Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Zig (in thought): Incredible… Nila’s talent…
(The Hokage from atop a cliff, watches the battle.)
The Hokage (in thought): With her mastery of the wind element and her ability to implement the gentle fist style into her attacks puts her general skill level as a shinobi beyond even mine… She’s keeping up with Tetsuo using her nin-tai… Hiro… You’ve seen her potential, and taken further than I could even hope to imagine… I’m proud of you both… It’s almost time for her class to take charge of things.
(Hope from the sidelines watches the battle.)
Hope (in thought): Sis… Heh… All of a sudden, I’m going to have to start asking her for pointers…
(The scene switches back to the battle held between Nila and Tetsuo.)
Nila (in thought): If only I hadn’t use my Byakugan’s new power twice already… I would have been able to get him while Zig has Tetsuo’s crazy chakra thingy on lock down… I’ll just have to take it to him Dicing Fist…
(Nila overpowers Tetsuo, and knocks him off balance pushing weight onto his Kunai… Nila uses this opportunity to use her other palm for a wind styled Hakke Kuushou… Everyone is shocked as they see her prepare the formation, especially Tetsuo…)
Tetsuo (in thought): She’s really skilled… (Tetsuo quickly gets on guard and football tackles Nila, which sends her sliding across the ground, then Tetsuo tosses his Kunai at Nila, hoping to pierce her… Hope immediately comes into the fray… He knocks the Kunai off balance with a mini-shinra tensei… Then he rushes over to Nila, to brace her slide…)
Hope: You alright!
Nila: Yeah… Thanks Hope…
Hope: You’ve done enough… Let me, or father step in…
Nila: Do you believe in me Hope?
Hope: Of course…
Nila: Just believe… That’s all I need…
Nila (in thought): Tetsuo lives up to his name… His taijutsu is flawless… I have the Fuuton affinity, but there’s no flaw to his game… But now that they believe in me, all I need is to believe in myself… Isn’t that all that matters, father?
(Tetsuo glances over at Zig.)
Tetsuo (in thought): He’s the problem… As my brother, he must have improved his chakra control by remembering me train when we were younger… My distinctive chakra flow can be easily mimicked by someone who shares a similar skill in chakra amplification… If I take him out, my chakra control over the field will return… If I can get that advantage back… (Immediately, Nila’s in front of Tetsuo. Nila points at herself with her thumb.)
Nila: I’m your opponent! Don’t underestimate me because I’m a woman… I’ve taken hits much harder than that!
Tetsuo (in thought): She’s got spunk, that’s for sure…
Next Time: The Final Battle!
The Specialist, forever
^My first thread.lol
Last edited by The Special One; 04-19-2010 at 03:10 AM.