
(Back to reality… There are two Sakuyas however, one of them splits into two people, which are revealed to be Asura and Raitei…)
Raitei: I can’t believe it worked… The combined transformation that is.
Asura: Well I studied the jutsu… If two, or more people combine themselves together, the person whose ego is more prominent, the person who casts the jutsu, is able to use whatever jutsu he, or she knows… That’s why I was able to use my fazing ability. I knew if we both transformed, it would be hard to detect a henge, therefore, we were able to completely fool the Hachibi…
Sakuya: Quickly… He’s probably trying to break out of it… It seems this genjutsu was stronger than I thought *pant*… He’s out for a good minute since he has the Hachibi’s chakra coursing through him… End it quickly; I’m out of gas… Hurry, only 50 seconds left…
Raitei: I’ll use my thunder strike! Since he’s probably using all the chakra in his body to break the genjutsu, he won’t be able to recover enough to prevent an immediate death… (Raitei charges with Raiton chakra again and leaps into the air…)
Asura: Pity the Hachibi will die… I wanted to use his chakra for something…
Sakuya: It can’t be helped… There was no way we could have subdued him… (The Lightning bolt smashes home on Kai’s body… Blood sprays everywhere, but we don’t see the true extent of the damage… Raitei is covered in blood… Her Raiton armor dissipates and she walks over to join the others.)
Raitei: Finally… He was such a diehard… (immediately a bullet goes through Asura’s head… Asura falls down, dead…)
Sakuya: SHIT IT’s MISA! BRACE YOURSELFS! (Before Raitei can activate her Raiton chakra, a bullet strikes her in the stomach, and she falls over in pain.)
(Another bullet fires however, due to Sakuya’s quickly reflexes, she pulls out a kunai and manages to deflect the bullet elsewhere… From behind Sakuya, Jisho prepares to swing his blade diagonally.)
Sakuya (in thought): The White Ghost… (She cartwheels out of the way and rushes off in a direction, however the shock wave from Jisho’s blade carries out and slices the fainting Raitei into two pieces.)
Jisho: She’s sharp… She must get around to have known about my ability…
(Misa appears and looks over at Kai’s corpse.)
Misa: Kai… (She tears up, but she wipes her face.)
(Jisho looks over toward the direction in which Sakuya ran… (Misa now is next to Jisho.)
Misa: If only we’ve known about Asura’s ability earlier, he wouldn’t have imprisoned us, and we could have killed him before… But now, Kai… Ehhh… No use worrying about it now… Let’s go, let’s hunt that Sakuya bitch down… (Misa wipes her tears, and puts on a devilish grin.)
Jisho (in thought): She took that a lot better than I thought she did, the 5th shinobi war must've hardened her soul… She’s more than ready to serve as our Mizukage…
Jisho: Now that’s what I like to hear! (The scene switches over Sakuya [she is running].)
Sakuya (in thought): Asura didn’t kill those two earlier it seems? Damn, and now he’s dead too… He just didn’t have time to faze out… It seems his experience isn’t as great as I thought it was… Being cooped up in his lab weakened his battle instincts… The moment we took down the Hachibi, he and Raitei let their guard down… Well fuck them, they deserved to die… Imbeciles never live long… (The scene switches over to somewhere on the outskirts of Mizugakure… Ino Shika Cho is down on one knee with blood flowing from his mouth and nose… In front of him are Take, Sazx, and Blake… They are also worn out a bit, however they appear to have the upperhand.)
Ino Shika Cho: How about we call this one a draw? Fellas, brilliant display of your abilities… Fighting you three have honed my own skills… I’d prefer it if we’d back down so I can fight you all again with the newfound experience I have gained…
Ino Shika Cho (in thought): Play it cool…
Take: BULL SHIT!
Sazx: I’ll grind you into dust!
Blake: If you are going to beg for your life, at least make it convincing UHE!
Ino Shika Cho: *Sheesh* Damn… You got me guys…
Ino Shika Cho (in thought): Have to think of something… I refuse to die… That is so unlike me to fall in battle…
(The Scene switches over to the fallen Oita… Tsuchikage has his foot on Oita’s neck… Kazekage is standing behind him… Oita coughs up blood.)
Tsuchikage: This is where the UHE fall…
Kazekage: Kenjiro, put him out of his misery…
Tsuchikage: But first, I want him to feel the misery all those who suffered by his hands…
(The Scene switches over to a barren waste land… Daisuke is tending to an injured Muto… They are surrounded by many corpses.)
Daisuke: You’ll pull through… We just have to hang on, just until Konoha pulls through for us…
Muto: Uhhh… But if we are hit by another wave of troops, I don’t think the two of us will survive much longer…
Daisuke: Don’t let your resolve dissolve… If you want to survive, you have to maintain that will of striving to live through this turmoil…
(The scene switches over to the fight for the shinobi world. Both of Nila’s palms are pulsing with Fuuton chakra. She and Tetsuo rush forward, preparing to clash. Tetsuo pulls out a Kunai and emits Fuuton chakra along it…. Once they near each other, they clash… Nila’s wind sharpened hand is parrying against Tetsuo’s wind enhanced Kunai. Bursting waves of wind can be felt throughout the area… Zig [who is further back using a handseal to ensure that Tetsuo doesn’t disperse chakra based attacks], is taken aback by Nila’s skill.)
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Last edited by The Special One; 03-23-2010 at 03:51 AM.