Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Naruto is shown in the Tsukuyomi with Itachi.
Itachi: So water is your second element...
Naruto: I wonder if i can add it to my rasengan.
Naruto still in Tsukuyomi is breathing heavily.
Naruto: It's not working...it's not working with the Rasengan...
Itachi: But wind is, right?
Itachi: I thought that maybe you could combine wind and water at the same time..
Naruto: Then let's do it!
Panel is switched back to the fight*
The two clones are pushing wind and water in the Bijuu Ball and as they finish they dissappear.
Naruto is shown holding above his head a black bijuu ball with wind and water crossing it.
Naruto: Uzumaki Style! Hurricane Kyuubi Rasengan!
Naruto throws the Hurricane Kyuubi Rasengan towards the menacing black beam.
As the two jutsus collide the energy released from their clash slowly envelops the whole area.
Itachi and Madara are watching as the impact makes a giant release of energy. Ao and the rest of his division see as the impact of the two jutsus starts to decimate the surroundings. The blast is seen from the HQ where Shikaku is watching with a shocked expression.
Suddenly a figure is shown appearing in front of the wave of energy.*
Raiden is shown holding the Divine Spear of Gods, tool used by the Sage to seal the Juubi.
Raiden as the blast approaches him: I command you! Divine Spear of gods! Divions of seals! Sealing ninshu!
The blast is shown as it's absorbed inside Raiden's staff, leaving everyone with a shocked expression.
Raiden turns around to face Naruto and Sasuke.
Raiden: Thank you Sasuke, Naruto. Your combined energies gave me the necessary power to subjugate the Juubi. -he turns his face towards Madara- I have no further use for you. You played your part. Now i'm the equal of a God. We will meet soon enough Naruto Uzumaki...because i will need the beast inside you! Soon you will all be under my command!
At the same time Raiden is near Bee and he just touches him with a finger.
Raiden: Ninshu! Teleport!
Bee is dissappearing, but at the same time Naruto tries to hit Raiden with a Fuuton Rasenshurkien. Raiden throws him a menacing look and instanly dissappears.
The next panel shows him appearing behind Madara.
Madara turns around and Raiden puts his hand on Madara's chest.
Madara: No...don't ...i served you well!
Raiden: You did...but know i don't need you anymore.
Madara: So you will just kill me?- he quickly makes a handsign- Fuuinjutsu! Transfer!
Raiden: Ninshu! Particle hole!
Madara's body gets a giant hole in the chest. The latter falls down on earth. His mask breaks and we can see that his face has multiple scars. His face also retains a shocked expression. The moment his body hits the ground it vanishes like dust.
Itachi looking sad: And that's how the legend of shinobis...Uchiha Madara...our clan's proud...has fallen...
Raiden: I'll be back Naruto Uzumaki...I will seal the eight tails and then i will come after you and after the scroll hidden in the villagge! Prepare yourself!
Raiden makes a handsign and he dissappears.
Panel shows Sasuke with a shocked expression.
He has a shocked expression because the last technique used by Madara made an echo inside him. It's like intel was revealed to him but he cannot acces it until he makes a choice. He feels that.
He turns his face around and he sees Naruto looking at the place where Madara was. He activates his Spiralling Mangekyou Sharigan and his body is slowly enveloped in a vortex. At the same time a vortex appears behind Naruto and Sasuke emerges from it. Naruto is standing with his back at Sasuke and the latter makes a fast chidori and tries to strike him. But when he is about to hit Naruto the chidori gets cancelled.
Naruto: I told you that i'm powerful...and i told you that it's my turn to attack. But i won't. We will finish this another time, Sasuke. As much as i want to fight you for real, I can't. Raiden wants me and he also wants the scroll hidden in the villagge. As the Sixth Hokage i must protect the villagge from this threat. I won't let him lay a finger on the citizens.
Itachi appears near them.
Itachi: You spoke like a true Hokage. Now, Sasuke...what will you do?
Sasuke: I will help Him in order to kill everyone in Konoha!
Suddenly he gets a surprised expression and he falls down on earth.
Itachi: Leave him be for *five minutes. I guess that Madara left something for him. A choice that he will have to make...
Panel shows Sasuke witnessing Madara's memories.
A young Madara is shown with wraps around his eyes. Izuna is shown coming near him.
Izuna: Brother...i read the tablet...take my eyes...it will restore your vision.
