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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Madara: Kazekage, you're alone this war. I'm sorry but you will die here!
Two persons enter the scene.
Tsunade: No he won't die Madara. You will have to fight us both!
Sasuke: It won't be a problem.
Raikage appears in front of Sasuke all charged up.
Raikage: It's payback time brat!
Sasuke: Raikage. Last time you lost an arm. This time you will lose your head.
Raikage: Don't get cocky brat!

Scene shows Kabuto

Kabuto is preparing a new invocation. He makes complicate handsigns and a casket rises from the earth. He brings Anko to the center of a pentagram.
Anko: Wh...what are you doing?
Kabuto: I'm sacrificing you. You will die to serve a greater purpose. You should be proud.
Anko: You damn bastard! I will kill you for...!
She suddenly collapses on the ground uncouncious.
Kabuto: It's time...Summoning Impure world resurrection!
A casket rises from the earth. The casket has the Uchiha crest on it.
Kabuto: Now...let's reunite the two brothers!

Scene shows Madara fighting Gaara and Tsunade.

Madara: You cannot keep up with me!
Gaara: Sand Tsunami!
A wave of sand goes towards Madara but he evades it using his t/s jutsu.
Suddenly Tsunade is behind him and she tries to get a kick on him but he points his hand at her.
Madara: Shinra Tensei!
Tsunade is thrown away and Gaara catches her with his hand. They are both in a bery bad shape.

Next panel shows Sasuke and Raikage.

Raikage is trying to land a blow on Sasuke but the latter evades all the hits. The raikage suddenly uses his tremendous speed and appears behind Sasuke ready to use his Lariat.
Sasuke: You lose Raikage. Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Black Hole!
The panel shows Raikage with his arm stoped in the air. He has a shcoked expression on his face, and the next panel shows blood dripping from his chest. The next scene shows his entire body. From his chest down to his waist he has a giant hole.
Sasuke: I told you. You are dead Raikage.
Raikage: Damn it...
He falls down on his knees and he still retains the shocked expression.
Tsunade notices him.
Tsunade: NO!! Raikage!
Madara: Well done Sasuke.
Gaara: You will pay for this Sasuke!!!
Raikage: Tsunade...let Darui know...
Tsunade: I got it!
The Fourth Raikage falls down on the earth dead.His hole in the chest is the testament of Sasuke's hate.
Sasuke turns his head to Gaara.
Gaara: Uchiha Sasuke....you are beyond salvation.
Sasuke: You're next Gaara!

Scene shows Naruto in Sage Mode.

Naruto is standing in the devastated Konoha.
Naruto: They are all....they are alive!!!
He head out for one of the caves in the Hokage mountain. Naruto spots the ramen guy.
Naruto: What happend here?
Ramen guy: The elders...they gave their life to protect us! They've made some sort of shield over Konoha and we all got saved! We headed out here in order to be safe.
Naruto: The elders, huh....
he suddenly has a shocked expression and he dissappears from the panel.
Next panel shows him dashing at full speed through a forest. At the same time he has a mental conversation with the Kyuubi.
Naruto: You've sensed too, right?
Kyuubi: Madara's chakra...and Sasuke's. Togheter with the Kages. And the raikage's chakra just disappeared. Hurry up brat! And if you encounter the Uchihas...give out all you got!
Naruto: I know! Thanks for agreeing to sync with me...

Scene shows Tsunade thrown down and Gaara held by Sasuke is the air. Gaara is badly injured with blood on his head and chest

Sasuke: This is the end Gaara. You used to be more powerful then i was but my hatred overwhelmed you.
Gaara with a calm face: You're touched by insanity Sasuke. I can't belive that Naruto stil hopes for your redemption. Your actions here today have guaranteed that you will die. Even if it's not by my hand.
Madara appears next to them.
Madara: Well done Sasuke. You proved that your Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan is much more powerful then i hoped to be.
Sasuke: Time to go get Naruto.
Madara: First things first. I think you want to meet an old friend first.
Sasuke: Old friend?
Madara: Yakushi Kabuto. I'm sure that you two have much to talk about.
Sasuke: Take me to Kabuto! I will kill him! He dared to summon Itachi back that way!
Madara: Then let go of the Kazekage. He is almost dead anyway. He doesn't have long until he passes away.
Sasuke drops Gaara on the earth
Sasuke: Any last words, Gaara?
Gaara: Naruto...will beat you!
Sasuke: That for me to know and for you to wonder. Because you will die.
Madara grabs an uncouncios Tsunade from the ground.
Sasuke: Why don't you just kill her?
Madara: Because i need her Senju blood. Let's go Sasuke.
Madara phases away with Sasuke And Tsunade.

Scene shows Naruto arriving at the place where the Kages were defeated.

He sees Gaara lying on the ground and Raikage dead.
Naruto: NO!! What happend here!?!
Gaara: Na...naruto...
Naruto: Gaara! Are you OK? Who did this?!?
Gaara: Sasuke and Madara. They took Tsunade with them. She is still alive...Sasuke killed the Raikage and the Tsuchikage...
Naruto: Wait here i will go get Sakura for you!
Gaara: No Naruto! I don't have much time...i will die in a matter of moments...defeat them Naruto...beat Sasu...
Naruto intrerupts him: No more words! It's time to show you my real speed. I will take you to Sakura right away.
Naruto grabs Gaara and the next panel shows him talking with Kyuubi.
Naruto: Lend me your speed. I need to save him!
Kyuubi: Run brat! I will send my chakras to augument yours. I will use the chakras in your members in order to make you faster then your dad! Now go!

The panel shows different battlefields and the ninjas witnessing an orange flash dashing at an extraordinary speed.
Random fodder: That was!!! Naruto?!?

Scene shows Naruto arriving at the tent where Sakura is with Gaara on his back. Sakura quickly comes out and grabs Gaara.
Naruto: Heal him if you can Sakura-chan.
Sakura: Where are the other Kages?
Naruto slowly turns his back preparing to leave: There are not here....i'm going to HQ.

Scene is switched to Kabuto and the coffin with Uchiha crest on it.

Kabuto: Come out Izuna Uchiha.
Izuna emerges from the coffin. He looks life a softer Sasuke but with his hair a little longer.
Izuna: Impure world ressurection. What a demonic way to use the deads.
Kabuto: Shut up. What do you say about seeing your beloved brother?
Izuna: Madara? You summoned him too?
Kabuto: No need for it. He is alive.
Izuna: Madara...survived?
Kabuto: Yes he did. He betrayed you that day. I summoned you with your Mangekyou powers. You're not blind anymore. Now,tell me...what do you have in mind right now?
Izuna with Mangekyou in his eyes and a menacing look: Revenge!



So this is what i wrote so far. Tell me your thoughts.
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