Originally Posted by NeoKakarott023
Pretty good, and interesting read, but isn't the Mizukage guarding the Feudal Lords, while Raichu's with Tsunade at HQ with sensors? Are you implying that Mizukage 'felt' Yaguras chakra, and Raichu saw it happen on the battlefield through the sensors, and upon that spoke to Mizu through her sensor? Hope you got it, but that part got confusing. Lastly, though I don't like the Fat Crying Baby Bitch, he has his Rainbow Wings, and he's gonna be on par with even Yaguras opening stages I'd suspect. Kishi's gonna floss his Heavyweight, that I suspect.
As far as the mizukage, I actually forgot she was with them. Sort of an opps on my part but I just fixed it. As for chouji, I figured it was best for him and shikimaru to start out on the battlefield trying to defeat yagura as just an example that even with chouji at his best he was getting beaten easily by yagura and shikimaru cant do jack to stop them. Then just as it looks useless you have naruto make his entrance to catch yagura offguard.