Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
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Naruto : Approaching chaos.
The panel shows Sasuke and Naruto from where the last chapter left them. Zero is luing on the ground.
Naruto slowly gets up, being obviously shaked by the events. He looks confused around, not being able to recall anything that happend to him in the latest hours. Sasuke looks at him and smiles.
Naruto with a surprised voice: Sasuke?!? What happend?!?
Sasuke: You don't remember?*
Naruto: No...this day it's blurry to me...the last thing i remember is Raiden coming to pay me a visit.
Sasuke: He placed you under a mind control jutsu. He sent you after us.
Naruto shocked: Did...anyone...
Sasuke: No. They flew. Shisui took Hinata away from here, but Zero stayed behind. He managed to restrict your powers for a while, so i could break Raiden's controling jutsu.
Sasuke thinking: I just lied to him...but why did i do it? It felt so natural...
Naruto: Interesting. So Raiden managed to get his grip on me. But the fact that you dispelled the jutsu, means that Raiden will attack us.
Sasuke: He will attack us, soon.*
Naruto: Indeed...it seems that we are going to another war!
Suddenly two people land near them. The scene shows Shisui and Hinata. Hinata's face is a mixture between shocked,surprised, happy, angered and anxious. She walks towards Naruto.
Naruto smiles: Hinata...
She remains silent, stops in front of him and punches him right in the stomach.
Naruto as he holds his stomach: Wait a moment! What was that for?!?
Hinata: For leaving me behind!*
Naruto: Hinata...it was for your own sake...
Hinata: My own sake?*
Naruto: I didn't want to drag you into my problems. It was my decision to sacrifice myself to Raiden. As a Hokage i had to save Konoha, and as a shinobi i had to protect everyone from the threat that Raiden posed to the ninja world.
Hinata: I understand...but as a husband?*
Naruto: I got to understand that my sacrifice wasn't my life! It was giving up on you!*
Hinata remains silent at hearing his conffession.
Sasuke: As much as i love to see Naruto smashed by Hinata, we must hurry. We must return to Konoha as fast as possible as prepare! I suspect a plot against Konohamaru!
Naruto: I remember fractions of what i've saw during Raiden's control. But i'm sure of something...Yama Dharma betrayed the Celest City.
Sasuke: Itachi suspected the same thing. He is on his way back to Konoha...i must warn him.
Shisui: How could you do it?
Sasuke smiles: It's an ability of the Mangekyou. Two users can comunicate between eachother, if they have a strong bond.
Sasuke makes a couple of handsigns: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Mind charge!
The panel shows Sasuke picturing Itachi in his mind.*
Itachi's voice is heard inside Sasuke's head: What happend, Sasuke?
Sasuke: Where are you, brother?
Itachi: On our way back to Konoha. We almost reached Konoha's gates.
Sasuke: Itachi i have news! Important news! Keep an eye opened for Yama! He is a traitor!
Itachi: Sasuke...are you sure? We are talking about the Yama who aided us in the wars against Raiden?
Sasuke: The only one. He is a double agent.
Itachi: Got it. I will take care of everything if i see him!
The scene shows Yama entering Konohamaru's office.
Yama: Well, Konohamaru? How did it go?
Konohamaru: I don't know yet. I'm waiting for Itachi's team to return.
Yama: Who did you sent?
Konohamaru: Itachi, Minato, Kakashi and Udon. They should be able to defeat any resistence. I'm sure that they will return with the artefact.
Suddenly the door from Konohamaru's office opens slowly.
Konohamaru: Who is it?
Udon enters the room with his eye patch taked off. The panel shows his Sharingan.
Konohamaru: Udon! You're back! Where are the others?
Udon: They didn't make it...they are all dead.*
Konohamaru gets up right away.
Konohamaru shouts: What do you mean that they are all dead?!?
Udon: We got attacked by some Strange being...
Yama makes a step forward: What kind of being?
Udon: I cannot describe it...but i can show you...
Yama: Show me?!?
Udon: I can use the Sharingan to show you exactly what i have seen. Maybe you know what this is about Yama...
Yama: Show me!
Udon looks straight into Yama's eyes.
Suddenly from the windows three people breaks in. Kakashi puts down Yama instantly, Minato places a seal on his forehead and Itachi surrounds him with Amaterasu flames. Udon backs off instantly. Yama breaks the short genjutsu casted on him by Udon.
Yama: What's the meaning of this?!?
Konohamaru: Itachi! I thought...What are you doing?!?
Itachi: Stay behind Konohamaru. He is a traitor to us and to the Celest City. Our death was just a lie in order to catch him off guard.*
Konohamaru: Traitor?!? No he is not! He helped us!
Yama lying: Konohamaru! Quickly! They are controled by that creature! They are not your shinobis! They are fakes!
Konohamaru instantly analyzez the situation and takes the worst decision. He makes a step towards Yama!
Yama: Trust me!
Konohamaru smiles: I do...
He spins and kicks Itachi right in the chest throwing him through a wall outside the building. Instantly he appears above Minato and tries to slash him with an electrical charged kunai, but the former Hokage manages to deflect the blow. Konoha,aru spins in the air and attemps a kick, but Minato barely blocks it with his two hands. Konohamaru uses the momentum to make a couple of handsigns.
Konohamaru: Earth releaee! Earth pillar!
A pillar emerges from the ground hitting Minato in the sole unprotected spot, his stomach. The man gets thrown through the window in the street next to Itachi who just regained his posture.
Itachi: Dammit...Naruto trained him well...he has quite a kick...
Minato: He is the Hokage afterall...this won't be easy...
Suddenly Kakashi and Udon lands near them.
Udon: Yama is still under your seal restriction, Minato. It means that we won't have to fight both of them, just Konohamaru.
Kakashi: And what's the bright side here? He is more powerful than us.*
Itachi: Individually..he is. But combined we might hold him back enough.
Kakashi: Enough for what?
Itachi: Enough for Sasuke to arrive.
He barely finishes speaking, and Konohamaru lands in front of them. The four of them take battle positions.
Konohamaru: You have made me very angry...trying to turn me against my allied. You will pay.
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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