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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Scene shows a hill with a tall figure standing up and looking away.

Sage to himself: Uzumaki Naruto...Uchiha Sasuke...so this is centred around you. As expected. Nothing changed. It seems that i've made the wrong decisions.

Scene shows Konoha and Sasuke standing on the first's hokage head with Madara.

Madara: Well Sasuke, it's time. *
Sasuke: I know! Shut up!*
Sasuke slowly opens his eyes revealing the unique Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and he shouts:*
Eternal Spiraling Mangekyou: Amateratsu!

A wave of black flames goes over Konoha!

Sasuke shouting: I will erase evertything! This is what you all wanted! To get rid of the Uchihas! I will make your wish come true! I will kill all of you and so i will erase the Uchiha name from your mind!

Unknown voice: Uchiha Sasuke. Descendant from my eldest son. Wielder of my eyes power. The hatred is strong in you boy. I'm here to release you from your hatred.*

Sasuke: And you are,loser?
Madara thinking: This! This is impossible! Is he another edo golem!?! But it seems that he is not under Kabuto's control! We will need Raiden-sama's help again!
The sage revealing his appearence: he has long white, spiky hair *flowing backwards, a face similar to Naruto and blue eyes.*
Sage: I'm Rikku...
Sasuke interrupting him: It doesn't matter after all! You're just another one in my way! Let's hope that you will put a good fight.*
Sage: Don't get cocky, brat!*
Sasuke makes some handsigns: Katon! Great dragon fireball!
He sents fire dragons into the skies thus making thunder clouds.
The sage stays calm looking at Sasuke as he makes a chidori.
Sasuke: This is the end you freak! I will show you my new Kirin!
As the lightning comes down Sasuke closes his right eye, widely opens his left and yells: Amaterasu!

The black flames envelope the lightning and goes directly to the Sage hitting the spot where he stays and making a giant wave of dust.
As the dust clears he can see the Sage standing untouched.

Sage: Impressive display of power. Still, that's worlds apart from killing me! It was worlds apart from killing me In my other life, in this one it can't even put a scratch on me.
Madara thinking: His other life?!?
Madara: Sasuke get away! He is way to powerful for us to handle!
Sasuke: I don't run ! I'm not a coward! Prepare yourself ! says as he releases a huge amount of dark chakra! Eternal Mangekyou! Darkness Beam!

Sasuke raises his hand in front of the Sage and releases from his palm a huge beam of dark energy that vaporizes anything it touches. The beam goes directly towards the sage but he still remains calm. The beam hits directly the sage, making a giant explosion!

Scene shows Naruto and Itachi dashing towards HQ

Naruto suddenly has a surprised face.
Naruto: Itachi...proceed to HQ without me...i have something unfinished in Konoha.
Itachi: Sixth Hokage Uzumaki Naruto...you cannot just go by yourself to a place where the enemy is!
Naruto gives Itachi a menacing look: That's precisley *what the Sixth Hokage should do!

Scene shows Sasuke*

Sasuke is standing in front of the Sage with his clothes ripped off and bleeding from his chest. He is kept in the air by the sage.

Sage: Such power at a such young age. I'm sorry Uchiha Sasuke. You're the first one to go. makes a handsign. Ninshu! Sword summoning!

A sword appears in his hand and he moves his hand to decapitate Sasuke.
Suddenly a shadow appears and catches the sword with one hand.

Sage: So you've comed too. That spares me the time to look for you. Uzumaki Naruto...

Scene shows an uncouncios Sasuke held by the Sage and Naruto holding Sage's sword and Madara

Madara: It seems that we have no more use here. He grabes Sasuke and he tries to escape but the Sage makes a handsign and Madara falls down on earth paralyzed.
The sage: Another coward. I will finish him after this.
Naruto: Who are you?
Naruto: Answer my question.
Sage: It seems that you are a little more wiser then this young man over here.
Naruto thinking: To be able to beat Sasuke like that... Who are you? Answer me!
Sage: I am Rikkudou Sennin!

Kyuubi is seen inside Naruto

Kyuubi: Runt, run right now! We cannot defeat him!
Naruto thinking: The sage...it seems that he truly is who he claims to be! Even nine tails is scared by him.
Sage: Host of the Kyuubi, it seems that this war is nothing but a quest to get the demons i spread around the world. The most rational and objective solution is to kill the beast inside you. That way i will ensure the end of this war.*
Sage thinking: Let's see if he will call this bluff or he will fall for it.
Naruto: well, if you want to kill nine tails, you will have to beat me first! I will not leave my partner to be killed like this!
Sage: Your partner...don't be silly kid. A tailed beast it's not the partner of the host. There are only two options: either you are controled by the beast, either you control the beast. You don't have equal rights with the beast. There is always the risk that the beast will take over a host. Only a fool would accept that!
Naruto releasing a huge amount of chakra breaks the sage's sword and because of his chakra release the sage is pushed back a few feets.

Naruto looking at the Sage with menacing eyes: Then i will be a fool for the rest of my life! I prefer to be a fool! after says with a sad face: I almost forgot about this. I let my anger to get the best of me and i was filled with arrogance...but...This is my ninja way! And i will stick to it even if i have to defy the gods! I'm the Sixth Hokage! Uzumaki Naruto!

The Sage thinking: Well then...this is a surprise..i thought...but maybe i was wrong...anyway i will still do it...
The Sage makes a handsign and summonsmanother sword.
Naruto makes a step back and a Kage bushin sign: Tajuu Kage Bushin jutsu!*
Three clones appear. Naruto: Two of you keep him busy. One of you knows what to do! Go!

One clones leaves the scene and the other two goes directly towards the Sage
Sage: Don't get cocky, boy...
He swings his sword and hits one of the clones with it. The other clones jumps in the air and throws a rasenshuriken at the Sage.*
Sage: Nice...it seems that my Ninshu evolved...Ninshu! Chibaku Tensei!
A large sphere of earth emerges from the earth and stands as a shield. The rasenshuriken hits the sphere and the sage smiles.

Sage: You still have much to learn kid. *You're good, but still...
Suddenly the last clone appears above the Sage*
Naruto clone: Sage Art! Ultra big-ball Rasenshuriken!!!

He throws a giant Rasenshuriken at the Sage
Sage: Ninshu! Creation release!
A large beam of light goes from the sage's palm hitting the giant rasenshuriken and absorbes it.

Naruto clone: Shit! He absorbed it!?!*
The sage hitting the last clone with his sword: that's enough kid.
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