Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Hachimon changes the claymore into a long bow staff. He calmly walks up to Susanoo. Scene changes to Benten and Ryuden as they begin to inform the Ryun that it is safe to re-emerge from their shelters. They lead their followers to watch the battle between Hachimon and Susanoo.*
Fodder: Lord Benten, who is that person out there battling that god?
Benten: Lord Hachimon! *turning to the group* And you’ve been nestled under his nose all this time and you didn’t know about it.
Fodder: What do you mean?
Benten: Why we reside up on the mountain, further than any of you have tried to climb. *turning back to the battle* You’ve pledged allegiance to me and Ryuden. Then you should do so to him, because he will be our savior today.
*Scene shows Hachimon standing before Susanoo. Panel zooms out to show numerous ditches around Susanoo, with Susanoo only have room the size of a hula hoop to maintain his tornado in.*
Hachimon: You’re stuck now. And if you try to move, your vortex will lose velocity, allowing me to kill you then. What’s it going to be? Surrender, or Death… NOW!!!!
*Benten grins at hearing this.*
Benten in thought: You are so sexy right now.
*Susanoo cancels his tornado, meanwhile the rain begins to pour even harder now. Susanoo stands looking at Hachimon disgusted.*
Susanoo: You won’t be able to do that again.
Hachimon: You forgot, I am the god of war. No matter what you do, you can’t beat me in a fight.
*Benten is seen walking up beside Hachimon, wrapping her arm around his waist and resting her hand on his chest.*
Benten: I admit, compared to me, he does seem dumb as a rock. But no one can strategize on the battlefield like him. Kneel before us!
*Susanoo stands there.*
Susanoo under his breath: This wasn’t a part of the deal.
Benten yelling: KNEEL!!!!!!
*Hachimon extends his staff, forming a shortsword blade on the end as well. The tip of the blade is touching Susanoo’s throat.*
Hachimon smirking: Do it, and I will let you leave.
Susanoo scowling: You damn bitch. Next time will be different.
Hachimon: Next time cousin… Next time, after I’m through with you, I’m making your sister my bitch!
*Hachimon removes his staff/spear from Susanoo’s throat. Susanoo disappears. The Ryun charge the gods roaring their approval. Ryuden stays behind.*
Ryuden in thought: Well, well, well. Now that we’ve seen what type of warrior those two are, it’s time we continued on.
*Scene switches to a lab in Otogakure. Orochimaru is seen holding a flask, staring at it.*
*Fodder lab assistants enter the room.*
Fodder A: Is something wrong sensei?
Orochimaru: Just a minor setback?
Fodder B: How serious is it Lord Orochimaru?
Orochimaru: Not serious at all. I need you to go and get me these.
*Orochimaru hands the two a list.*
Orochimaru: Hurry along now.
*The fodders leave the lab.*
Orochimaru in thought: Your project is done Hachimon. But mine has only begun.
*Panel zooms out, showing three bodies in capsules of some liquid. Scene switches to Konoha, in the Hokage’s office.*
Tsunade slamming her fist down: What!!!! What are they doing there?
Shizune: I don’t know, we just received word today.
*Karin and Rina enter the office.*
Karin: Hokage-sama, Kirigakure has been attacked.
Tsunade: By whom?
Karin: A clone army of Yakushi Kabuto… wearing the robes of the Ryun.
*Tsunade goes wide-eyed.*
Karin: Mizukage-sama along with the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist stayed behind to make sure they we could evacuate without any harm. The rendezvous point was Port City in the Fire Country. *becoming teary-eyed* Please get Naruto to transfer the rest of the people to Port City. And… And then I need him to find my Juu…
Tsunade: I can’t. I can’t do that.
Karin yelling: Why not?
Tsunade: No one knows where Naruto is.
*Tsunade turns in her chair to face out the window.*
Tsunade: This is day number four.
*Karin falls to her knees.*
Tsunade: Shizune… Neji, Tenten, Lee!
*All four appear before Tsunade.*
Tsunade: Shizune, summon Kakashi and Gai.
Shizune: Should I also alert our communications team to set up another kage conference?
Tsunade: Not yet. Kirigakure has come to the Fire Country for help. Kakashi and Gai will attend to them, and then we will decide which direction we will take.
Neji: What about us Hokage-sama?
Tsunade: You three are to head to Iwagakure, and pick up from where Sai, Ino, and Choji left off.
Lee: Who will guard you while we are gone?
Tsunade: You are not my first bodyguards, and will probably not be the last. Do not fret. You head out in an hour.
Tenten: Tsunade-sama… what if we…
*Tsunade tosses a scroll to Tenten.*
Tsunade: If you come across them, unravel this scroll and finish the summoning on it. But not until you absolutely have to.
Tenten: Ok… but what will be summoned?
Tsunade: Who said it was a “what”? Neji, Lee, Tenten… If a period of twelve hours passes with no update, I will send reinforcements. I expect to be updated throughout your mission and when it has been completed. If your mission takes you out of Iwagakure, come back to Konoha with as much information as possible.
*After several hours have passed, the scene switches to Port City on the docks, with several fishing boats sailing in, full of the Kirigakure villagers. The next panel shows Neji, Tenten, and Lee running through a forest to Iwagakure. The last panel shows a person with only pants on sitting on thin air, floating two feet off of the ground.*
Last edited by jekyl_hyde; 05-19-2012 at 12:22 AM.