Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
keep it up. enjoyable read.
i don't know if you will, but i would love to see how you have sasuke battle and possibly overcome his darkness.
personally, not a big fan of the hyuuga turn, but i understand why you're doing it. curious to see which uchiha you kill off (begging for it not to be shisui). i love the hinata-naruto part about him giving up on her as a husband. great romance/drama stuff there. personally, would have been awesome if you could have expanded on that a bit further (maybe a flashback). look forward to something resembling that in my fanfic, but a bit further down the road.
also, love the databook. mine is not as detailed yet. dude, if you're going to do all of you main characters... whoa. that's all i gotsta say.