Madara: NO! What about you!?! I'm not that sellfish! Don't you even think about this!
Izuna starts making handsigns:don't worry...you won't feel a thing... Ninja Art! Gates of Nirvana!
Madara as he falls asleep: No don't do it...
Scene is switched to Madara fighting Hashirama.
Hashirama is lying down on earth and Madara has a conversation with Izuna. Suddenly a woman appears near Hashirama and releases him from the genjutsu. Instantly Madara sends an Amaterasu flame towards her, but Hashirama awakes and makes a handsign. From the earth emerges a tree blocking the flame.
The next panel shows Izuna getting stabbed by various spikes emerged from the earth.
Madara screaming: NOOOO!!!! -he looks at Mito Uzumaki- EMS! Tsukuyomi!
As soon as he releases the genjutsu upon her and she falls down caught in it,*Hashirama makes another handsign, but before he can finish it Madara appears in front of him and delivers a kick, sending Hashirama crashing in some trees. Madara quickly makes some handsigns.
Madara: Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Shape Shifting!
Because of Madara technique a purple sphere appears enveloping the two in it. After a few seconds they are both released from it. Hashirama is uncouncious but Madara manages to get on his feet.*
Madara to himself: What's this wierd feeling...i should be much more powerfull...his power should be mine! I feel weakend...like a shell for my powers that are gone,
The sphere slowly takes the shape of a weird human form and it reveal a figure splitted in two halves..a white one and a black one...
Madara: Who or what are you?!?
The black half: I'm Zetsu. Black Zetsu.
The white half: I'm white Zetsu!
Madara: Where did you came from?!?
Black Zetsu: We were created from two parts of your soul...i'm your part...and the white one here...he is Hashirama Senju's part. Together we are known as Zetsu!
Scene is switched to Hashirama impaling Madara with a sword in the chest.
Another Madara is shown sitting on a cliff and looking at the battle
Madara thinking: Fool. He doesn't realise that the Madara he just killed is a white zetsu clone. I had enough time while he was lying down, to make use of their abilities. And now, that i have an advantage over him...i will kill him!
Suddenly a figure appears behind him.
Raiden: " I will kill him" ...you're not worthy of your Uchiha name.
Madara: Who are you?!? Back off before i will kill you!
Raiden: Get real brat! I will teach you the true meaning of terror!
Scene shows Madara injured with his clothes torn apart and held in the air by Raiden.
Raiden: Did you had enough?
Madara: Who...who are..you?!?
Raiden: I'm the older brother from the legend. I know that you're aware of the legend of the Sage. From now on...you will serve me or i will kill you!
Panel is switched to Madara, now wearing a mask ( the one he weared during the Uchiha massacre) *sitting next to Raiden.
Madara: Raiden-sama...i never asked you...what's your plan?
Raiden: My plan...is to surpass my father. He was a man who made a big mistake. He didn't know hot to use the power that he had. I will summon the Juubi inside me and i will use his power to became a God.
Madara: A god? How can someone became a God?
Raiden: There is a portal...unknown to mortals..that opens the gates of hell and heaven. I use that power to open the gates of hell and i will use the Hell's power to destroy the Heavens. The Juubi used to be the king of Hell. Amd thus I...as the Juubi's jimchuuriki...i will have under my command it's legions. Your Susano'o is a warrior from Hell. I will overthrow the God and i will replace him! The throne of the Gods will be mine!
Madara: What about the human kind? If you release the powers of Hell...the human kind won't be affected?
Raiden: The human kind will be decimated. There will be no survivior.*
Madara: Then who will adore you as their God?
Raiden: It's not about adoration...it's about overcoming our limits of understanding as humans. I will transcend from the evolutionary stage to the highest step in the process of understanding...that's my aim! And the humans...they will be devoured all!
Scene is switched back to present.
Sasuke slowly rises up. He looks at Itachi and Naruto.
Naruto: I see that you're finally awake. What did you saw?
Sasuke: It doesn't matter. What it matters right now...is that i will kill you.
Naruto takes a fighting stance.
Sasuke: But not today...i recognize your power. And because of that i will need you to stop Raiden. After we kill him..we can resume our battle!
Panel shows Kyuubi inside Naruto .
Kyuubi talking to himslef: It seems that the Uchiha brat made a surprising choice. The future is slowly but surely changing...maybe the paths i showed Naruto aren't the correct ones...it feels like *that at this very moment..he is carving his own path...
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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