Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
And it's up guys. Sorry that it took so long but i had to reasearch a bit. You will have a little surprise. New characters have been introduced. I hope that you will like it. And of course...as usually, more twists.
Naruto: Heaven, Hell and Earth.
The scene shows Naruto's office. He is once again Hokage, and once again ready to fight his way through another war. Sasuke enters the room.
Sasuke: We need to talk. Fast.
Naruto: What happend?
Sasuke: You know that the Uchiha clan has spies in the Hyuuga clan, right?
Naruto: I do. And i told you that i highly disagree with it.
Sasuke: Well, it seems that it comed in handy. One of our spies attended a meeting of the Hyuuga's last night. And he heard there something very interesting.*
Naruto: I'm sure that Hinata would have told me if there was such a thing.
Sasuke: That's the catch. Hinata wasn't at the meeting. They probably knew that she would tell you. Anyway...they belive that Raiden will leave...if they kill us. Both of us.
Naruto slowly rises up.
Naruto: Kill us? Are they out of their mind? They want to cause a civil war, or what?
Sasuke: That's exactly their plan.*
Naruto: Do the Uchihas know about this?
Sasuke: They do. And they made an oath to protect you and me with their lives.
Naruto: Dammit! At a time like this, all that we needed was a civil war!*
Sasuke: We must stop this, otherwise the Hyuuga and the Uchihas will slaughter eachother.
Naruto sighs: Well...i guess that we will have to step in and end this fight.
Sasuke: And what do you mean by ending this fight?
Naruto: I will stop the Hyuugas personally, without killing them. I don't want them to die, or the Uchiha clan.
Suddenly a voice is heard.
Unknown: I think that you got something else to do, Naruto.
Naruto turns around only to spot a man dressed in blue with dark and red stripes on his shirt and pants.
Naruto shocked: Q..Quintrix?!?
Sasuke looks at Quintrix and he gets a strange look on his face.*
Quintrix notices it.
Quintrix: That's right Sasuke. I'm not here to help you. Raiden has something over me. I must follow his orders. I'm truly sorry guys...
Naruto: What happend?
Quintrix: He got me. Yama betrayed us. And they've made me come after you. I'm sorry Naruto, but i had to break. Otherwise they would have found out something that nobody alive knows. Something that will change the tide of this war.
Quintrix: It's a location...where someone is sealed. I belive that Vishnu told you a story, about us, being The Creator's creations that went to the Earth in order to protect it. But...that doesn't mean that there aren't others out there. Besides us, there exists a place were heavenly creatures reside. Creatures that we used to be once. Only Vishnu kept that state of a superior being.
Naruto: What kind of creatures?
Quintrix: A human being has two sides: it's angelic part, and it's demonic side. Together they form your personality. The Creator separated himself from the Demonic part. Currently Raiden it's the most powerful man that you have ever met. And he only showed a fraction of his real power. So trust me guys...you're nowhere near his level at this moment.
Naruto:But what about the Creator?
Quintrix: The Creator wanders around on the Earth. That's all that we know.*
Sasuke makes slowly two steps towards Quintrix.
Quintrix: What are you doing?
Sasuke: Well...you said that you are not here to help us...so..why are you here Quintrix?
Quintrix: To recover one of the three treasures. I'm sorry...
Suddenly he dashes towards Sasuke and draws a long sword. Sasuke parries the attack with his own sword and breaks Quintrix's. The former god smiles and jumps out of the office.
Naruto shouts: Stay here Sasuke! I will go after him!*
Naruto quickly jumps after Quintrix. He spots the god running at a very high speed, away from him. Instantly Naruto gets covered in Kurama's chakra and dashes towards Quintrix.
Suddenly Quintrix stops, and as Naruto is closing in, the former god turns around and hits Naruto in the stomach.
Quintrix: Shifting technique!
A vortex appears around them and envelops them. A moment later, both Naruto and Quintrix are gone!
The panel shows Sasuke a few days later. He is looking at the horizont as an Uchiha lands behind him.
Random Uchiha: Sasuke-sama...it will start tomorrow night!
Sasuke: It's too early. But they probably want to make use of Naruto's absence and get rid of me.
Random Uchiha: That's what i thought too.
Sasuke: Good. Go and prepare everything.*
Random Uchiha: Aye, Sasuke-sama!
The Uchiha vanishes and leaves Sasuke alone.
Sasuke to himself: So it's finally starting...
Itachi: What's happening Sasuke? Where is Naruto?
Sasuke: He is hunting Quintrix as far as i know...what's going on?
Itachi: The Hyuugas will attack. With Naruto gone, you're in charge of Konoha.
Sasuke: Dammit...he picked the best moment to vanish.
Itachi: Aren't you worried about him?
Sasuke: Neah...he is Naruto. He can take anything.
The panel shows his actual concerned face, that he is trying to hide from Itachi's sight.
Sasuke: Well then...go! Prepare everything
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
We know the light...but when we shall create the dark?
Last edited by Vishnu; 05-15-2012 at 02:34 PM.