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Old 04-21-2012, 05:38 PM   #552
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Here some more.....

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Naruto- The Traveling Man

Five years pass, Five years of Peace, but that is about to END….

Scene starts with a 4 split panel of the 4 of the hidden village’s Sand, Mist, Cloud and Rocks main entrance. It zooms to old man walking into each of the village’s. The man has red hair and is dressed in a silver-ish cloak with a wooden staff he walks up to each of the main entrance guards and says.

Old man- I Must speak with your Kage or Else….

Scene cuts To Konoha’s main entrance where the same man appears. The man stumbles to the ground and the Konoha guards help the man up

Old man- with a weathered voice, thank you.. youngins how nice to help a old man to his feet.

Guard 1- it is no problem sir, but what are you coming into our village for Business or pleasure

Old man- oh hoho I’m here on strict business sonny but it will be my pure pleasure doing it here in this glorious village, I have heard so many wonderful things from this young man who saved my life about a year ago that I had to see if this place was as good as he described.

Guard 1- Oh,who is this man’s name

Old man- Naruto…

Just then a young teenager with a long Black scarf comes running into the village

Old Man-…Uzumaki

Konohamaru- NARUTO!!?

Guard 2- Old man are you sure his Name was Naruto Uzumaki?

Old Man- hmmmm yep, it’s hard to forget the kid pretty much screamed it at the top of his lungs “MY NAME IS NARUTO UZUMAKI and don’t you forget it!” and I never did.

Konohamaru- Shikamaru did you hear, this guy seen Naruto

Shikamaru comes up behind Konohamaru and puts his arm around his shoulder.

Shikamaru- huh!?

Old man- Shikamaru’s your name?

Shikamaru- yeah what of it old man.

Old man- Nothing that man just told me stories of this place, and like I was telling guards 1and2 over here I had to come see if the characters in his story were real and so far he they are, how delightful.

Konohamaru- how so old man?

Old man- well Naruto described a character with the name Shikamaru in his stories as the smartest man he ever knew had a plan for every situation.

Shikamaru- that could be describing any number of people

Old man- he also described him as being extremely LAZY

Konohamaru- Nope … Only you Sensei.

Old Man- oh hohoho now you reminded me he mentioned you quite a bit in stories as well.

Konohamaru- REALLY!?

Old Man- he spoke of you as a brother but always ended the conversation with, “he will challenge me for the title Hokage one day.”

The old man tosses his hand on Konohamaru’s head and messes his hair up

Konohamaru and Shikamaru smile

Shikamaru- Gaurds I will take it from here he must go see the Hokage.

Old man- Perfect… that is why I’m here

Shikamaru- what…? Why?

Old man- Naruto would not let me pay him for his services of saving me but he made a request that I could not refuse.. he asked me to give an urgent message to the Hokage.

Shikamaru- Then we must go now… Konohamaru go and tell Temari that I will be Late tell her code Orange has remerged

Konohamaru- huh?

Shikamaru- she will know what that means now GO!

Konohamaru dashes off. While Shikamaru walks swiftly to the Hokage’s Office which the old man can’t keep up with his pace…

???- Yo Shikamaru where’s the fire

Kiba and shino are walking towards the direction of the gate when they stop Shikamaru

Shikamaru- can’t talk now guys I have to escort this old man to the Hokage

Kiba- what old Man?

Shikamaru- what a drag…. Wait there he is… where are you going old man.

Old man- you walk way to fast to be Lazy

Kiba- Snap this old man just called you lazy

Shikamaru- No Naruto called me that.

Kiba- he’s back!? Where is he!?

Shikamaru- nope he’s not back, this guy met him about a year ago, and has a message for the Hokage

Old man- Kiba hmmm…{sniff.. sniff}

Kiba- old man why did you just sniff me

Old man- oh hoho he’s right again he smells like Wet Dog oh hoho.

Kiba- grrr

Shino- calm down Kiba it’s not his fault Naruto gave bad descriptions of the two of you. What did he say about me?

Old man- Shino.. Shino….. Shino? … Sorry not ringing any bells. Who are you?

Shino goes into shadowing super doom mode

Kiba-Thinking{not this again}

Shikamaru- we got to go, so see you guys later.

Old man- can you slow down the pace this time?
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