Re: Astralojia - Kind of like a cartoon series...
Oh man, so much to pan, so little time/patience.
1. Bullshit did you spend 4 years on this. Spending 3.9 years thinking about it and drawing the occasional character does not count as working on it.
2. This is same thing as every other cliché wapanese webcomic piece of crap. Making it into a fucking slideshow with the most ear-bleedingly annoying music ever to come out of GarageBand or whatever the fuck you used just means that instead of reading a shitty comic at my own exceedingly fast pace, I have to sit through slow pointless shit with no animation to redeem it.
3. "Drawn in a simpler style". This translates as "shat out as quickly as possible because I am fucking lazy and couldn't draw anything decent anyway". Seriously, even the logo for this abortion looks like the signature of a brain-damaged child. 30-40 of those in eight hours? Are you doing them while you jerk off to better drawn and animated hentai?
I haven't even started on the obnoxiously obvious tropes and clichés of your actual "story".